Date: 01/17/15 01:32 pm Title: The match
Really nice:-)
Date: 01/17/15 11:11 am Title: Opening Up
Bill is such a conflicting character. It looks like he can't resist Tom but then he is always withdrawing, fighting his guilt and concern for his marrige. Their moment in the fields was pretty hot though. How clever of Bill to make a move when Tom was playing :-D
Date: 01/17/15 09:28 am Title: Unexpected
Tom is a surprising mix of a forceful, confident adult and a blue eyed, totally carefree, spontaneous child. It is some heady potion and I don't blame Bill one bit that he is being drawn to him so....
Date: 01/17/15 08:42 am Title: Feelings
Wow. It is crazy how irrationally they all act around each other, which is pretty fascinating to witness. Bill confuses Tom. Tom confuses Bill. It is line tide wave of emotions and confusion all mixed up together.
Nothing is predictable here and I like it:-)
Date: 01/17/15 04:10 am Title: The Surgery
I have to admit I tend to nitpick at various details of a story I read and Bill's anatomy as you intended him to be is still a little unclear to me in this one. Sorry to be such an ass about it but if he is bleeding each and every month I presume his menstruation blood needs to be drain somewhere, yet you didn't mention he would have vagina, so I don't get it. Or does he have two complete sets of both genital organs ( male and female)? I don't get it sorry. I was just wondering why on earth does he need to take precausion about getting pregnant when having sex with Anis if they have "old same gay sex". Once again, sorry about my questions, I am curious, you see, lol.
Tom on a war path is ferce. I wouldn't want to be his enemy, lol.
Can't wait for further unfolding of this story.
Author's Response: No problem....if u search abt intersex in wiki or other websites, you will see the anatomy of a gender with two male n female anatomy. It's really complicated. They have female internal organs with male external with slight feminine body parts. So, various surgerys are possible to change a female to male or male to female. Ughhh..i dunno how to go in details. Tom is a spoilt brat :p hehehe thanks for reading :)
Date: 01/16/15 06:45 pm Title: Grounded
Oh no, sweet charming Tom is turning to a fuming bull.
Author's Response: Pissht! Teenagers! Hehehee.. XP He's grounded! Big time! XD
Date: 01/16/15 04:37 pm Title: The Novel
Thank you for the link, the uploads are breathtaking:-) You are a person of many talents:-)
Date: 01/16/15 04:28 pm Title: Party and Sex
I love how much cooking they do in this story:-) I got hungry:-)
Hm, Anis has started to play with open fire. I don't know what to think about his strategy to make Bill become close with Tom just so he has something to write about. Risky business, if you ask me. Crazy batshit O_o. But even crazier is the fact that his reasoning is quite spot on, if Bill is loving him so much there is no danger of becoming "friends" with someone else, right? Still pretty fucked up to ask your partner to do that and believe that you and your position is safe.
Damn, I really love your Tom in this story. He is so charming. I hope they get close, closer, the closest soon:-)
Author's Response: Yeah? I think authors like Anis do exist. I mean some are so passionate about their work. Since his previous Book failed, he wants to try something new and different. Thanks for liking my version Tom :) I wanted readers to feel as if he is original as in how guys are in real life. Thanks for reading.
Date: 01/16/15 03:17 pm Title: Hersheys
The story is developing nicely. It is refreshingly different.
Author's Response: Really? awww...thanks alot. If you wanna check out more cool banners that I uploaded for each chapter paste this link into your search bar http://s1242.photobucket.com/user/karunajyoti/library/WORDS?sort=3&page=1
Date: 01/16/15 03:05 pm Title: Jasmines
Aaaaaaaaaah, introduction of Tom. Sweet. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hehehehe...naughty Tom, huh ;) Thanks fro reading :D
Date: 01/16/15 02:39 pm Title: Meer
Bloody hell, this is getting really interesting!
You have a very special way how you transcribe your thoughts into the plot. Very unusual, but I like it. Dialogues are built in a very special way as well, they seem to be quite raw but that makes it all incredily real and honest. I like this approach towards writing human interaction, so engaging for a reader:-)
Meer's parts are quite unique. You managed to capture creative process of a writer very well. Loving it!
