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Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 9

baHAHAhmmm hihihih I'm all squealy now ;)

“I'll be the one teaching the class,” Tom smiled.

“I'll be the one mentally undressing you,” Bill said

that girl, was a strike of brilliance !!!
you fit those things in so well

and I'm happy to see the relationship (can I call it that) evolving, it's so cute

and death over boring teacher dad

hopes for a new chapter
much love
Luce

Author's Response: *blushes* Oh, why thank you ^^

Reviewer: Volatile Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

A little short, but still wonderful as usual. God, I'd give my middle nut to have such a teacher.

Author's Response: Are ye nuts? Uh, let out of the cage again... Sorry :P Thanks, I'll try keeping them longer ;)

Reviewer: Domiixrawr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

Ugh parents are so stupid.
My dad is the same way.
He wants me to be the cheerleader with the football star boyfriend.

Pfttt. Me and Bill has some stuff in common then. :]

ANYWAYS! I'm loving this story omg.
Don't stop!

Author's Response: Some parents, eh? Mine wants me to be a math- and sciencegeek! :O Imagie? :P Thank you :)

Reviewer: Buyyouadrank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like how Tom thinks Bill calling him "Mr. Kaulitz" is sexy :)

Author's Response: ;D

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

*looks around suspiciously for paradox, and kisses alva bear passionatly* =DD

Author's Response: Grahaha! That is the coolest evah! *blushes under the kiss* Man, me wife better not read this :O <3

Reviewer: kaiiia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aw, poor Billy.:( I don't like his dad, not at all. I'm seriously in love with this story, more pleaaase.

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 9

“I'll be the one teaching the class,” Tom smiled.

“I'll be the one mentally undressing you,” Bill said in a low, husky voice




Did I tell you how much I LOVE this???
If I have not then...I LOVE THIS!!!
God I was away from dear internet and computer for 3 days and this really REALLY made my day!!

*kisses and huggles and more kisses*

Update soon please!!!

And this should be featured!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, I actually noticed your absence. Welcome back! :D Thank you ^^

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh! I want Bill to undress Tom for real and not just mentally!
Loved it Alva!

Author's Response: Haha! Don't we all? :P Thank you.

Reviewer: Discomforts child Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 9

“I'll be the one mentally undressing you,”

Oooh, I LOVE pervy Bill. =)

Author's Response: Hihi, aye ^^ Thanks.

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

hihi:D
they are really so sweet together!

Author's Response: Glad you feel that ;D

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

ooooo cant wait for that chapter!!
update sooon!!
xoxox

Author's Response: :) I willidilly.

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 8

HOT!!!!!

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: onlya_hurricane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow. Tom is so much fun in this. And I LOVED the spanking. ;) I wish I had a teacher like Tom in my school!

Author's Response: Corporal Punishment ftw! :P Thanks.

Reviewer: unendlichkeit15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 8

*iamdeadyouknow?*

SERIOUSLY

OO'

that is too sexy for words.. just keep the job.. and .. WOW

PS: I loved Tom's surrender [ I don't really remember in which chapter it was]

Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you xD ;D;D

Reviewer: Cold_Whisper Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 07:53 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh My Fucking god!
could you be more hotter than that??
geez!

Author's Response: And ironically, I'm freezing...! :P Thanks :)

Reviewer: BILLBOY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 06:06 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh it was amazing.
like a torture
slow and sweet.
i m waiting for your update.
you kill me slowly....

Author's Response: Haha, Alva the murdurer sounds fun. Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/08 01:50 am Title: Chapter 8

aaw
haha
this is getting better by the secoind

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: bleedanarkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Why can't I have a teacher just like Tom? It's so unfair because, Tom as a teacher is defenitely one of the hottest things I've ever imagined.
And now I want you to write a story where Tom is Bill's personal-trainer! ^__^

You're doing an amazing job with this story, please update as soon as you can. ;)

Author's Response: You know what, that is sooo hot! Maybe you want to co-write? ;D || Thank you so much ;)

Reviewer: paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh fuck me.
Drool
Wifeee baby, that was amazing
But of course you know that xD

I'm as serious as a heart attack when I say this is the BEST

I luffs it loads

LOBBAH LOBBAH LOBAH

Author's Response: Ah! Wife, that is sweet! Thank you <3

Reviewer: Broken-Glass Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/08 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

Keep Writing that story Please
I need to find out what happens
That Mr Lowla guy reminds me of a teacher at my school (not the small member thing xD) but the not being able to control a class.
Bill is so hawt in your story but I still prefer Tom..

Broken Glass
xo

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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