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Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 06:17 am Title: Chapter 11

It's not too fast but it's time for them to start talking any getting stuff out in the open. When Bill told the story was it the entire story even abut the calls and text?

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 01:27 am Title: Chapter 11

Bill is a brave soul to open up to Tom like that. It takes guts to do so. And Tom is a good person. He reacted how any decent person would. The boys are growing close. Finally! I do not think it happens fast. They are lonely, they like each other and they spend a lot of time together. So growing close may happen very fast in a situation like that. It's only natural.

Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: Aphrodite463 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 01:22 am Title: Chapter 11

BOY ON BOY LOVING!!!!!!!! Most definitely! Please :)

Reviewer: mapher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/14 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love this story! Please don't leave it like this

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/14 02:07 am Title: Chapter 10

please update ASAP

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

Bill should tell Tom :) and whoever it is who's texting, I don't links him :$ Great chapter, loved it

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Uh oh! Can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Uh oh! Can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

Uh oh...this can't be good...that someone is about to spill Tom's secret to Bill!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 11:55 am Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter! I'm definitely looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 09:19 am Title: Chapter 10

nice :) they are getting better and better so it definitely goes in a good way :) but that message Bill got. he needs to talk about it with Tom

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 07:59 am Title: Chapter 10

Bill should definitely tell Tom about these texts. Tom needs to be prepared for what is coming at school. I bet the texts are from Andreas. How did he (or anyone else) learn Tom's secret?

Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: aliens-unleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/14 02:30 am Title: Chapter 10

*dies*
Please don't leave me hanging for too long, will you??? I don't think I'll be able to take it. This was brilliant and I'm literally bouncing in my seat.

Reviewer: AlienGirl483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/14 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter! And I'm guessing that those eyes are Andreas'. ;p Please update soon! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! More is up now :D

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/14 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

I hope its a medical solution to permanently fix tom but maybe toms issue is psychological and it will fix itself in due time. Who keeps looking at them angrily though :/hmmm

Author's Response: You shall find out soon! :P Thank you for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/14 12:27 am Title: Chapter 9

Is Simone looking into a procedure that will help Tom?

I'm guessing Andreas eyes.

So ready for more.

Author's Response: I'm considering a procedure being possible, but unfortunately for right now, she was just looking into a more short term solution. Thank you so much for reviewing! More is on its way!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/14 12:18 am Title: Chapter 8

Sad for Bill but a bit of a wake up call for Tom. Maybe this will be the turning point in the friendship/relationship.
Now off to next chapter to catch up...

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/14 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

It's me again. I was thinking about the story and now have an idea st to why Andreas exposed and lied about Bill to the parents. I think Andreas is a closeted gay. Why else would he want a blowjob from Bill, while having a girlfriend and such? I think Andreas justified to himself that he only wanted to humiliate Bill, but then he liked the blowjob too much and started doubting his sexuality. So he took revenge on Bill by making up a story that Bill attacked him and exposing Bill to his and Bill's parents. Andreas probably thought that with this his obsession with Bill would stop. But it did not. I think angry eyes belong to Andreas, as he both hates Bill and is jealous of seeing Bill with Tom.

Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Your theory is a pretty good one! You will find out soon if it's correct or not :P Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/14 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 9

So sad what happened to Bill :( Lucky he has Tom and Tom's parents :) Who's watching hem? o_o great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And all will be answered in time :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/14 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 9

pleas update soon

Author's Response: The next chapter is now up :)

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