Date: 05/23/14 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh oh dear Evonne
Date: 04/01/14 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
What does Andreas do to Bill to make him speak? :/ hmm
Date: 04/01/14 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh man, Bill just seems like a lost cause :/ i feel so sad forhim i wonder if he is screaming on the inside from his mothers passing.
Date: 03/30/14 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Calm down Kyna...Tom don't get your knickers in a twist jeez! :/ I'm sure she didn't mean to hurt Tom or have ill intentions as to why not tell TOm. For sure he would've been opposed to it if she had told him beforehand at least he should at least see that she tried to reach out to Bill and went there in her condition...still upset at Bill there was no need to be like that to a prego woman you know their hormones aren't balanced during that time...
Date: 03/28/14 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Woah! They need to understand Kynas situation when a woman is prego her emotions are all over the place the only person she thinks about is HER and HER OFFSPRING..I mean Georg has to at least understand that, but yes I do hope Kyna trys harder and trys to see things from Toms point of view and really think about what happened to Tom.
Date: 03/28/14 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Tom, and that was uncalled for Bill :/ *sigh* all these problems *¨sigh* I wonder if they will ever be able to overcome this.
Date: 03/28/14 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Kyla is a strange one i Can't really feel her or understand her
That's bizarre
Date: 03/27/14 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great you Can really feel Tom's pain and live it
Date: 03/18/14 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well I understand Toms mood change I mean no one wants to know they have been raped, right? I sure as H wouldn't. Kyna just needs to understand that the reaction is normal and that Tom seeking out his brother and TWIN brother at that is just human nature. I don't know I still think Tom needs more clarity and I think he needs to go see Bill. I don't understand why Bill wouldn't want Tom to be closer to him :/ hmm and this Andreas guy seesm like a suspect to me imo. Great update! :D
Date: 03/18/14 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Poor Tom, he is so confused by this whole situation and it's tearing him apart.
Date: 03/14/14 11:52 am Title: Chapter 5
I will say it again, I find this Bill super sexy. Being violent like this just turns me the fuck on. I like that Andreas is trying cover Bill's ass like that. At least he has one person in the lock up he can trust.
Date: 03/14/14 04:14 am Title: Chapter 5
I am soooo confused right now D: ok so maybe the nut is Tom? why would Tom have a say on when and if Bill would die? D: I will re-read later today its 3am here soooo sleepy.
Date: 03/12/14 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 4 *Repost*
Okay...Okay...Okay...This may sound crazy but I find Bill to be so sexy in this. I love him as the bad guy. It's hot. I cannot wait for more.
Date: 03/12/14 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 *Repost*
Poor Tom, I feel so sorry for him. Really curious to read about why/how that incident happened. I also kind of sympathize a bit with Bill... All this started with him trying to protect his brother. He is still a psychotic murderer though.
Date: 03/12/14 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4 *Repost*
OMG! he ate the whole thing??! :O but revealing rape to Tom has got to be painful :/ oh my! wow. I wonder what's going to happen now.
Date: 03/12/14 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 *Repost*
Kyna should warm up to Bill maybe he should say to Tom how that makes him feel, maybe he should really try to have a convo with Tom. And was that a dream?? or did that really happen??? *le gasp* :O
Date: 03/01/14 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 *Repost*
I find cannibalism way too fascinating... Personally, I'm a vegetarian 99% of the time and even chicken grosses me out. It must be so weird eating human flesh...
Curious as to why Bill only kills men though. Perhaps there was some abuse in his childhood. It is really interesting to me how people become this way.
But then again, the far most OOC behaviour here: Tom as a family man... Haha
Date: 03/01/14 12:23 am Title: Chapter 2 *Repost*
Can I ask you something, are you a psychology major? I am a psychology/nursing major. But yes the way you write and describe all these disorders just like your previous story, just so analytic to a point with lots of outlets without actually giving a thorough diagnostic because after all we do have to take into account all other circumstance/influences that may cause a person to be that way, is really interesting. I can understand why Kyna may feel uneasy about Tom but I doubt he would turn on his own babies :/ Evonne seems to sooth/calm Tom so yea I don't THINK he would but lets see how it all unfolds. And what do you mean not having them in a relationship? like a slasher? Giiirl you are doing great for a HET story ;) (assuming you are a girl :/ you'd be surprised how many times I've been wrong) Update soon and not ToHo soon :P
P.S For all you other readers, STOP LURKING! Comment!!
Author's Response: I am a psych major and I take classes in criminal profiling. And I am a girl lol you're not wrong this time.
Date: 02/28/14 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 *Repost*
Oh man this akes for an interesting read! I have so many questions but I know you'll clarify as the story unfolds :D. I feel really bad for Bill wonder what triggered it and omg Tom has babies :P and its strange how you say he doesn't harm women hmm so it was a male indeed that triggered it hmm speculating ..speculating. Can't wait for your next update!