Date: 05/04/14 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
Sooo good!I am freaking out
I was so scared Roxy was going to get away and then Tom being all manly and stuff made me so happy. I really hope you do a third story bc that would be simply amazing.
Date: 03/28/14 02:28 am Title: Chapter 9
Awww this chapter was so sweet I am pretty sure I formed a cavity while reading it. I am glad Bill is doing what he can to make up for all the bad he has done. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03/27/14 03:44 am Title: Chapter 8
I like that : the magic of birth.
Date: 03/26/14 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am so glad Bill is willing to get his health in check. I am so glad that aria is agreeing with Tom and is finally taking control of her life and bills life. I really don't like Simone, not at all. What kind of mother would let her child starve himself and be okay with it. The fact that she tried to take him from the hospital before he got the help he need really pushed my buttons. It made me happy that Bill stood up for himself and didn't let his mother over rule him. He knows that getting better is what he needs to do if he wants to see his daughter grow up. I am looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 03/26/14 03:26 am Title: Chapter 7
Bill didnt eat because of his diet, dammit Bill. EAT!!!! *sigh*
Author's Response: We can always force a sandwich down his throat. :p
Date: 03/26/14 03:20 am Title: Chapter 6
Holyyy shit, I wonder how his mother will take all this. I am kinda happy that Bill went soft just a little. I kinda found him cute in this XD hahaha amazing chapter, nice to see progress.
Author's Response: Oh I've planned something good for Simone. A nice little slap in the face from reality. But yeah I wasn't trying to make Bill suddenly this caring person. But show that he has emotions. So he's trying to be a man and people must like this.
Date: 03/26/14 03:12 am Title: Chapter 5
I feel sorry for Roxy :/ wow look at all these chapters you've updated sooo happy!! Bill should just give back the baby and she should just move away with tom and all was right with the world :P
Author's Response: Yeah I've been on an updating spree. I want to add another story soon but I don't want to overload my servers. Or my brain basically.
Date: 03/25/14 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh my gosh. Eeeeep. I just fangirled over Bill becoming a better man. He's working on co parenting with Roxy and that just makes me so giddy. I love focus character she is understanding and knows what to say to people yo get they to show who they really are and express themselves. I like how she called aria out with out trying to hurt her, in awAy she was trying to be nice about it. Oh my God when I read the end of the chapter I literally felt my heart break when Bill collapsed and wasn't waking up.I got scared I hope he is okay and gets better. No matter how much I don't like character I don't want them to die. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this. I literally was worried people would hate it. But as for Roxy and Aria's little exchange, I wanted to show that Roxy is not trying to be hostile despite the fact that they both hurt her in a way. Bill was being as you read a dipshit and Aria wasn't trying to make him change. She just allowed him to abuse her. I wanted to turn the tables a bit and have Roxy just jump in and analyze the whole situation. So yeah I am trying to be deep. That was my failed attempt at deep. rnrnAs for the last part or our 'cliffhanger', I really enjoy scaring my readers. I don't know but the reactions I get when I do are usually hilarious.
Date: 03/23/14 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
So I finally read chapter 5 and 6 and they both were oh so good. With chapter 5 I like that Roxy hasn't given up and has decided to use a different alternative to get to see her child instead of giving up. The Idea of the one on one was perfect and I agreed with it as soon as I read it. I am so glad that she knows that Tom truly does like her and I want them to be together.
Chapter 6. I was so excited for her and Tom to get together lol. But you nothing ever goes the way they want it to lol. A gun really wow if he needs it for dramatic affect I Geuss he mmeds it. I want you to know I fangirled so hard when Bill dad thank you to Roxy ( is that weird?), it shows that he does have a heart. I like that Roxy called him out about not being able to do anything on his own and being a mamas boy. I think that him hearing the samething aria said from an out side person is what made him think they were right. I so glad he is stepping up and taking his life in to his own hands. Now I hope he will be able to see that he needs to get healthy before something bad happens and he loses his life. This wa such a good chapter I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I fangirled over your review. Lol, yeah Andrej is very dramatic. He wanted to make it seem like a kidnap but he didn't count on Tom willing to take a bullet for Roxy. I have been so excited about this one because I actually sat and wrote this out hoping it'd be really good. I read someone's review I can't remember who but she said that Bill relying on his mother was a turn off and I thought I'd touch upon that. I also wanted to show that Roxy is not only changing Tom but Bill as well. Plus everyone likes this evil mom complex.
