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Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm so excited for answers. Also it is thrilling to watch Tom's character development and his altered demeanor.

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Date: 04/15/14 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 7

My poor baby stuck sleeping in a park :(

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Date: 04/15/14 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh god oh god Bill D: The ideas in my head are awful.

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Date: 04/15/14 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lemme guess. Bill is going to be blamed for his own rape?!!!

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

He's smiling back. That's something, right? Mom is meddling. Why are moms always meddling? Lol

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Tom is all I can say :(

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm so excited to read more. Great plot set up. There's so much potential!

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was losing interest and then BAM. Unexpected plot twist. I'm going to read on :)

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/14 10:02 am Title: Chapter 11

I noticed Bill still didn't mention the texts. Uh oh.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/14 12:43 am Title: Chapter 11

He's going to break down and tell Bill isn't he?!
I don't feel things are moving too fast at all.

Reviewer: creazy4bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

Bill has to tell Tom regarding the texts.... I am sure that is Andreas... a frustrated gay who is in love with Bill, but he has to show his STRAIGNESS... lol...

Awaiting for your updated!!!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 11

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 11

please update ASAP

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 11

Awh great chapter again, I can't wait for more

Reviewer: aliens-unleashed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

I need boy on boy loving so badly. I need it and I need it now ;)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 10:26 am Title: Chapter 11

They both leaned forward, their lips gently meeting in the middle. It was soft and caste [this should be 'cHaste'], and didn’t get too heated before they both pulled away. But as brief as it was, it caused something to stir in Tom, something he had never felt before.

I noted Bill didn't tell Tom about the texts yet. This story is getting so interesting. Waiting for the new chappie. You are doing well.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 09:25 am Title: Chapter 11

NO!! its going perfect!! YES!! it was about time for some boy on boy lovin!! :D I loveee your story, omg I wonder what decision that is! Bill also needs to tell Tom about the texts before he forgets then there will really be problems :/ PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 09:18 am Title: Chapter 10

Holy shit man! Whos is it?? I mean how can they even know??? Maybe that guy or whomever was looking at them mean was following him mom around (toms mom) and saw what she was doing and what not :/ or heard her convo with someone idk theres just so many possibilities Im kinda worried because this will kill Tom and if they out Bills secret him as well.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/14 08:08 am Title: Chapter 11

That was really good ;) they are so close togetherness Bill told him what happened to him, maybe Tom would tell also what happened to him just like Bill would tell about messages he received. Even tho they are going in a good way - hopefully ;)

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