Date: 02/01/26 09:06 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow! Thank you for this amazing story and for the happy ending!! I LOVED it, I loved the moment when they went to the signing of TH and Jimmy saw the twins and knew it’s surely them maybe in another universe and told them that it’s great they can love each other aww :,) And we all know that they do, in any universe that matters and especially ofc in real life :,) Now I’m gonna see if there’s more fics of yours I haven’t read and then later I’m surely going to read this one again, GREAT work friend! Xoxo
Author's Response: Hi!! Thank you so much for your comments on my stories. I read them all and at the same time remembered! It’s been so long ago when I wrote them, it feels like someone else wrote them lol. But still receiving reviews as nice and detailed as yours really brightens my day. Thank you so much!
Date: 02/01/26 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 26
Oh heheh I didn’t read the full chapter before I left the other comment, so Georg was a decoy prince got it :) I’m happy I got what I wanted regarding Andy and Gustav knowing about them and being sort of accepting :,) And they’ve also had sex which I also wanted so you and I are twins baaaabe (in our wants and thinking hehehe)
Date: 02/01/26 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 26
Sorry but now I’m confused because the prince seamed to be the other felid / the one Andy was awestrucked by in the start and that Tom didn’t seam to understand that persons beauty and then when he saw Bill who was presumed to be the fighting leader he saw Bill as more beautiful? Or did Tom misunderstand who Andy meant when he talked about the prince or are there 2 princes or what? Haha (a)
Date: 02/01/26 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh WOW! The PASSION and LOVE I mean wow I can’t do this they’re so beautiful together :,) I love this story so much! I really hope that their species either become allies or friends or at least stop fighting (surely won’t happen sadly) or that the twins flee together to some nice planet to live on just them 2
Date: 02/01/26 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 22
Awwww the in love baby’s saving each other and finally Bill seams to be more aware of his feelings/love and the passionate kiss oh wow :,)
Date: 02/01/26 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 19
Ugh so beautiful and hot :,)
Date: 02/01/26 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ahahah they’re so funny these horny bastards, please just kiss your man Bill -.- haha
Date: 02/01/26 07:12 am Title: Chapter 17
Gosh and WOW such a hot scene when Tom made Bill cum just from praise and dirty words (and a bit of bump and grind obviously), but it seamed to have mainly have been the praise and dirty talk though, which was very hot ;b the “I want to taste the most secret place of you” or what Tom said was so damn melting hot ugh I love when Tom rims his Bibi (a).. I’m glad that Tom finally got some self respect though and told Bill off for how evil and proud he’s being towards him and the dog species towards the end of the chapter tho’ and now the ball is in Bills hands, I wonder why he seam to hate the dogs SO so much… must be brainwashed ways or something… cause it’s very obvious that he’s also falling for Tom and it’s happening more and more… I still wish to read about some sort of thoughts or opinions from Bill about how gorgeous and attractive Tom is though… Cause he very much IS, and it would be nice to read such things from Bill too and not just Tom
Date: 01/31/26 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hahah WOW they sure are a DOG and CAT in this one mrrrr ;) it was absolutely passionate and hot and adorable and funny at the same time… you keep on delivering! It was actually hilarious how Tom got so frenzied and feral he plopped onto Bill on the shore and force dryhumped Bill ahahahah!! xD truly damn DOG ;) And it’s not like Bill was truly against it atleast not subconsciously and he didn’t bother to truly stop him or show that he was thaaaat against it more truly shocked and I guess at odds with himself since they’re supposed to be enemies and I’m sure he’s a virgin perhaps also 😂 🔥 Also the tent scene towards the end was also very smexy… I hope there’s more, regarding it being impossible for humanoid “animals” of different races to mate I hope and suppose it means them being able to have babies right? Because since they’re sort of humans in their anatomy they should be able to have sex otherwise right? Like full on gay / penetrative sex? I hope so atleast and it seams like Tom at least very much hopes so too (a) hahah! I don’t know if you will write that but it would be very awesome, it’s just something about all this that is very hot and forbidden fruit like with many aspects hitting home of them being enemies at first - in nature, being feline (cat/panthery ish) and canine (dog/wolf), how they’re id.twins and soulflames FR and just everything being deliciously forbidden fruit but so right :} I wish to read more stories like this one from you if you still write Toll even if it’s a short one / oneshot or like a 3-4 chaptered one because mayn you can WRITE c7;a039; 🔥 (y) xoxo. The quality on many recent toll fics on mainly wattpad and such aren’t often at all very good / the same as you and other OG toll writers on here for example just saying, could use more new stuff from the OG’s, more one shots even and yeah
Date: 01/31/26 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awwww this chapter was beyond adorable and full of that delicious thawing enemies to lovers chemistry ugh! I love how cute Tom is in his devotion to Bill and how absolutely in love he is with him, how he called him beautiful and Bill hot all flustered and how Tom is learning Bills language to get closer to his kitty cat awww :,( :,) And it’s so cute that they wake up every morning cuddling cause Bill wants to unconsciously but he still doesn’t stop sleeping with Tom in the tent, Omg and the first kiss has happened gaaah! I’m so hyped to read what’s gonna happen now next :,>
Date: 01/31/26 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ahahah Toms song! 😂 😆 come on Bill… how can you be a such a feral kitty and not be more overcome by need to be dominated by the sexiness that is Tom especially a “alpha” - like stud/wolffish Tom who is also a fierce fighter and protector.. I hope we’ll soon read about Bill also being overcome by heated feelings for Tom :> And also I hope they can communicate more or a bit better soon, ashhh they drive me crazy with the slow burn and coldness from Bill even though I like slow burn I guess I get a bit desperate to read some passion and luuuv when there’s less then half of the story left (a) it says a lot about how good and exciting this is though :)
Date: 01/31/26 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yeah thank you I was getting real angry with Bill for yet AGAIN trying to kill Tom… cunning little puss 🦊 🐈r05;n35; x,D But it IS understandable yet again especially with the language barrier also but I’m relieved that they’re maybe making a bit of progress now and I’m also overjoyed that Tom already is recognizing that he’s probably in love with his Bibi :,) I hope Bill also quickly recognizes his own feelings, iii I can’t even stop reading to take a nap this is so good
Date: 01/31/26 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
Stupid Bill trying to kill poor Tom when he was saving his life AGAIN risking his own gahhh x,D I’m floored by Toms patience but of course it is his soulmate after all and I guess Tom knows and feels it deep down too (a) I hope Tom will pay him back by later on “giving it to Bill like a drawer that doesn’t close” like the Latinos / Spanish speaking Toll-readers exclaim directly translated to English when they wish upon heavy, rough sex between Tom & Bill ahahah!!
