Date: 11/09/14 09:19 pm Title: i|i
Wtf? I did laugh though. :)
Author's Response: Hii. It was literally a spare of the moment type thing to help me get my muse back for writing since it comes and goes all too quickly these days, aha. I'm glad it made you laugh though, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, < 3
Date: 04/26/14 12:45 am Title: i|i
I don't know about a medal. It was cute, and funny;)
Author's Response: Oh you do, you really deserve a medal after enduring this terrible attempt at humor/crack, but I'm really glad you liked this and found it funny enough to see it out to the very end. Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/25/14 01:02 pm Title: i|i
This story made me laugh so many times, first because I love Georg, he's such a brilliant character and his rumours and gossips are absolutely amazing. I mean, I hate rumours but at the same time I can be very gossipy while talking to the right person (like you, gossiping with you is the best) and his way of coming up with new shit (and blaming it on Gustav LOL) was absolutely amazing, LOVE IT.
Bill! If you flirt like he does, I'm sorry to say that you'll be single for a very long time. Or wait, you won't, because just like Bill you're so fricking adorable that people would love you anyway.
I'm getting off topic...
Anyways, Bill! He made me laugh so, so much. He had me CRYING a few times, I couldn't breath, that's how much I was laughing! I have a terrible humour sometimes and I really enjoyed his crappy pick up lines. If someone came and tried to use them on me I would fall immediately, just because the person could make me laugh.
The ending was better than brilliant. I LOVED how you ended it with Georg gotten to taste some of his shit with all those rumours. "Oh." HAHAHA I loved it. I want a whole story with your Georg xD
Amazing job darling, I love this and I love you!
Author's Response: GEORG was my favourite to write about by far. He literally made writing this story worthwhile in the end. (We're such gossipers, I know) His rumors were so hard to believe though, which made it all the more funnier, aha! Poor Gustav < / 3 He always gets the shit! BUT BUT BUT, if you're as funny as Bill, he can date the shit out of me? :P I approve of stupid, funny, cute Bill. Omg, I know right? Nobody's ever used this type of shit on me, but I'm sure if that day ever came; I'd be on the deck - SOBBING < 3 Georg had to get a taste of his own medicine, I mean - Tom did try to warn him about Klaus and Maria being brother and siser, but Georg interrupted him so Tom let him run wild with his new rumor, aha! < 3 I love you, thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/25/14 08:55 am Title: i|i
OMFG YOU UPLOADED IT!!! *o*
Hahahahahaha. So good.. Our pickup lines are the bomb :D
Love ya babe xxx
Author's Response: I did, I did. I improved it, Sandra read it and then I was a little more satisfied with it, so I uploaded it and this is for YOU. Our pick-up lines were so fucking good, Kezzie < 3 I love you too, thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/25/14 08:04 am Title: i|i
Hi Hon. I honestly love this, as I have done right from the start. I love how you worked on it and improved it. Honestly, I thought it was fucking hilarious right from the beginning. you are a wonderful writer. i love how you are so descriptive -- it lets me imagine the scenery perfectly without any issues. I can relate with Tom though, if I had a friend like... no wait, I do believe I have a friend like Georg and even though its entertaining sometimes, it can be so annoying. like i care about all that stuff xD hahaha, i like how Georg is all about the latest gossip and doesnt understand it when Tom says that it cant be true! that was just hilarious xD I love how karma came biting him in the ass! I wish that could happen more IRL. haha amazing ending honey! and I already told you what I thought of the pick-up lines. They were brilliant, so fucking brilliant. xD You are a true genius, baby! I love that Tom was so crancky at first but then slowly, slowly let Bill get on his good side. I loved how you ended that one as well! ^^ This was such a delight to read. You are a fantastic writer, and I will totally fav this story. loveu babe, a bunch!
Author's Response: Hi baby. I honestly didn't see what you saw in this, when I was going to scrap it because I hated the first few versions I wrote of it, you egged me on to improve and make it better, so I owe this to you, THANK YOU! < 3 I'm glad you loved Georg, he's by far my favourite person in this, the things he comes out with is so fucking stupidly hilarious. He was really fun to write < 3 The pick-up lines and Tom didn't mix very well, but he came around in the end (even though he still hated them aha) I love you too, thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/25/14 06:57 am Title: i|i
Wow, I loved it. I found it funny, I never knew there were so many pick up lines. I'm pleased u shared it, it's much better than u think :) xx
Author's Response: Awe, I'm so glad to hear that ^.^ There's a shit ton online, I was really surprised when I looked some up, I mean; who thinks of these things? Some are plain awful, aha < 3 Thank you:3 you make me real happy, you knew how nervous and panicky I was when I uploaded this, goddamn. It was such a challenge on its own uploading it! Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/25/14 04:13 am Title: i|i
Loved it!
Tom hates Bill but in the end he gave in *^*
Can't wait for the sequel! I'll listen to the song too...
Thanks so much for a great story! (:
Author's Response: Tom really had no choice whether to give in or not, Bill is such a persistent little fucker and to be honest, I'd date Bill simply for his humor in this. < 3 I hope I don't disappoint you for the sequel, it's really daunting since I got so much amazing feedback on the two-shot and now I have to stay at that standard for you all, I just hope I can do it! I hope you enjoy the song though ^.^ Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/24/14 11:07 pm Title: i|i
The pick-up lines had me in stitches and then when Bill kept spitting them out one after the other I thought I'd pee myself. Great story. :)
Author's Response: Omg, I'm so glad they did. I did have a giggle to myself when I found them online, some are too good to be true man, I mean; who uses these things? < 3 Bill's personality was really fun to write and the second from last section when he's literally spewing them at Tom, one after the other was particularly tricky to write, yet so much fun < 3 Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/24/14 09:24 pm Title: i|i
giggles! so many giggles! i rather liked the line about the magic watch.
Author's Response: I'm really glad this managed to make you laugh, I thought it was too over the top, aha! < 3 The magic watch line is one of my favourites too, I'd never heard of it until I looked up some pick-up lines on the internet and I knew I had to add it in here somewhere! Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/24/14 07:35 pm Title: i|i
This was hilarious! Georg here is priceless. I had a giggly reading time, as giggle as this Bill. :)
Author's Response: Awe, thank you, I'm really glad this little thing made you laugh (I wasn't sure it would when I uploaded it, aha). Georg was my favourite to write about, you've got no idea. His personality literally mirrors one of my old friend's and that shit does get annoying after a while, but thinking back on it now, some of the stuff that she said still makes me laugh. < 3 Thank you for reading and reviewing xxxxx
Date: 04/24/14 06:26 pm Title: i|i
Hilarious.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you thought so ^.^ Thank you so much for reading and reviewing xxxxx