Date: 05/24/14 04:13 pm Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
How cute ^u^
Author's Response: Aw, thank you.
Date: 05/24/14 02:40 pm Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
awe! thats too cute! :) loved loved that tom stood up for himself and those girls were grade A bitches! Great job! :)
Author's Response: Tom is finally free to admit he's gay and in love. No more black mail. Thank you for reading.
Date: 05/24/14 10:21 am Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
nice :)
i can already say that Bill and Tom are happy together and maybe Tom even more that he doesn't have to hide who he really is...along with the fact that if Bill would stay in the circus they wouldn't have to hide anymore - but this with time hahah
can't wait for another part
Author's Response: Tom is, in a way, free from his own self-oppression. Now they only have to hide it for three more weeks until Bill graduates from Cirque training, since technically Tom is a teacher and Bill is his student.
Date: 05/24/14 06:31 am Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
awesome!!! can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 05/24/14 05:39 am Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
Keep going!!!
Author's Response: I will. Not long now.
Date: 05/24/14 01:55 am Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
WOW! I am SO fucking proud of Tom! Like I said the last time I reviewed, if he let go of the pride and shame of being gay, he wouldn't even have to worry about those two bitches!YES, I'm so happy Bill and Tom can be together now without worrying about stuff like that! The only thing that could make me happier now, is seeing these two in the show, Worlds Away!!!
Author's Response: He finally gathered the courage to say it. He's, in a way, free from his own self oppression.
Date: 05/24/14 01:33 am Title: Chpt 15 - Proclamation
Ugh, amazing chapter!!!! Ha, I knew that was what it was gonna be even if you didn't tell me! I laughed out loud, and Bushido's line about him not being the world's first homosexual. Hehehehe, I loved it:) And I'm glad that fucking bitch got put down. I hope Bill gets the part instead of her. Eeeeek, I'm fangirling!!!
Author's Response: I loved writing that line too. I thought it was funny when Bushido said that. Lol.
Date: 05/23/14 03:51 pm Title: Chpt 5 - Berlin
Okay, This looks promising, though I found quite a few mistakes here and there. I don't speak English every day, but I'd say I'm pretty good at it, so. For example: "Bushido pointed at the group, _knife_ handing them and added" I have no idea what you're trying to say with this sentence. And also: " He watched the swing move back and _her_ quickly..." Is it suppose to be "back and forth"? And also Georg said something like "hey guy", I've never heard anyone use it unless you're talking to a bunch of people like "hey guys", the word "dude", would have been a bit better I think. But yeah, as I said, I'm not a native speaker and I make some mistakes and spelling errors from time to time, but I just thought it would be fair to point few of them out, so you know them :) But anyway! Back to the positive stuff! I really enjoyed this so far and I'm gonna read some more now :) This is really interesting and I found it extremely funny how Tom still thinks Bill is a girl XD Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: All the things you pointed out, all happen to be things they say in the army. Hey guy, or knife hand. Unless you speak english fluently and spend 12 hours a day with US Army soldiers, I can't really explain them. Sorry.
Date: 05/22/14 08:55 am Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
I have to say I am puzzled why there are not more reviews for this amazing story! I rarely add a story to favs before finishing but I am this one. I've felt every emotion possible. Been a while since Ive cried reading a story but the way you wrote Jorgs death and Bills breakdown was heart wrenching! I cannot get enough. Thank you for writing and sharing this jewel with us!
Author's Response: I took a great deal of time to write out everything Bill felt, whether it was grief, confusion, or love. I wanted the reader to be able to sympathisize with him in a realistic manner. Thank you for reading. :)
Date: 05/21/14 12:14 pm Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
That was so intense... *-* I'm in love with this chapter
Author's Response: Why thank you.
Date: 05/20/14 11:49 pm Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
Lol I have never seen so much sex in one chapter lol. The chapter name was fitting.
Author's Response: Yeah. Rabbit sex.
Date: 05/20/14 01:35 pm Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
WOW, they was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
two weeks was really a long time for them not to talk with each other but hopefully now they will be back together...or they already are :)
well, maybe now will Bill listen to Tom when he would want to tell him something not like last time xdd
Author's Response: Tom has finally admitted that he loves Bill, he's finally free from chains he put on himself.
Date: 05/20/14 10:00 am Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
Woah! That was something like else. Great chapter. I'm so happy they made up.
Author's Response: They went at it like rabbits. :-)
Date: 05/19/14 11:47 pm Title: Chpt 14 - Sex
Fucking love it!
Author's Response: I'm sure engeltraumer would say thank you.
Date: 05/18/14 02:00 am Title: Chpt 13 - Treason
Shit, the fucking cheap slut ruined everything :'( I mean, I found kinda funny Bill's reaction haha :D but that last part was oh so heart breaking :( btw thank you for uploading chapters 5&6 ^^
Author's Response: Bill is tragically heart broken. And yes Ada ruined everything.
Date: 05/17/14 08:55 am Title: Chpt 13 - Treason
Awh this is so sad :( I hope everything is going to work out for them, because they really love eachother
Author's Response: Tom is the idiot who risked getting caught. But Tom is going to see the his pride is what go in the way in the first place.
Date: 05/16/14 11:29 pm Title: Chpt 1- Inception
Damn, can't enjoy 13 because I didn't have the chance to read 5 and 6. :( Hope you can upload them soon.
Author's Response: I know. Sorry. I'll get them up soon.
Date: 05/16/14 10:21 pm Title: Chpt 13 - Treason
You knocked my socks off! I didn't see that coming! Oh no, what will happen??? Im anxious to see this Ada bitch get taken down and find out how Tom will win Bill back! . . . But I was thinking, if Tom would just admit that he loves Bill and that they're in a relationship, the leverage Ada has would disappear! Tom wouldn't care if everyone knew if he would stop being so prideful!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's used to being macho and manly. He doesn't want to be vulnerable by admitting he loves a man.
Date: 05/16/14 11:00 am Title: Chpt 13 - Treason
I wouldn't think Tom would care about Ada and her threats anymore after what jus now happened. I'd hate to see that bitch think she won. Poor Bill...poor Tom...
Author's Response: He's just unsure how people will see him, Tom is used to being a badass. Her plan to black mail Tom back fired with Bill interrupted.
Date: 05/16/14 02:38 am Title: Chpt 13 - Treason
i Need to know more please.
Author's Response: The next is not far behind.