Date: 01/31/26 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
“ He was unnerved with the cat triggering his mating instinct like mad” oh that horny little dog Tomato 😅😜😏😏🔥🔥 We all are waiting for/wanting you 2 smexy feral boys to mate and mate like the instinct is going mad we understand we understand :,D
Date: 01/31/26 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
So, you’re a GREAT writer to the point one almost believes that parts of this story is an adaption in the form of you copying some sequences from books like perhaps Star Wars or alike and changing out some stuff and characters because it’s just insanely well described and built in many scenes, wonderful. The tension is yummy as well, but one does get a bit frustrated with the anger and rudeness from Bills part. Or it’s very understandable because they’re both used to hating each others species and wanting to murder any mutt or puss on sight ;) But a lot of that is clearly learned ways and brainwashing and ignorance, and after everything that has happened they now have own experiences that must shape new ways to feel and see things, which they have and are starting to and it’s probably a slow burn which is believable and nice and all… it’s just that Bill is supposed to be so intelligent and a traveled fighter but he’s bad at the common language? I wish he weren’t, maybe he’ll pick up on it quickly though, and also that we aren’t noticing anything about him noticing how gorgeous Tom is, but maybe that will come and the anger and fright is still blinding him right now, and also he should be somewhat thankful that Tom gave him one of his lives UPON saving him from there? But I guess he is too scared and suspicious about the reasoning for Tom saving him, but anyway he saw how Tom tried to kill him before so he should know that there’s a interesting and not malicious reason for Tom to save him and even giving one of his own lives to Bill, maybe Bill didn’t understand that though… and also I thought he realized or picked up on how much Andy seamed to have mattered to Tom or how devastated Tom became when he killed Andy, YET he helps Bill now, so Bill should be a bit more cooperative and nicer I think (a) Hihi but I guess it’s all in due time… if Bill knows a little or the common language didn’t he understand Toms compliment about him being beautiful? I hope he did.. I really like their chemistry that’s slowly building in a true enemy’s to lovers fashion and I hope there will be some really nicely described passionate scenes ahead, now I’ll continue reading I love this and hope that none of the twins die in this story, I didn’t think I saw any major character death warnings or tags so I’ll trust they don’t die mmkey (a) also sorry for long review but I had lots to say, even if you maybe don’t even check this website so many years later but anyways ;)
Date: 01/31/26 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Omg I LOVE the twist that you made us think that the prince was Bill before this and now it’s clear that Bill is actually the skilled fighter leader… And I was also a bit disappointed at first that Tom didn’t seam to be that awestruck by Bill at first glance but it was of course because the Prince wasNT Bill ihihi! Love love love that Tom was so floored by Bill that even though he was in vengeance mode he still hesitated immediately when he saw Bill awww
Date: 03/18/23 02:23 pm Title: Prologue
Ahh, yes! I am a whopping 44 (but I age like a vampire and although with bills/job I'm super responsible, I'm a total gooball otherwise - so NO ONE believes my age lol!) and although I think most have heard of/seen The Princess Bride, I absolutely am familiar with Enemy Mine! Pretty cool how you got the plot ideas!
Date: 03/12/23 06:35 pm Title: Prologue
I have left a review on some other fics of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! This is one of the few drastic AU's that I've read - meaning like creating a whole new world and original plots etc. OMGGG I am a huge sucker for the "enemies to friends to lovers" plots and Tom freakin' humping on Bill while Bill was all mortified had me rolling! Super cute and fun!
Author's Response: lol thank you! Many of the stories I wrote back in the day were inspired by movies. This one for example was a mixture of the princes’ bride with Enemy mine. Very old movies but classics.
Date: 03/06/21 07:26 pm Title: Epilogue
this was amazing. the whole story was amazing. i don't even have words. i should have read it ages ago!!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much!! I’’m so glad you enjoyed reading it! Always makes me happy to know :D I still remember writing this. Good days lol
Date: 03/06/21 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 27
you have no idea how many emotions I've had while reading this!