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Reviewer: Angeleyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/18 08:26 am Title: Full Circle

Dear mizu,

I devoured your two stories, Karmic Lessons and Karmic Embrace, and sat down to read every free minute.
You have completely captivated me with your writing style, although I was skeptical at first when I read the summary, if this "Mafia thing" is something for me.

But you captured me immediately and I wanted to read without any breaks, which unfortunately does not really work in everyday stress.

Thank you for the two great stories. Since I can read English stories quite well thanks to my Kindl, but unfortunately I am not very good at writing,
Since I only learned English at school and this time has been a while since, I'll be brief and let Google help me translate it and hope it does not sound too horrible.

Angeleyes

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/16 09:26 pm Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

not a new review but i just wanted to say thay ford flexes still make me think of this story

Author's Response: I'm actually re-reading this story. I really miss being wrapped up in this world! I'm glad to know you're reminded of it on occasion. One of these days, I'll come up with a story idea that grabs me, and my writers block will evaporate!

Reviewer: BurningGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/15 02:29 am Title: Full Circle

That was delightful darling. With all the last minute smut, and then the ridiculous baby fluff... Also, I'm so pleased that you're not going to leave us to wonder about the Raf (and I'm assuming here) Zane thing.

Thank you for all that you do! Can't wait till the next project!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know you read this and enjoyed the ending! I didn't get a lot of feedback on the last wrap-up chapter, so I've been wondering if it was a little too schmaltzy. I will hopefully get to the Rafael story in the near future, but working on Miami Heat is taking up my time for now. I also got a request to do a sequel to Silent Bill.... I was just wondering if I'd ever run out of stories to write about these guys... guess not! See you next time!

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/14 03:12 pm Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

Omg please do!

Author's Response: I'll have to do a one-shot in the future, there's just not enough TIME!! Daaaamn it.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/14 08:02 am Title: Full Circle

Please, please, please write something else soon...there's far too much het on the site right now! All the new members attracted by the release of the album I suspect...but I am a die hard slash fan and I need my fix of guy on guy! Pretty, pretty please.

Author's Response: I am actually working on a whole new story now. Why, oh why can't I do a solid outline??! I get myself into so much trouble that way...I foresee a tale that takes at least the next six or eight months to finish.... I've got the characters, the main idea, and the main plot. The setting (Miami! I've been doing my homework for the stage!), and several scenes that will be in it. Oooh, I'll send you an email...hang on

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/14 07:06 am Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

I guess we will never let you go!
You are stuck with us.

Author's Response: It's not such a bad thing, to be stuck here, with you guys! I so wish I had time to do an Xmas shortie! But even with dragon software, I still have to type, so I am forcing myself to take a break on my arms :*( I'll be keeping a oneshot on the Karmic world in mind, though!

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/14 07:01 am Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

Yes, yes, make a Christmas special one, yay!!!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/14 07:10 pm Title: Full Circle

Can we have a Christmas special, pretty please? It's such a cute family...:3 I can't let goooooo

Author's Response: That's not a bad idea! I doubt I'll have time, unfortunately, but I really do love the idea of a little visit with these characters. I will definitely keep it in mind for the near future!

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/14 08:23 am Title: Full Circle

I knew it from the first squish!!! So sweet!!!

Brooke is soooo good for them!! The children will take some helluva genes from her, haha! For a moment I thought she will stick around for some reason. THAT would've had quite an impact.

And how do you do it? How do you decide how many babies and what gender?? Maybe you flip coins...

Anyway, great story, my darling. Wonderful universe, great work. And long, too. I have mixed feelings, like I totally agree with you wrapping up the whole thing, in a regal exit, and I still want to know ehat happens next.

For example, I imagine Poppy a perfect mix between Bill and Poppi, in some twenty years, taking over the household and everything.

Brilliant work. Thank you. Love you to pieces.

Author's Response: Hello lynn Ivan! Well, we made it through this super long journey together. I've loved all your reviews, and I'll really miss them. Just like I'll miss these twins, and Brook (she really was a fun character!), And all the other characters in the story. Like Poppi, I actually mourned him after killing him off! And I too want to know what happens to these people in the future, all five Tom and Andrej's children… Yes I kind of flipped a coin on that. Except for Poppy, of course. But the idea of triplets popped up in my mind like a surprise, so it was probably a shocked as the characters. Thank you so very much for taking the time to review. You were one of the handful of regulars who kept me going! I hope you enjoy my next stories just as much. See you next time!

