Date: 05/02/14 08:49 pm Title: Chpt 9 - Amorousness
These two are super cute together!
Author's Response: Tom is learning that he can actually care for someone past a one night stand.
Date: 05/02/14 07:43 pm Title: Chpt 9 - Amorousness
I'm glad Tom finally is trying to admit his feelings, and that Bill told Tom about his dad! Maybe these things will help both of them move on more in their relationship. I definitely hope to see more of cute, sweet Tom, rather than the douchebag he's been lately. Bill, of course, is always sweet:))))
Author's Response: Bill's confession about his dad, will bring them as close as everyone expects. Tom is new at being romantic, but he cares for Bill, so he'll try. Bill is gonna be Tom's princess. :-)
Date: 05/02/14 06:16 pm Title: Chpt 9 - Amorousness
Yay, I've been waiting for this! It's good that Tom kissed Bill back because he's admitting to himself that he likes him. So sex soon???? LOL
Author's Response: He's caving. And yeah there will be a sex scene soon.
Date: 05/02/14 01:56 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
When is the next chapter coming out? I wanna know what they talk about.
Author's Response: Soon. I just wanted to catch up more.
Date: 04/24/14 12:58 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
soo exciting! i've been fallowing this on my phone and can't review there :/
really loving this so far, very original! :D keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I wont be adding chapter 9 until after I get the missing ones up.
Date: 04/23/14 09:54 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Yes, finally a kiss! I can't wait for some more action between these two! Perhaps Tom will finally stop acting like a dick;)
Author's Response: Let's hope. It'll be a while before I add chapter 9, I want to get the other missing ones up, first.
Date: 04/23/14 05:50 am Title: Chpt 1- Inception
Oh ok im sorry to hear that :(
Just one more question and im sorry to be a pain in the arse and annoying but I'm just wondering. ..
why didn't you credit the people who helped you?
Im so sorry if that sounded rude but I just thought you would have credited any help you could have gotten.
Like I said im just asking. sorry :(
Great story though xxx
Author's Response: Zarlina helped me starting on chapter 8, but I will credit her. :-)
Date: 04/22/14 09:09 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Oh, seeing Bill step out of shower, naked and wet and......it's a good image. I wonder if Tom will admit how much he likes it...
Author's Response: It'll be a while before we do. I have to rewrite the missing chapters. :-(
Date: 04/22/14 05:46 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
It seems that Bill likes Tom back, does not he?!
Author's Response: He does. Bill is more willing to admit it than Tom.
Date: 04/22/14 03:01 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Omgosh! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 04/22/14 12:09 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
The thing that I like about this story is that Tom just doesn't give in to his feelings for Bill. He questions it instead of going with it like in other stories that I've read. I like when a story isn't rushed and all the feelings come out in the second chapter. I love the way your going with this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I wanted it to be real. I wanted Tom to be confused, scared, anxious, and over all, have this...confusion inside of him because he's convinced that he doesn't like Bill.
Date: 04/22/14 12:06 pm Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
It's getting better and better. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 04/22/14 10:59 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Why would they delete this goodness?? Loved it, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: No, it was my own fault. But I'm working on getting them back.
Date: 04/22/14 08:16 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Hey great chapter. I really liked it BUT...
It doesn't make sense. It doesn't read like the other chapters. What I mean is its sounds like its been written by 3 or 4 people because the text doesn't blend and it doesn't seem like your own writing. The story goes from.. somewhat descriptive to amazingly descriptive half way through and that does not happen in any other chapter.
I still love it but... What's going on??
Author's Response: I did have help. That, and I'm slightly dyslexic, so writing doesn't come out so easy.
Date: 04/22/14 06:27 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
I'm sorry about your chapters that got deleted I know how frustrating that is and I hope everything works out. On the other hand this was a great chapter!!! I loved it. So happy that tom is realizing he has feelings for bill and starting to slowly admit it to himself! and ooohh bill kissing tom! lol I thought that tom was going to kiss him at the end! I can't wait for the next chapter! great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, it's just my rotten luck. Anyways, I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/22/14 03:45 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Finally they have kissed!
Sorry to read about all the chapters :(
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm happy they did too.
Date: 04/22/14 03:23 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Poor thing for all the deleted charters.
Glad Tom grew a pair.. at last lol
Author's Response: I'm so happy that Tom finally admitted he was jealous.
Date: 04/22/14 01:59 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
Wait wait wait... I don't understand... I guess I didn't get a chance to read chapter 7 before it got deleted so I'm not gonna read this chapter. I'm sorry everything got deleted, that's so frustrating. And just as it was getting popular, too...
Author's Response: Bushido asked Bill on a date, so Bill could vent his problems, and then he kissed, Bill, which Tom saw.
Date: 04/22/14 01:55 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
I'm sorry about your chapters. Man, that really sucks. I'd be so pissed. Anyways, great chapter. Yes, there was a kiss!!! I can't wait for more! I hope Bill stays half clothed in the next chapter, probably won't happen, but anyways, I'd like to see what Tom has to say
Author's Response: At least Tom has no reason to treat Bill differently. They're even now.
Date: 04/22/14 12:34 am Title: Chpt 8 - Ambivalence
I can't read this chapter yet because I wasn't finished with the last couple chapters :( I hope you get them up soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. It's just my rotten luck