Date: 03/22/14 05:34 am Title: Chapter 5
Legally that is nonsense cuz even if the mom Is moneyless as long as she is no druggie child is always with the mom and the dad has to give money to help raise the child. Even surrogate mom that changed their minds and fought to keep the baby despite money and contracts won on court
Author's Response: Re-read the first one because I kind of explained how this is happening to her. You may have forgotten.
Date: 03/21/14 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like that your taking the time for Roxy to get her daughter back it makes the story seem more real. Thank god her and Tom are together now , I thought that would never happen.
I rally don't like bill at all but the fact that he relys on his mom to take care of everything for him is a turn off. Even though I am not a fan of aria she definitely deserves someone who doesn't rely on His mom to take care of things for him.
Oh I have a question when Roxy gets her daughter back will she keep the name the baby already has? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I really enjoyed reading your review. rnrnYou're the only one to actually touch on the fact that Bill relies on his mom. I thought that it would make it a little funny that Bill claims he's this high and mighty motherfucker and yet he relies on his mommy. I try my best to make my stories realistic which can sometimes be super hard. rnrnAs for your final question, I cannot really answer that because I honestly haven't even thought about it yet. I want to build on Roxy and Tom a little bit while having the issues at hand all laced into it. So once I reach that point I guess it'll be answered then. rnrnI'm looking forward to my next one too. I am personally worried about it but I shall see what my creative skills make me create.rnrn
Date: 03/21/14 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg dgfugsjfgwe :3 I hate Bill too!! :P And omg so Tom wanted to go further right but she was all like we have damage control to do and he just left well pfftt can't wait till they get some 'happy bedtime' aww Roxy shouldn't feel that way if only she knew how Tom really feels about her :3 teehehehe UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review. I love to read what everyone thinks. I am currently writing the next one.
Date: 03/19/14 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Hell yea go Roxy!!!!!! I am so glad she is back in her body. She is burning with revenge and I so happy she is not blind with lust for bill. He is doing exactly what I would have done if I was in her position. I am so proude of her. I feel bad for Tom because of what bill said. I could never imagen myself saying something like that Ty siblings let alone a twin. That's just awful. Love this story looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and Bill being evil is just normal at this point.
Date: 03/18/14 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
OH YEA!! ABOUT TIME SHE CALLS THE PAPERS!! YEAHHH!! :D I love this chapter shes back!! aww Tom shouldn't cry, I wish he would've told her what Bill said, I mean thats gotta be the worst thing a twin could tell you. Mhmmm worst ever!! Update soon!
Author's Response: Bill is being a douche and that does hurt to say that. But now it'll get even more dramatic now won't it.
Date: 03/18/14 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Damn, I hope Roxy returns to her body soon! And you go girl, open your eyes and see how nasty those people are! I feel so sad for Tom maybe Roxy can see him in a new light and wow I wasn't expecting Aria to be Toms EX I mean WTF!!! she is sooo wrong for dating Tom and then MARRYING Bill! WTH! amazing update on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I know she's a little bitch! But I liked this idea of her being his ex. It's dramatic and interesting.
Date: 03/18/14 01:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Hell yea!!!! Roxy!!!!! Fight fight fight!!!!!!! I hope she comes back with avengence. I want her to make Bill and his family suffer. After that I want her to fall in love with Tom. I love this story and I am looking Howard to the next chapter.
Author's Response: OMG I read your review while I was on the bus and I was so happy I laughed for the first time this freaking week. I will work extra hard on this next chapter just for you.
Date: 03/11/14 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
So...I know it's only a story but I REALLY want to give Bill and his mom a nice hard slap in the face. (I hope I don't get arrested for this). Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, it's nice to see a new reviewer. It makes me so happy.
Date: 03/10/14 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
The mom is a bitch!! and lol Ruby well least he got the first letter right now XD wow so they caught her??? man i say she should just say its tom baby hey tom does have bills dna so it could work. make it seem like it was a lie and she was just getting tom back hey least it will get them off her back for a while..
Author's Response: Thanks for being my first review. She is a bitch, I know but I like this thought of her being a bitch.