Date: 03/24/14 10:53 pm Title: i|ii
Ahhh I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi! I'm really glad to read that ^.^ Wow, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, ii|ii will be uploaded really soon. xxxxx
Date: 03/24/14 10:53 pm Title: i|ii
Ahhh I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi! I'm really glad to read that ^.^ Wow, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, ii|ii will be uploaded really soon. xxxxx
Date: 03/24/14 09:54 pm Title: i|ii
Amazing job doll
Author's Response: Awe, hey! Thank you so much, I never actually expected this type of response on this story, especially with the awkwardly written smutty bits in between, aha. But I'm so surprised and so happy with the acknowledgement it's getting! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, ii|ii will be uploaded really soon. xxxxx
Date: 03/24/14 08:55 pm Title: i|ii
*slaps tom* you never answer the phone during sex!!! at least not if the person you're with is someone you actually give a shit about!!! stupid stupid stupid tom! how can you not see that bill is in love with you??? hell, how can bill not see that he's in love with you??? omg, i just want to punch them both in the head and then sit them down and spell it all out for them!!!
*ahem* um...i mean...great story!
Author's Response: Hey! I really love this response, it really made me laugh, so thank you! Tom's just Tom - ignorant, blissfully unaware, stupid Tom. But you're right and you've literally hit the nail of the head with, "you never answer the phone during sex!!! at least not if the person you're with is someone you actually give a shit about!!!", because it was a hint I was hoping you'd all pick up on, so WELL DONE for being the only one. But anyway, DOES Tom ACTUALLY care about Bill? As in more than for sexual favors? Huge question, but it will be answered in the second half of this. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, ii|ii will be uploaded really soon. xxxxx
Date: 03/24/14 08:53 pm Title: i|ii
This is quite a situation. I think it is obvious that Bill is in love with Tom, but I think neither Bill nor Tom realizes this. What Tom feels about Bill, I am less sure, although it is clear that Tom is very attached to Bill as well. I hope these two will figure out what to do. It seems like there are only two options: become lovers/boyfriends or go back to being friends bur with no benefits. I am very curious where you will take this. I hope Bill will not get hurt in the end. Cool story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Hey! It is, right? Yeah, I totally agree though. In the beginning of this part I tried to make it seem as though Bill was indifferent about his relationship type with Tom, and then along the way as the part progressed, I began to drop in Bill's new found jealousy towards Tom and Ria, which really connects to the depth of his love for Tom. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, ii|ii will be uploaded really soon. xxxxx