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 10:41 am Title: Full Circle

Noooooo I can't believe this is over :( I've been a die hard fan of this series since it began in 2012! Well I cant wait for your new stuff :(

Author's Response: I know!! My mind can't believe it's over either, it keeps wanting to play with more storylines. I'm so thrilled to know that I had a diehard fan out there! Knowing there are people out there waiting for my next story will definitely keep me writing! Thank you so much for your review, see you in the next imaginary world :-)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 12:15 am Title: Full Circle

I put this off as long as I could and I might have to have a nice cry before I consider actually reviewing the chapter, but I loved it. It's so sad to see it end, though. It felt like we'd be with them always, and instead it's going to have to be the other way around. I can't wait to see what you put out next, you're really the only one keeping me tethered here most weeks...apart from sporadic re-reads of old favorites (I'm simply obsessed). Try not to torture me with too many non Tom/Bill or Bill/Bushido stories if you can ;) thank you so much! This was so huge, literally and figuratively. You created an entire world that fit so believably into our own, with just a hint of magic. As crazy and downright wrong as some of it was. It was grounded in reality and human nature, along with some really believable insight into the mafia culture. Um. Yah. I wish I could pin this to the home page forever, I hate to think that it will sink into the abyss if the site without regular updates. I will recommend it whenever I get the chance, though as I haven't written in years I'm not sure how often that will be. Do yourself a favor and write a novel or series if you aren't already, you've got a wonderful ability to keep a story going and keep it interesting and full of lifelike details and emotion, as well as the talent to srite and write and write for miles! Ttfn, I hope to see a lot more from you.

Author's Response: The last chapter made you cry!? That makes me so happy! I too am very sad to see this end. My mind keeps going into little vignettes of the boys' lives, going into parts of the world that I'd like to see. But all things must end, unfortunately. I will try not to torture you with too many stories about other people! I have a couple of billshido stories planned, although I am really liking tomshido too. Matt I can't tell you how much I appreciate the time you've taken all your reviews! This really was a massive story, and knowing there were people who enjoyed it and wanted to see more really kept me going. If I could keep my stories just a tiny bit smaller, they might be publishable! However, I just can't seem to stop myself from going on, and on, and on! I never want these worlds to end, and it's wonderful to know that there are others out there who feel the same way. I will be working on a little Rafael side story, so hopefully I'll have chapter out in the next couple of weeks. I too am looking forward to more bill and Tom, and of course Bushido! I have a couple of stories planned for the future, and I can't tell you how much I look forward to seeing your reviews on them!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 01:04 pm Title: Full Circle

Wonderful way to conclude this epic saga. I had a hunch that Poppi would come back as the new baby...no idea there would be 3 babies and Poppi would be reborn as Poppy (which, by the way, is my favourite flower and I just love it as a girls' name). Brook's reaction to it all had me in stitches, she is such a character. I hope she got paid a ton extra for carrying the triplets and needing a caesarian to deliver them (and probably cosmetic surgery to give her back some sort of recognisable figure). I'm so, so happy you're giving us a little side story on Raf...now did Bu send him in the vicinity of a certain extremely tal, well-endowed fed? Guess I'll have to wait and see. Oh, I am going to miss this world so much but I truly can't wait to see what you come up with next. And just in case you're wondering, I keep tinkering with ideas and writing a page or two here and there...I'm just hoping something will really grip me and I can get stuck into something new. So looking forward to seeing your name on something new. Love and hugs, Helen xx

Author's Response: Hi Helen! I do hope the ending wasn't sloppy; I really felt like a kind of rushed through it, but life's been very very busy, and I had to really cram this last chapter in. But I couldn't just let it lie for several more weeks, that would've driven me crazy! I'm sure Brook run an extra couple million dollars for the extra tenant. That should cover the plastic surgery, LOL. I'm really missing the story, and haven't really grabbed onto any new one yet. I will be doing one about Raf, but it hasn't excited my imagination just yet. I think I'll just have to get it started, and hope it just grabs me. I really did enjoy Zane, so it shouldn't be too hard to get into it. So it sounds like what kind of in the same boat! Hopefully I'll see a chapter from you at the same time you see one from me! Lately, I keep finding good stories to read on other websites, and those are keeping me a little distracted. I'll out soon though, hopefully. Anyway, without the reviews, I'll keep in touch with some emails. Hope everything's going good for you now, and you're getting ready for the holidays. Love and kisses, M

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 04:37 am Title: Full Circle

Sad its over! But I loved it! Would have liked Bill to have a baby! He would have become the worlds mist crazy father!!!

Author's Response: I'm sad it's over, too! I'm so glad to know you enjoyed it! I can't imagine bill being a father, I'm pretty sure he wouldn't enjoy it as much as being an uncle. But who knows, if this had been a male pregnancy story, maybe Bu could have knocked him up accidentally, and then we would've found out. I do love the male pregnancy stories! One of these days maybe I'll do another one. Hope to see you there!

