Cute! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

this is so sweet and so beautiful!!! I wish you would've written in more details, from Tom met Emily to them falling in love - like write scenes where they talk and laugh together and make fun of one another and where Tom is staring at Emily thinking about how much he cares for her and how much he wants her and Emily being hesitant at first etc... I wish there had been some scenes where you could read more about them learning about each other and growing fonder and fonder of one another - this is really beautiful and cute and sweet and lovely and so so so nice. Yay Tom + Emily :'D VERY WELL done Maril :)

Author's Response: Sweetie,I've already started writing another story so I think my muse is coming back. I'm glad you enjoyed this and I know it was very rushed. I promise you than when I feel comfortable writing again, I will write you another story that will be much better than this one. I know I've got it in me I just have to get busy. Thanks for the lovely review. :)