Author's Response: Thanks alot for reading, pal! :)I really didn't know how to put the images from my brain into words. It was so frustrating yet fun to type them. ^_^ About meer, she is just an imaginary girl created by Anis :)
Date: 01/16/15 01:55 pm Title: The Novel
Gosh, I just started reading this story and I am beyoned entrigued. I am not a big fan of stories that have Bushido in them but I think I will give it try anyway:-)
Btw, your banner is stunning!
Author's Response: Heyy! Alien! Welcome ,welcome to my world:) thqnks alot for reading. You might find many many spelling , missing words or other mistakes. For that, i am extremely sorry. :( over all , enjoy! Thanks for reading :D
Date: 12/03/14 04:38 pm Title: The Novel
Oh yes ;)........ Who doesnt!!! Do you??? :-)
Author's Response: Umm..yeah..it suits that boy ;) as long as he's paired up with Bill,it suits him so well. I can imagine small girls around him,playing with his dreads and jumping on his lap..awww..
Date: 12/03/14 03:23 pm Title: The Novel
Oh yes! Maybe there will be another baby??? Or one on they way ;)....
Author's Response: Hehehehe....naughty girl ;) well...if the readers want that, I'll have to think about it ;) they have three girls already. Maybe a little twist would make their life spicy. Do you like it when Tom's a daddy ?
Date: 12/03/14 01:33 pm Title: The Novel
Mmm yeah that's what my mum tells me..... But once I'm up, I'm up.
Yeah, I liked it. I thought Bu was mad, like the way he treated Bill :O. Just no. And Tom, he just assumed the worst, like when he saw Bu and Bill together, he needed to trust him wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy more. For goodness sake Tom, Bill is a fully grown adult! He knows how to live his life. if you do, will it be like a few years on? Or straight away? And will Bu be back in it? I felt kind of sorry for him....... :):):)
Author's Response: Probably a few years later ;) I am actually building up ideas as to what would happen after a few years later, where would they be:) you know what i'm sayin.... ;)
Date: 12/03/14 11:37 am Title: The release
Yep I did! Been reading it for a while but yeah I am ill so I had the day off and I finished it today! And yeah I think you should!!! :)
Author's Response: Oh dear.....you should rest :( n hopefully I'll try to upload a story related with WORDS. :) thanks for the support. BTW, how did you find Bill n Tom's pairing n relationship in this story? :D
Date: 12/03/14 10:30 am Title: The release
LOVE THIS STORY :-):-):-);-);-);-):-D:-D:-DB-)B-)B-)
Author's Response: You read it all? :O woooooow hehehe... Thanks for reading.I was thinking of writing a series of it :p after Anis gets his fame n what happens with Bill n Tom's private life.
Date: 10/30/14 08:34 am Title: Please Mom
Oh man, how can a mother say to her own child, that she will never talk to it, when it'll do an abortion? Its really cruel. I mean, its bills desicion, even if i think that the most people will regret an abortion. Poor Bill :(
Author's Response: Yeah... A mother's a mother-_- well, she thought it was Bu's baby. Bill's mother accepted him for the way he is, i mean all mothers would want to have grandchildren :) so, hope u enjoyed this chapter :) enjoy the rest.
Date: 10/30/14 07:56 am Title: I love you
Wow ... Tom actually ... raped Bill. I mean, Bill said no, he tried to push Tom away and he said it hurts ... I'm really dissapointed in Tom, even it seems like Bill isn't angry or afraid ...
I really like the way you put Bill in. I mean, i've read many storys where bill is intersex. But never he tried to become a normal guy and never he really didn't like how feminine he is.
You made him really special and realistic. I love that.
And I really like it, how you write anis. It shows realistic how fucking crazy he is, how mindsick this person is and how dangerous he maybe will be in the future.
Author's Response: That's rough sex;) hehe i like it when Tom is the dominant one even after being younger than Bill. Yes, Bill's condition is different :) thanks lot for enjoying the chapter:) Anis is a passionate author :) enjoy the rest chapters. Who'll like it hopefully.