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 03:13 am Title: Full Circle

This is so nice. Iam glad that Bu is good about Bill and Tom. WOW about the Triplets, and so happy that poppi is back.
I can't wait until the story about Raf, but I would also like a wedding for Bu and Bill. (And maybe også one for Tom and Andrej) :)
I have always loved this story, always looking forward to the next chapter, both happy and sad now as the story is ending.

Author's Response: The triplets surprised me too! And it would be nice to see a wedding between Bu and Bill, wouldn't it? And you're right I kind of gyped Tom and Andrej out of the wedding. Noun feeling bad… But there are more stories to write, and I hope to see you at the next one!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 01:37 am Title: Full Circle

It was perfect!! Thank you So much for your stories. They are my favs and waiting for the next fic :-) you are my fav writer :-) thanks a lot

Author's Response: Hola, Ninel! Thank you so much for letting me know on your favorite writer! High praise like that is what's going to keep me coming back and writing more. Hopefully within a couple of weeks I'll have up a new chapter for a new story. I look forward to getting into a whole new world with you.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/14 12:25 am Title: Full Circle

i'm so sad this is over!!! *bawls like a baby*

okay, now that that's over with...

thanks for the last bit of twin smut! even if it was just a blow job. and thank you for not making bu kiss bill right after tom came in his mouth. that would have just been...*shudder*

i teared up when the twins were in poppi's office and tom got a little teary. and naming the little girl poppy is just adorable! i love it!

must admit, i wouldn't have minded some tom/raf action. but not in bill and tom's happy place. that would have been sacreligous or something. lol

typing all this on my phone and my thumbs are getting tired so that's all.

loved this, loved kl, and i can't wait to read more from you!

Author's Response: I'm really sad it's over too!! My mind keeps wanting to go on with the story because I don't have the new one start just yet. I feel like I've abandoned myself. I hope the ending wrapped up everything the way I wanted it to; I was a little rushed, so I'm a little worried about it. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and were always so diligent in reviewing. It's the reviews that keep me going! I will be working on more stories, so I hope to see you there! Thanks again for always taking the time to review, it really means a lot!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/14 05:23 am Title: Dreams

Hi, just a quick pop in to say I've read the chapter, and loved it, as always. So happy Bu's got the use of his hands back and is making up for lost spanking time. Loved both his and Bill's insecurities. Andrej and Tom are pregnant again...but have to wait to have a baby until Gia's been fed(hilarious). As for Bill's dreams...oh, I have a very good idea who's coming, just one word 'reincarnation'. Gotta go now. Life is still not back to normal after the funeral and stuff and Xmas is in 3 weeks and I haven't done a damn thing for it. Hope all is ok with you. Love and hugs, Helen xx

Author's Response: Hi Helen! I know it's going to be a busy month for you, but I hope things are going back to normal. Life is moderately hectic here, but not too bad. I hope the most recent chapters I haven't seemed to rushed. I hate having to take two weeks to write them! But I've been using the Dragon software, which actually works really well. But I have to hand write, and then dictate. I've been trying to just talk out parts of the story, but it's awkward and choppy. And I really need this last chapter to be good! Hope you're working on your crafts for Christmas presents! Talk to you soon, lots of kisses

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/14 02:06 pm Title: Working

Tom fucking Bill against the window at the fiftyeth floor????? Oh. My. God.
I always wonder what you will come up with every chapter. I am never dissapointed. Your imagination and talent are endless.
Wonderful, my darling!!! Thank you!

Author's Response: What else is there to do with a wall of windows? It practically demands sex! Especially by cute incestual gay twins! I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed that scene, I nearly had to write it with my eyes closed to get the images right. Which was fun. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, lynn Ivan, it's always good to hear from you :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/14 04:07 pm Title: Dreams

typed up a whole review, only to discover i wasn't logged in. fuck! let's see if i remember it all.

*ahem*

i love how bill goes from this cute little mumbling-in-his-sleep guy to the guy who likes to have his mouth fucked. only bill! lol
and shit yeah, bill can be in charge! he learned from the best!
and tom's gonna be a daddy again. eh. can he at least fuck bill again before the story's over?

yeah. okay. i think that was everything.

Author's Response: I hate it when that happens! And don't worry will try to squeeze in one more bill and Tom before everything wraps up. Bill could probably use some more mouth fucking. I'm sad it's wrapping up, but I'm excited to get to the next story. Hopefully the ending of this one isn't too rushed. I've really appreciated all your reviews!

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/14 04:46 am Title: Dreams

Loved it!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! See you next chapter

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