Date: 08/04/14 12:12 am Title: Chapter 16
Ok Billeam really IS being sourpuss. If I were on a planet alone with Tomek, I would be all up like "hellz yeah!" But I love their frottage anyhow, even if it ends with a punch in the face xD
And one more time - yay for being featured! I think I'm as happy as you are xD I LOVE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: lol yeah, I thought the word sourpuss was just perfect, cause of the puss part XD Billeam is pigheaded, but he has a reason, you'll see :D Thanks!! I'm still ecstatic about the feature! I want to stare at the front page all the time XD
Date: 08/04/14 12:03 am Title: Chapter 16
Congratulations for the feature ^_^
If I can be honest, I am not that surprised you got featured, this story is just pure AMAZING :D
You know what, this also got me wondering now, does FOE stands for something? ...felins over-erotic hahaha
Ok no seriously I wonder what it means xD
Tom dry humped Bill! That is sooo dog-like, my friend's tiny dog used to try to dry hump my leg when I was younger and I was so scared of it haha xD
So now I understand how you incorporate those non-catholic scenes hehe
Time to bet now, I say 2-3 days before Bill gives in...maybe less, specially if Tom continues to randomly grab him >.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so happy to be featured! :D lol maybe it means Fuck On End. lol kidding, I just thought it's a more exotic way of saying enemy :D Yeah, dogs dry hump everything!! I had a dog who preferred to dry hump this doll we bought for him, like all the time, rather than wanting to mate with female dogs. My dad said it was because he was a gay dog XD.rnYeah, now you get it, Aunt Janine is not telling everything word for word, or describing things in an exact manner, but however the readers can see the detailed scenes :D hehe, 2 or 3 days means, 2 or 3 chapters? lol let's see, then XD
Date: 08/03/14 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
Woo~!! They finally got a move on. It was sexy, but it also very accurately depicted their animal nature of needing to 'mate'.
Author's Response: Thank you! About time, right? XD
Date: 08/03/14 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 15
How exciting!! This story got featured! :D
Author's Response: I know!!! I still can't believe it!! This feels so awesome haha XD
Date: 08/03/14 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg I'm reviewing again because I just saw you got featured!!!! I have been waiting for this day! You're probably sick of hearing from me but I do love this story so much! So congrats xD Millions of kisses :*
Author's Response: Yay!!!! Thank you!! I'm soo happy to see FOE featured!! Oh, and I never get sick of hearing from you! I love it!! I only hope more readers are curious and entertained now that FOE is featured! XD *hugs and kisses to you too*
Date: 08/03/14 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 15
YOU'RE FEATURED! I'M SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW YOU HAVE NO IDEA!!! OMG!!! *runs around in circles* this is amazing omg!! You so deserve it!
Author's Response: OMG OMG I'm featured!! Thank you!!! it was such a pleasant surprise!!!! I did a double-take haha. XD
Date: 08/02/14 06:00 am Title: Chapter 15
My headache refused to go away the whole evening, but after a good night's sleep it's finally gone! yay!
First, I have to tell you how much I missed this story when I was in Norway, but luckily I kept myself too busy to think of it too often. When I got back in Sweden though I was so annoyed because the internet connection was terrible, so it took ages for me to open the page and finally get the chance to read. I was so impatient!
About the chapter!
I absolutely adored this one, it was so darn cute! I love how Tom is learning Felid and how he's too impatient to learn everything. I understand him though, verbs are boring.
When he said "Beautiful Billeam," do I even have to tell you how my heart melted? I was sitting there in the car, letting out a "aww" and my friends asked me what happened and I was like "shush, I'm reading!"
Luckily for me they know how crazy I am about fanfics, so they just rolled their eyes a bit and teased me with asking me random stuff to interrupt my reading :P So mean!
