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Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 12

A bit mean? A BIT?
That was SO cruel!
By I still loved it as always... *winks*

Author's Response: <3 Takk

Reviewer: spilled milk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 12

That was VERY mean. They better not have sex, because that would be their first time and we don't even get to read it.

Author's Response: Haha! Next chapter will start with; Bill smiled and looked over at Tom who was panting from all the sex. ;D

Reviewer: Anathema Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

You are such a tease.

Author's Response: Haha, aye xD

Reviewer: Discomforts child Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oooh!!!
Lube!!!
Haha!!!
We all love lube!!!
It brings people together!!!
More!!!

Author's Response: Hahaa! That shoul be the new slogan; LUBE! Connecting people.. Oh, wait.. Nokia has that already...

Reviewer: paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

Bah, andreas is a dickhead. Fact (:

I eagarly await yhe sex scenes
Cuz I know its gonna be HOT

-nuzzles wife-
Ily 'I even brought lube'
Lol

We you, candle lit dinner on the beach then sexy time in the sand?
I'll bring the mickey nouse outfit (:

Update quickly

Author's Response: NO! I wand you to LIKE him now :( Awesome, I'll see you at the beach! ;D <3

Reviewer: bleedanarkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aaaw, young love! xD

And I hate you right now, how could you end the chapter with the word "lube"?
You're a BAD person, REALLY BAD!!!!

Love the this story so much!
Great work.

Author's Response: I should be locked up and never write again ;)

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 12

AAAH!!! OMYFUCKINGGOD, GO ON!!!!!

Author's Response: OKEY! XD

Reviewer: madamxkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

Dfjkfdjkjefk. Just before some hot teacher/student sex happened, you stop!!! Ahhhhhhh! O.O
But but but! I'm so happy Andreas is a retard and bought Tom's story. Haha
I want mooooore!

Author's Response: Haha, I dure did ;) Thanks

Reviewer: Zahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter, as always ^^

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 12

Okay the last bit made me laugh!
Can't wait for the next bit!
But don't hurt your wrist to much!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm being careful ^^

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 12

“Of course,” Tom said and raised up, walking over to the door and locked it before he came back to Bill and took off his shoes. “I even brought lube.”

hahah, omg. naughty tom.
this is soo good.

can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: ;D <3

Reviewer: Nemo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 12

it was REALLY mean :O
xD

Author's Response: Sorry xD

Reviewer: billtom_lover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

i so hate these short chapters but its better than nothing hope ur wrist gets better loved the chapter

Author's Response: I'll try keeping them longer when it does clear up :) Thanks!

Reviewer: BILLBOY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 12

yesssssss.
come on Alva, let Tom get it.
Oh i can wait for the next, i hope hoott chapter.
Go on girl, i hope your hand get better.

Author's Response: Thanks and thanks again :)

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

maybe A BIT mean?!? =O
why must you torture me so??

Author's Response: I like doing it. Like summer said, I'm Norwegian, it's what we do :P

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

HE EVEN BROUGHT LUBE!!! omg im burning up!!
update sooon!!

Author's Response: xD ;D

Reviewer: summer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMFG. ALVA DAAAA!!! du kan ikke stoppe der..neineinei! fyyy. men faen om det var fantastisk. slutten, omg. *iz ded*

Author's Response: Hehe, kanskje det blir en LANG scene neste gang? :P

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

maybe a bit mean ?
MAYBE A BIT MEAN
alva that was evil !!!
*grumbles*

Author's Response: Hehehehe, I know (A) <3

Reviewer: paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 11:57 am Title: Chapter 11

OoooOOOOoOOoOOOoOOOoOOoo


-sits and waits patiently for more-

Author's Response: Soon, my love.

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/08 11:44 am Title: Chapter 11

ahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

oh my god

*pants for breath*

seriously alva...you kill me this was just way too great !!!
man they are just whicked ;)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! xD

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