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Reviewer: Tavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 11

oh Bill let Andreas know carelessly? O_O

post ASAP please!!!

Author's Response: Andreas knows Bill too well and Bill didn't have time to talk to Tom about how to act if someone got suspicious. I'll try ma bezt

Reviewer: NicoleKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

YAY, FINALLY UPDATED !
awesome chapter
^_^

I hope your wrist gets better soon : )

-gives gummibears & cookies & huggies for being an awesome author-

Author's Response: I love gummibears! Thank you! And thanks for your review! :D;D

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

O_O noooo!! does he know?!?!?!
update sooooon!!
xoxox

Author's Response: Aye! I will :)

Reviewer: Discomforts child Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG!!! He knows!!!
Damn that's hot.
Haha!!!
MORE!!!

Author's Response: Ayekeya.

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 11

O_O I need more..

Author's Response: Then I have to give it to you, then.

Reviewer: mollyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 11

eh..uh...*no words*..just bring out the next chapter asap, so I won`t loose my brain!

Author's Response: Hehe, then I got no choice ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

=OO
and bill's supposed to be the dramatic one!

Author's Response: They're both, that's why they're friends :p

Reviewer: summer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 11

omg,omg,omg.omg. vet jeg allerede har sagt det på msn, men...omg,omg.omg. EID. ja, du EIER.

Author's Response: Takk :) Ah, loba sier jeg nuh! :D

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love this, it's great :D

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lol, poor Tom.

Author's Response: ;P

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

Omg, this is so good :D

Author's Response: Thanks! ;D

Reviewer: antenmoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 10

:D Love it! I hope Tom doesn't get arrested! UPDATE!

Author's Response: Man, I never even thought about that until now...! :P Thanks

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like. This is good :D

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Arwenity Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 08:43 am Title: Chapter 10

aaaaaahhh! That was great!! More please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: evilmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

loool i know norway is like the best!! im going again in the summer and im so excited cause theres this realllly hawt boy im gonna see who i really like btw..he's a family friend...i really wanna make some kind of move without it being too depserate if u know what i mean..got any ideas???? u seem to have quite alot lol xxxx btw my names Maria x

Author's Response: Oh, when it comes to love, I don't, I'm afraid. Where in Norway are you going?

Reviewer: TinkeyWinkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 10:51 am Title: Chapter 10

Haha, niice!
Please, more d;

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: bleedanarkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/08 09:51 am Title: Chapter 10

okay, I didn't came here for a few days and now I'm happy because this story was updated. Thaaaaaaaank you. xD

This story is so cool and I can't stop smiling everytime I'm reading the chapters. The last one was SO hot, I mean,...it was HOT! Like...HOT HOT HOT! Feel free to write more like this one. Tom needs to teach a few more things to Bill, he's being a very spoiled boy. ;)
Update as soon as possible!

And sorry but I only saw today your author response to my last review. I'm glad you liked the idea of a Personal-trainer!Tom. But, me as a co-writer? God, I totally suck at that, I mean, I can't even have a simple conversation in english, it always take me ages to write a review, my english teacher would kill me if she knew. But, I know you can do an amazing job like you always do and write an amazing story with that plot. *puppy eyes* PLEASE?! Please, please, please? *gives a cookie*
My last bf was my personal trainer (sush, don't tell anybody! ;D)so, if you need ideas I can give you, or at least I can try to give you.



Please? xD

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much! :D || Hmza, I'll bounce ideas with you some time for inspiration because although I got a lot of ideas and WIPs, I'd love to write a Personal-trainer!Tom. :)

Reviewer: angelshadows Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 10

wow!!! dirty, love it!

Author's Response: Thank you ^^

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 10

Lovely!!!What a one-to-one teaching:-D
By the way I haven`t got internet connecton for a week,so I was happy seing a lot new chapter!!

Author's Response: Haha, welcome back, then. And thank you!

Reviewer: evilmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 10

omg omg woman that was amazing!! ok u should seriously consider writing this kinda stuff for a living... and yes, calling it a joystick is a bit cheesy but it made me laugh lol.. and very very graphic,, but im not complaining lol U ROCK!!!!!!! XXXX O YE AND HOW DID YOU LEARN TO SPEAK SUCH GOOD ENGLISH IN NORWAY?????? BTW I LOVE NORWAY I GO EVERY YEAR.. HAADEBRA!

Author's Response: Oh, I am considering, but I got no faith in myself, but thank you! :D Heh, I guess it's because of my love for languages and because I lived a year in America. Thanks . Norway rocks :P

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