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Reviewer: EngelTraumer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/14 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 22

But... but... but this must have a happy ending! Say it will be so! Billeam must realized how they both feel and somehow they have to live! I love u and I love thia story :*

Author's Response: Hi! I'm back from my trip. Just catching up I see hehe. Thanks for the reviews. It really makes me happy to know that you love and enjoy the story. More coming tomorrow hehe kisses :*

Reviewer: EngelTraumer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/14 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh oh this story makes me flail lol! Tomek is going to fight the Felids but will happen if he encounters Billeam on his mission? Agh this story must have a happy ending!

Reviewer: EngelTraumer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/23/14 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 20

NOOOOO!!!! It can't be! I'm so behind I need to catch up! I must go find out what happens!

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/14 12:30 am Title: Chapter 22

What Gustaf forgot to say though, is that it a suicide mission...unless there is a Felid hottie to save your ass haha. And that kiss * heart melts*
For once, I have no idea what could happen next, no guess, nothing :/
And God, next next sunday is the update :O
I must be strong.

Author's Response: Hi! Oh, yes of course he forgot that haha, but not even Tom thought he'd be saved. I'm glad you can't guess, means I managed a little mystery. I'm back so next update tomorrow Sunday :D

Reviewer: Dark_horse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/14 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 22

Omg!! I can't wait to see how this war turns out when the dust settles! And yay!! They finally kissed. It was like bitter sweet farewell. I want them to end up together soooooooo~ bad!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks! Glad you liked the chapter hehe. As usual can't say anything, so just continue reading and see how things turn out :D

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/14 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh, and enjoy your trip!:D

Author's Response: Thanks! I did. ;D I get homesick pretty soon though when I travel, only three days this time and I was wanting to go back home lol.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/14 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 22

Hmm, I think I start to get some things now. After rereading all chapters and you know, taken the time to actually READ everything and not just be impatient to get to know what will happen. I still have many questions of course, but this just keeps on getting better.

I'm really tired so I don't have the energy to leave you a super long review, but wow, Bill kissed him! BILL kissed TOM. That was perfect! So perfect! And the part with how Bill has changed was great, I loved that.

I love this so much, I can't even explain it, and now I have to wait so long for next chapter *sobs* but it'll be worth it, I know it will. Thank you so much for this update!

*goes back to her corner to impatiently wait for next chapter*

Author's Response: Hi! I'm back from my trip! :D What have I missed? heheh. I'm glad you liked the kiss part ^__^ I made you wait long for it, didn't I? So I hope it was worth it. Thanks again for telling me how much you like the story. I never get tired of hearing it of course. Hopefully you'll find the answers to your questions in the coming chapters. I'll post next update tomorrow at night my time.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/14 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 21

I've actually been reading the first few chapters again to see if I can figure it out x) I have an idea... but yeah.. I'll just wait and see if I'm right. I hope different doesn't mean sad, I'm such a sucker for happy endings even though I also love it when the ending is realistic and sometimes a happy ending just won't fit.. but yeah.. I'm sure I'll love whatever ending you have for us ^-^

Author's Response: I do hope so lol

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/14 11:18 am Title: Chapter 21

No! No, no, no, no! NEIN! If you kill him I'm gonna... well... sit in my corner and cry my eyes out. There's not really anything else I can do..

But but but, he has to see Bill again. I don't trust aunt Janine anymore *glares* but like Jimmy said, she can't tell him such a sad story.

Or well.. maybe she'll give him a happier ending that you'll give us...

I'M ALL CONFUSED RIGHT NOW!

I have so many feelings going on that I don't even know what to do with myself. I'm SHAKING, literally shaking.

*takes a deep breath*

I was very happy to see Andraz again, we didn't see him much but somehow I liked him anyway. He seems like a very good friend.

I wonder why the Felids waited so long... a part of me thinks that maybe they hadn't given up on getting Bill back, since he seemed to be very passionate about killing the dogs maybe they waited for him.. but somehow I'm not sure that would make sense.. it's a war, you lose people in wars.. so hmm..

I can't believe they're giving up, but on the other hand, their leader seems to be a kind one, like, the hope is out so lets not force my people to fight a war they can't win but spend their last days with their loved ones. That was somehow.. sweet? Nice? I don't know.

I need Tom to meet Bill again ._. And I'm praying for a happy ending, even though I don't really see HOW this can ever end happy.. maybe (hopefully) you'll surprise me.

EARLY UPDATE! YES! THANK YOU! After leaving us like this I think we deserve it! (But knowing you you might leave us with something even worse...)

Great chapter, I absolutely loved it and it was well needed after another crappy day. Thank you!

*goes back to her corner to wait for next chapter*

Author's Response: lol I read the Neins! in Bill's voice. XD I think your questions will be answered with the story. Even since the first chapter I give a little clue hehe. It's like a confusing movie, where you have to watch again to understand the details you missed. :) I tried to do something different with this story, so I only hope you guys don't kill me, or permanently ban me from the site lol kidding (not) well maybe...XD Early update indeed!! I do owe you guys, I think I've tortured you long enough. Thanks again for the encouraging review! I can go back to work with a smile.

Reviewer: Dark_horse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/14 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

No~!! Such a cliff hanger!! Why do you torment us? Loved it.

