Date: 10/21/14 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
I loved this story so much!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/08/14 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
AAAAH. Best fic ever (after Limelight). I love your writing, this was a good ending.
Author's Response: Thank youuu!
Date: 10/04/14 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
I reallly can't imagine Bill in his fifth's!!! totally not xD
I'm sad and happy that everything ended so great to all of them! :D
Author's Response: I'm sure he's gonna be fabulously fifty haha. Thank you for reading and your comments!
Date: 10/03/14 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your writing & just found this story - so I'll be reading for a while! Xoxoxo. Since I'm, ahem, older, I like stories where the twins are older too. Then I don't feel quite like such a pedo. ;)
Author's Response: Lol dunno how old you actually are but I get that ;) I'm the twins' age and I just can't always relate to teen stories anymore. Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 09/27/14 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Boyfriend? Sooooo cute!
I missed it girl!
Date: 08/10/14 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
I read Limelight and obviously loved it and in my boredom I searched to see what else you've been writing and found this. I absolutely love it, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/23/14 04:02 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm enjoying this story very much. You are the only writer I read that doesn't write twincest. Looking forward to more. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update soon (life is busy atm so... gotta set priorities)
Date: 07/18/14 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
I like Jake better.
Date: 07/18/14 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this is so sweet. I love Bill's character. And the girls are precious.
Date: 06/30/14 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
No Nathan
Author's Response: I'll consult Bill on his opinions on a polygamous lifestyle :p
Date: 06/27/14 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
Nathan is a super great guy, but Bill has to be with Jake, much better couple xD
Author's Response: Aw but Nathan is a good father for sure and gets along with the girls already.
Date: 06/23/14 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
No worries. I think my words came out a little more harsh than I intended! I just love my Ohio state but I truly was not mad about what you said. I do so love this story and can't wait for more chapters!
Date: 06/23/14 09:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Nathan is cool but he's already connected with Jake. But before he makes a fInal decision, he needs tp have a serious tall with Jake to see if he really wants a commitment. And he needs tp be honest with BOTH of them and tell them he's dating them both. It's better he tell them now before they find out from someone else and he loses them both!
Date: 06/23/14 09:30 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this story and love the dilemma of liking 2 guys! Looking forward to more! But I did take offense to that Ohio comment. Ohio is a great state to live in. I love my city! If you're not from Ohio or have never been here, maybe you should come visit before you call it a shit hole, even in fiction!
Author's Response: I didn't mean to offend you. I have no idea about the US and I think neither does Bill outside LA/California, Vegas and NY. Somehow Ohio was the first state I (and he in this case) could think of. I'm sure there's nothing wrong with Ohio ;) was just a reference. Could have said Iowa, Nebraska or any other state outside the 'famous' ones. rnThanks for your reviews, I'm happy you like the story. Bill should come clean about dating two guys and I can tell you it's gonna be messy so stay tuned!
Date: 06/21/14 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Jake, surely! Nathan is a great guy but Jake is the best!
Date: 06/18/14 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yeeeeeah! o/ Bill and Jake together are the best... :-)
Date: 06/18/14 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story!!! Can`t wait for more! And Bill is such an awesome father!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah I'd think he totally would love his kids and tries to raise them well with respect for people, for money and for everything around them yet at the same time wants to spoil them rotten.
Date: 06/18/14 01:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/02/14 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm enjoying this very much. Looking forward to seeing where you take it! :)
Author's Response: Happy to hear that :)