Date: 05/05/08 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *cooes them*
still feel like I need to kill Bushido though, oh and you wondered how I knew about Andy's bazooka, well firstly she's pointed it at me a couple of times ;) secondly we talk a lot...like a really big *a lot'
wait a second...gosh I need to borrow the bazooka for another reason too...namely GORDON THAT MOTHER FUCKING BIATCH !!!!!!!!!!!! I think Andy's rubbing off on me ;p
great chapter hunny, finally things seem to brighten a bit, although I really feel like Simone should have said something...stupid cow
anyways, LOVED it Alva (when do I not?) hope you'll update 'embrace the wild' soo too, that fic is soo darn good
love luce
Author's Response: Hahaha! :P Thank you si much! Simone was like my mother; just crying and not talking. And thanks again! :D
Date: 05/05/08 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 18
oh HELL NO!! someone give me my Vaseline!! I`m gonna beat the Shit out of Bushido! When I`m done he´ll be wishing he was never ¨born that M.Fucker!!!
His father hit him you fukin asshole! Bill and your wife should be ashamed of YOU! and it certainly shouldn't be the other fukin way around!! Your son just got raped and then you also hand your hands on him? Believe a fukin TEACHER! Stranger over him! Well you're not even worth being called a father!
*hides*
more bitte?
Author's Response: Haha! That was fun to read, aye xD More will come :)
Date: 05/05/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
*gasp!* Oh noes Bill's parents found out! OMG what's gonna happen next? I CAN'T wait to find out!!!!
Author's Response: Can't wait to tell ya! :O
Date: 05/05/08 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 18
awwww Tom is so sweet!!!!^_^
more please
Author's Response: Aye, will come.
Date: 05/05/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 18
!!! yyyaaayyyyy!!! but, awh, poor bil :
Author's Response: UhUhDUH!
Date: 05/05/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
Update soon ^^
Author's Response: Okei.
Date: 05/05/08 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 18
i loved it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/05/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
oh, you made it better =D
well, a bit o_O
i'm just happy tomi und billa are back together again ^-^
Author's Response: And better it will be, I'm sure :)
Date: 05/05/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 18
oke he did not kill bushido but hell yeah he hit him XD
i hate bushido for what he did this time,i want to kill him,may i?
and awh tom is so sweet to bill ^^ he extreme hugable now XD
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and i just need to quote this:
“Oh, my little baby,” he cooed and kissed his cheek.
that's cute ^^
and i still hope tom kills bushido,because he deserves it.
Author's Response: You may :) Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 05/05/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aww!
And Bushido is so... so.. blah! He's blah! There are no words to describe how evil he is.
Author's Response: Bah is a good word :)
Date: 05/05/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 18
Bushido is mean haha! I think he looks funny...
Author's Response: He does ;P
Date: 05/05/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
finally everything is OK between Bill and Tom and Bushido got his punch..now we have Gordon!!
But you'll make it better.You always do =]
Author's Response: I will try not to disappoint you, then :)
Date: 05/05/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Damn, Bushido is really ruining Bill's life. What an asshole D:
Author's Response: Aye! :O
Date: 05/05/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 18
hey Alva, fuck Bushido baby,
please fuck him hard , just do it for me.
at least the two lovers are together, this make my angry low.
Author's Response: Haha. What's weird is that I at first wanted Bushido to be nice in this story xD
Date: 05/05/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 18
So corny, I love it. :3
Author's Response: Corn and cheese. My favourite dish :P
Date: 05/05/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
OH! Someone better do something to Bushido! And soon!
Like cutting of his dick wtih a meat slicer or something!
I would volunteer for that!
Can I Alva? Please??? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Yes, you may! xD *finds fic-Bushido and ties him up*
Date: 05/05/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aaw! This warmed my heart! ^^
Author's Response: Gih! ;D
Date: 05/05/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
:') Now i'm happy! (L)
or, I don't know.. xD I'm just happy that bill and tom worked it out :- )
bill's dad is a bitch, and bushido too, but I don't care right now XD
THEY'RE TOGETHER AGAIN : DD
thanks for a new update so quick! n_n
Author's Response: Ayeeeh! :D And I'll try being quick with the next one as well :)
Date: 05/05/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
Orrr am proper happy they're back together!
I felt so sorry for Bill, as I do him most of the time on this site.
Tom was to adorable and caring for words.
Once again, why didn't he just scream and tell his father that Bushido raped him?
People, even fictional characters, confuse me.
It was still like proper amazing.
Bushido's just a fucking weggie who needs to die.
I can never stand him in any fics.
Author's Response: His father wouldn't listen and he was embarrassed by having been used like that :/ Thanks for your review! :)
Date: 05/05/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
you just made my crappy day so much better!
They`re finally together again. *sigh*
Author's Response: Oh, so glad to hear it got better ;D