When Bill got out of that tree and ran towards Tom... I let out another of my happy little sounds, and my friends said something like "must be a good chapter" haha! They know me too well. It was so cute, and FINALLY BILL. And when they shared tent and Bill snuggled closer and stuff, like a cat actually does. I have my cats next to me right now, sleeping happily now when I'm back home, and they're both cuddling closer without even knowing it, so yeah, I love how you make him catlike in his sleep, it's so darn cute.
And what a nice change for Tom, even though it's also difficult for him. Always both ways since Bill isn't returning his feelings (yet)
And Bill is jealous of Tom's strength! You know I love that he's trying to do things on his own, and I love how helpful Tom is. I think it's because he's doglike. Dogs are in general nice and helpful, they want what's best for others while cats are more for doing things on their own, not needing anyone else. And that also works so well with when Tom kind of insulted him. Cats are proud, so is Bill, and yeah I love that so much.
Am I rambling too much? I'm almost done. I think.
Bill was so cute when he finally was better at something than Tom. Awe, so adorable. And he laughed! I understand why Tom couldn't hold back anymore.
AND HE KISSED HIM!
Bill must be so confused!
"“You cannot be that surprised, Billeam,” he said in Felid. Billeam remained silent. Tomek moved and Billeam stepped back warily. “You know why I saved you, don’t you? Why I couldn’t kill you?”"
LOVED LOVED LOVED this part. My feelings! I bet you could hear me squeal all the way to wherever you live. I was literally sitting in the car jumping up and down because it's so cute and omg I feel so sorry for them both because Tom loves someone who might not ever love him back and Bill suddenly gets to know why Tom didn't kill him and aaaaah I don't know what to do with myself!
Okay, I'm done now, I'm sorry, I got carried away this time. I just love this so much and I will be so impatiently wait for next chapter. Luckily I don't have to wait for very long this time, which is good 'cause I don't think my feelings could handle it.
Great chapter. No, great doesn't even start to describe it. Brilliant chapter, absolutely brilliant!
Author's Response: ok I opened THF, expecting the review, and started to read with my coffee. (it's coffee for me XD) Nice morning for me now haha! I'm sooo really happy how you manage to capture all the cat-dog details!! I've had pets all my life, cats and dogs among others, though I think of myself as a catgirl hehe, and I put dog and cat personality traits in the story and it's great when you see them. Again, thank you so much for taking the time to review and tell me what you liked about the chapter. Oh, and I'm jealous. Your friends rock, even with the interruptions,lol, I don't think I'd ever read fanfic in front of my friends, I don't think they'd understand :/ Anyway, hope I can keep you entertained with what's coming on Sunday hehehe XD
Date: 08/01/14 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lol, Tom is soooo not in love with him. I personally strongly believe that it's just pure lust. He doesn't know enough about Billeam's thoughts, dreams and (full) personality to love him. Or at least that's what I think.
Author's Response: Lol yeah. You’re right. It’s easy to confuse infatuation with love, although being in love is not the same as true love either, but just a phase in the beginning… Too complicated :P Hmm maybe “I’m in love with you,” would be more accurate? Though, I think still think “I love you” somehow sounds better, or more dramatic hehe. XD
Date: 08/01/14 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aww, Bill being so stubborn, he's so cute!
I feel so, so sorry for Tom still, it must be so difficult for him and I just want to tell Bill to stop being stubborn and relax a little.
But you know, it wouldn't be a very good story if everything was easy.
I've read both of the chapters I missed while being in Norway, but I'll review the other one a bit later, my head is killing me at the moment and I want to give you a long and well deserved review because I love this story so much, so this is it for now.
But great chapter, loved it!
Author's Response: Hi!! Welcome back! :D I hope you had a great time! Thanks!! I thought I wouldn't make it easy because they're enemies, so yeah, have to work it for it. Meanwhile, poor Tom shall suffer a little hehe XD You know I appreciate your long detailed reviews. Sometimes you notice things that I myself forgot about, and so I go and read my own chapter again! XD I really love it. Anyway, I hope you get well and that headache goes away soon. :)
Date: 07/31/14 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
My first language is (quebecois) french but I still thought spanish was hard xD you guys just speak too fast for me! But it's true that there are a lot of similarities, I feel like a lot of spanish words are like the french one but with an extra "a" or "o" haha. And yeah other than speaking it everyday, I also think you have to be very motivated to learn the language, otherwise it just won't stay in your head. I'm kind of scared to why you are feeling evil o.O El diablo...
