Date: 05/04/08 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG
I feel so sorry for bill :(
this is such a good story!
keep up the grate work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 05/04/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg ewwee bushido is a dick lol but the chapter was good im hoping it doesnt happen again
Author's Response: Thanks :) And... It won't :P
Date: 05/04/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMFG!!! That son of a bi**h!!
Aaarrgggggg!!!!! Stupid Bushido.oh he's going to get his. *goes after him with a bat*
Author's Response: Haha! xD poor guy, he is getting killed by everybody today! :O
Date: 05/04/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh Alva why let that monkey rape Bill??
And now what?
my little billy, how he suffers now??
please fix it as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Heh... Bushido, the monkey xD You'll see soon :) TH-anks.
Date: 05/04/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 17
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarg
*runns off to borrow Andy's bazooka*
I'm gonna kill that son of a bitch !!!
seriously, that was soooooo mean, he's evil
poor Bill, fuck I'm gonna kill that bastard bushido
guh and how stupid can Tom get...MAKE HIM PAY for god's sake
ah, you just riled me up too bad Alva
update soon love
yours luce
Author's Response: How did you know about Andy's bazooka?!? :O And thanks for your amusing review :)
Date: 05/04/08 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 17
argh...i hate bushido soo much..i wanna kill the fucking shit guy!! awww my poor billy...he must feel awful...poor little sweet thing!! well...continue soon ok?? bye :D
Author's Response: I will try my best :)
Date: 05/04/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
O_O ...Bastard!! *not you!!*
update soooon!!
xoxo
Author's Response: Haha xD
Date: 05/04/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 17
that dirty little slut!paint him blue and throw him in the ocean!~
Author's Response: It was my plan :P
Date: 05/04/08 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
*speachless*..
I told you to fix it, didn't I? *cracking knuckle*
If I were you, I would run for my life about now..
My heart hurts :( poor Bill.. Please fix it, Alva!! I'm counting on you! ^^
Author's Response: It's still not over!!! :O I'll fix it... Or will I? *adds dramatic music*
Date: 05/04/08 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh my god!
You have to update soon!
I'm near speechless!
But, that means Tom and Bill can get back together.
But poor Bill.
I just don't understand why Tom couldn't tell Bill, over the phone or something, where on one would know.
Author's Response: Ah, when you mention it. But Bushido would've known, I think, if Tom told him :/ Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/04/08 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 17
wow this story is good,and tom as a teacher that's so hot ^^
in chapter 16 you made me almost cry.
and about this chapter the part that lydia sounds like chipmunk was funny,that made me laugh. XD
but i hate bushido and i'll hope tom wil kill him for doing this to bill.
i so want the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I hope you will like the next one :)
Date: 05/04/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 17
Holy****!
This is drug, and im addicted!
Please give me more now!
Author's Response: Oki-daisy! ;D
Date: 05/04/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG!!! Kill him!
Author's Response: Fine :P
Date: 05/04/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG, ALVA. how could you!?!? *speachless* OMG.
OMFG.
Author's Response: OMG!!! IZ WHAT YA WANTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Date: 05/04/08 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
omg im scared to find out wats going to happen next. but then again i need to kno!
Author's Response: Ah, the endless dilemma....
Date: 05/04/08 11:21 am Title: Chapter 16
NOO!!! more!!!
Please!!
Author's Response: Okeh :P
Date: 05/04/08 10:42 am Title: Chapter 16
no no no! *pats tom & bill's head*
hope it all works out in the end=)
Author's Response: So do I.... I'm not sure how it'll end yet, you see :P
Date: 05/04/08 10:32 am Title: Chapter 15
awww! Bushido the trminator..very interesting indeed!
Author's Response: :)
Date: 05/04/08 03:55 am Title: Chapter 16
Oh no, oh no, oh no... This is just horrible! It's breaking my heart...
I just don't know what can I say.
Okay, maybe it's well planned twist in the plot, but still: I don't have to like it! At least not until everything is fine again between the two of them.
Well written, and good description with the emotions.. As I already said, it's breaking my heart, which has to mean, that you write so well that I really get into this.
Pretty please, continue ^^
Whit love,
Gry
(This must've been one of the most chaotic reviews I've ever done :D)
Author's Response: heh.... I was like "My GOD! Horrible? She didn't like it? :O" But then... Thanks :)
Date: 05/03/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
GAH.
Author's Response: 8|