Author's Response: lol thanks. I have a thing for cliffhangers (cause they torment readers hehe) :)

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/14 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 21

...parted forever from the planet? Hahahaha that's the best
My heart was beating like crazy while I read this chapter, I could feel it my chest xD
I had to reread some of the sentences twice because I was just so excited and thinking about the story at the same time as I was reading haha
I can finally sleep now but before...when Gus said it is a suicide mission...did he mean that it was very dangerous or is it...really a suicide? I'm sorry I just worry so much about Tom :3
And friday uptade? Yes!

Author's Response: Hi! Heehe thanks. I'm so glad you find the story exciting. ^__^ and yup, you won't have to wait much for next update. Gustav means that Tomek most definitely won't come out alive. :/

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/14 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 20

To answer your question - I'm not doing too good right now ^^ remember how I told you I had a crappy day? Well, I had just gotten to know a close friend of mine had died, so I have a hard time dealing with it.


On a much happier note, I felt I have to tell you that I'm even more excited over next chapter than next episode of THTV. Is that enough to tell you how much I loved this chapter? And the whole story? Well it's absolutely brilliant, I just can't wait to get to know what will happen!

Author's Response: Omigosh! I'm so sorry!! :( I don't know what to say *hugs you* hope you'll be okay soon. Really? hahaha oh gosh, that's like, the best review ever haha, thanks so much! I feel like writing a new story now lol. I'm dying to see the next THTV episode. Bill's laughter just melts me. I think I rewinded that last teaser about, well I lost count. I'm happy if my story brings a smile to you during this time, as I'm sure THTV does too :) Oh, and I also can't wait to know what you think of what's coming hehe. :) *hugs again* stay strong.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/14 09:20 am Title: Chapter 20

Better not be!!! Aww I wanted a kiss :)

Author's Response: Yeah, that was a perfect moment for a kiss, wasn't it? :/

Reviewer: Dark_horse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/14 07:45 am Title: Chapter 20

What?!

Author's Response: lol yup, sad but true u__u don't kill me yet, though. :)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/14 06:20 am Title: Chapter 20

Nu uh, I refuse to believe it's forever, *glares at aunt Janine*, you better be lying, woman!

I loved this chapter, it was so sad but so perfect. It's understandable that Bill was angry with himself and as usual I felt so sorry for him, he's having such a hard time accepting all this.

And then we have poor Tom, who once again got rejected, and when he was so happy in the beginning as well *sigh* poor thing.

And Tom's crying :( it broke my heart, again. Oh my god, I just wanted to hug him, poor thing :( but what he did, it was absolutely amazing, attacking his own kind and sending Bill away like that... dammit Bill, now you have to understand that he LOVES YOU, okay? He. Loves. You. So if you ever meet him again you better be nice :(

I hope Tom won't be in too much trouble now... but yeah, how the hell is he going to explain this? If I were the other Canids I would probably kill him... but you're not that cruel, are you? Okay, I know you won't tell but you know... I refuse to believe this story will have such a sad ending... they have to see each other again ._.

Great chapter! I absolutely loved it, even though I'm now sad and going to eat chocolate to feel better..

*goes to her corner to wait for the next chapter*

Author's Response: Hey you!! How r you doing? I love how you get the feeling of every chapter. Every time I break Tom's heart, I break your heart too aww, but I think that's the point of my writing, getting the readers involved or at least entertained. When I read a story with a sad ending, I throw away the book in rage. But you can't throw away your phone or your computer, right? :P Anyway, let's see if you like how things turn out. :)

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/14 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 20

Sad that they had to be separated for being alive and fine! :-(

Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, Tomek had to let Billeam go in order to save him :/

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/14 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 20

The aunt is like obviously lying...right? Right? ;(
Like next chapter, she's like hahaha I'm just joking Jimmy, they don't really part forever '_'

Hmm now Tom needs a good excuse to his friends to where in the world did Bill go and well...why they suddenly only have one ship left xD

I find it so cute and romantic that Tom would wake up and let Bill sleep while he does all the work xD but not more roamantic than attacking his own kind to save Bill, must have been so hard for him to let him go....not forever (-_-)
And yeah, personally I think you're worst than evil :P

Author's Response: hahahah you've gotten real good at guessing! XD Yeah, only now did Billeam see proof of Tomek's love, and not just the lust hehe. Yeah, I'm evil, that's why I always apologize in advance hehehe

Reviewer: mapher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/14 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 20

Okay this is not okayyy!!!

Author's Response: hehe I know. All I'm saying is, it's not over till it's over, okay? :)

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/14 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 19

On the next episode of FOE: Bill slaps Tom for coming inside him haha
Or maybe say I love you back? With all these cliffhangers, I can't help but always try to guess what is going to happen next >.<
It's my way to cope with it hehe
Oh wait, maybe there will be a kiss next???

Author's Response: hahahah *punches dog* Not inside, you dumb dog! lol. XD I love to keep you guessing, but despite the obvious Bill/Tom spoiler I try to make my stories unpredictable hehe. You'll have to wait and see to know what happens :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/14 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 19

Ah, I noticed a correction that was lost. "You’d rather I let the beast here then, close to us" should be "let the beast lie* here"

*wriggles in anticipation for the next chapter*

PS: And oh, on the previous review, about the depression, that's actually common for suffering individuals to seem like they're happy. It's a way of hiding it/coping with it.

Author's Response: Yup, sounds much better hehe, fixed it! I had a friend from high school who had depression and committed suicide too. And she had help, at least I knew afterwards, but none of us ever knew she had that diagnosis, so yeah, you're right. :/

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