Author's Response: Yeah we speak fast and we're really bad mouthed, like every adjective is a bad word haha. Of course, the motivation and need to speak it makes it easy to learn faster. :) I can't say much, but yeah, hehehe you'll see what I mean. >:)
Date: 07/31/14 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
Haha, it's okay, we'll see sunday then xD
I'm impressed by how fast Tom learnt to speak Felid in a few weeks. Me after a year of spanish classes, the only thing I remember is hola senor and culo hehe
I read the last few paragraphs like 5 times, I still can't believe Tom kissed him xD
Now, Bill will either, slap him, ignore him ooor...kiss him back?
I hope it's the last one >.<
Author's Response: Heee XD he took an intensive course lol! It's always easier to learn a new language if you practice it everyday. I learned French too some years ago. It was easy because it resembles Spanish. But without practice I remember almost nothing now u__u Now I can only say voulez vous couchez avec moi, ce soir? XDrnrnFunny that you hope it's the last one hahahaha Ohh, lordy, I'm feeling evil now haha.
Date: 07/31/14 09:51 am Title: Chapter 15
Aaaah!!! Yay! I think. Bow chika wow wow?
Author's Response: lol I had to google that cause I didn't get it! Everyone here can tell the future haha XD
Date: 07/31/14 12:00 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh man!! Tom finally said it!!!
Author's Response: Finally! haha took him 15 chapters XD
Date: 07/30/14 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ahh!!!! Great amazing chapter!!! I loved of it! And oh what will happen now that Tomek has said he loves him???? I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!!! Yeah, now it's about to get interesting eh?? lol haha
Date: 07/28/14 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hahaha that poem though, i know it's random and pointless but sometimes I wonder if the aunt actually tells the exact same words to jimmy when it's kind of a Nc-17 scene xD I can totally imagine a traumatized jimmy.
And shit, so bill still tried to kill him? oh god, why is he still such an angel to my eyes >.<
Probably his looks
And Tom, poor him, he need to talk to someone because he going a bit crazy both in love and mental state :o
That's what happens when you fall in love with the one who killed your best friend.
And YES long chapter for the next one, super excited xD
Author's Response: hehe, XD I actually had to write something about that in the story, about how it's possible to write the NC17 , even though the story is told to a kid. It is explained in next chapter actually, coming Wednesday, so be ready :D
Date: 07/28/14 06:31 am Title: Chapter 14
Aww the last line is so sad. But the song was hilarious. I can only imagine Bill's reaction if he understood.
Author's Response: thanks! I always put Tom in these heartbreaking situations lol. Yeah, that's the reason Tom sang that, cause he knew he wouldn't understand, but he knew Bill would be annoyed nonetheless XD.
Date: 07/27/14 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aw. I love that Tom is starting to fall in love.
Author's Response: Yeah, me too. Love to write about it XD
Date: 07/27/14 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay update!!!!!! I liked the amusement of this chapter. A little comic relief is always good xD They're progressing but I wish them to progress faster xD I do love their chemistry *_* *goes off singing Tomek's song* xD
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!! hehe it's gonna take some time, so patience. Won't take long, remember, you've got quick updates coming! XD
Date: 07/25/14 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Maybe change "further raising" to "further increasing". But that's the only suggestion I have to make ^^
Hehe, looove this story!
Author's Response: heheh done! Thanks :D
Date: 07/23/14 12:34 am Title: Chapter 13
I don't believe that poor Tomek knows what he is feeling. I am eager to see how they both come to this realization :) As always, I love this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks!! ^__^ I explain something about that on next chapter, about how he knows. Tune in next Sunday lol :D