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Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 10

FUCKITY FUCK FUCK FUCK!

Author's Response: :O :O :O xD

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:40 am Title: Chapter 8

FUCK.

Author's Response: :O

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:24 am Title: Chapter 6

I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Gawd, now I have to pull my pants down too....probably more than you wanted to know, but fyi I am really hard to please.

Author's Response: xD

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:17 am Title: Chapter 5

"Then I guess I'll just continue yanking your chain until you understand tha you should walk this way."
That is now going on my myspace!
I feel like listening to Aerosmith now.

Author's Response: Haha! Awesome ;D

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter 4

Aww poor Tomi.
Bill is such a cocktease, oy!
I just wish I could help Tom out with his dillema's *mischevious smile*

Author's Response: Hehe ;)

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 01:03 am Title: Chapter 3

BWAH HA HA HA HA!
oh jeebus! that's some funny shit!
okay, so I have decided, Bill is in college and Tom is just 2 years older, with a younger face.....it makes sense in my head.

Author's Response: Haha! Could be, but not in my head :P Thanks!

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2

okay so, for some reason, it's REALLY hard to see Tom dressed "normally" in my head, it's actually making me laugh a little.

Author's Response: I know, right? But I felt that his normal way of dressing wouldn't fit here.

Reviewer: platypus_pimp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1

That was pretty damn hilarious. I didn't get that Tom was the teacher for a second. it's taking a while for my head to wrap around them not bieng the same age, but I'm willing to bear with you.

Author's Response: hehe, good to hear, thanks

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 13

awwiee^^

Author's Response: ;D

Reviewer: julia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 11:23 am Title: Chapter 13

AWW Neptunsie/Alvasonda... AMAZING! I really liked it, despite what you said at the beginning. I can tell you're forming some sort of.....badness .. though.. Are they going to get caught? Hmm

Thank you and much love.



Author's Response: Maybe they will. Thanks!

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/08 11:13 am Title: Chapter 13

awwwwwwwwwww!!!
hott and sweet!!!
update soooon!!
xoxox

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try.

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh Alva! That was seriously hot!
But why did Mr. Lowla insist on being Bill's guard? He hates him!



OH!
*squeal*
Maybe he has a secret interest in Bill? *wiggles eyebrows*
That dirty, old, perverted teacher!
^_^

Author's Response: You'll see, Anne :) Thanks!

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! ♥

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

oh my god Tom is so in love

I'm just worried that Bill is being all teenager on him
you know...crushing, but running when things get serious

oh and by the way the sex...

WOOOOOOOOF *fanns self*

that pretty much sais it ;)

Author's Response: GivingMeIdeas.com! :p Thanks

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

*melts into a pile of goo*

Author's Response: *is poking the pile of goo*

Reviewer: BILLBOY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 13

That's it.
very good.
i prefered it, harder and sexy of course,but i enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks :)

Reviewer: LottieLithium Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

It doesn't seem too rushed, don't be so damn harsh on yourself ! Keep up the AMAZING work ! x

Author's Response: I have to be hard on myself if I want it to be better. But thank you. That means a lot :)

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 13

i screamed when i saw u had updated it. gaaah i loved it!!! :D

Author's Response: Haha, thanks xD

Reviewer: paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wifeee poo
That was the hottest thing since bill in toms lap (:

I loved it darling
It made me so happy when I saw you had updated (:

I love you sweety
-kisses-
Let's snuggle (:

Author's Response: Aaah! Thank you <3<3<3 And yes, let's!

Reviewer: summer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/08 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

holy mother of god. fyyyyyyy faen!!!

Author's Response: Grahahaha!

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