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Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/14 04:11 pm Title: Working

Don't leave meee

Author's Response: Leave you?? NEVER! KL/KE will end, but there are going to be new ones for your entertainment, I promise!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/14 01:31 pm Title: Working

Hi, just popping in to leave a quick review to let you know I've read the chapter and loved it...as if you could write anything I didn't love. Tom and Andrej trying to produce baby batter while Brooke is watching The Price Is Right...LOL!!!! Bill and Tom fucking against that plate glass window...so fucking hot!!! Ani practically lecturing Andrej on how to view and accept the twins' relationship...such a turn around. Bill taking care of Ani, even wiping his arse...who'd have thought. As usual, so much I could comment on, but I'll leave it at that. Except to say I'll really miss the Trumperos when this story ends; I've lived with them for so long now I feel like part of the family. Hope all is okay with you and the private family stuff you mentioned in your email. Hugs, Helen x

Author's Response: I'm so glad you had some time to relax and read a chapter when things are on the hectic side! I feel like the chapters are petering out, but at the same time, there are lots of little details that are helping to wrap things up. I'm going to miss this story, too - we've been in it together for a long, long, LONG time! But I really miss Poppi - he sort of anchored the whole thing for me. I'm hoping to get this one neatly wrapped up in the next few weeks (busy life, bad arms and holidays are going to make it a little slow, unfortunately!) and then we'll be on to the next. I keep wondering if I want to take the time to clean up my older stories, especially Delusions. I love that one, but I'm re-reading it now and wow, it's pretty damned sloppy. But, with so many new ones that need to be written, I will probably keep doing fast and sloppy, and just wince at the bad parts later! Things are going okay here, hope it's the same for you. Love n smooshes, M.

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/14 03:26 am Title: Working

:-)

Author's Response: :^D !

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/14 12:12 am Title: Working

nooooo! i don't want this to end!!!

yay for twinly happy time! although the mental image of them still "attached" as they hurtle down to the sidewalk was a little odd. and the thought of ani willing to hobble next door so the twins can have even more twinly happy time is still sorta weird. but whatever. it means more twinly happy time!

Author's Response: I know, I don't, either! But we're getting some good twintime in, and even spiced up with such interesting images as them fucking while they fall out a 50th story window! How fun is THAT?!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/14 11:53 pm Title: Working

Ahh my KE senses were tingling!

Author's Response: It was sooo overdue! Wish I could keep up with posting once a week. Every two weeks is depressing the heck out of me.

Reviewer: Missy P Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/14 02:10 am Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

Same here THF is one of my lil escape, I don't even brows anymore I just read stories I get email alerts for. Everytime u post I get an email other than that I just go through the motiins. It'll be ok just take ur time with it n go with wat u feel. Its wat I try to do

Reviewer: Missy P Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/14 05:39 pm Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

Ok, I will admit I do like critics and arguments about truly deep subjects and being agnostic I like do dig for more. I ddnt actually finish the book, I was readin it the we had to move so it got lost in da caos n I only found it cos I was lookin for sumn else.
I'm more of a read it fist and then read all about it. I just like to form my own opinion and make my own critic first then see who agrees with me n who can inlighten me. I'm glad u found it b all that info bout it, Bt I'm more of a keep an open mind type of person, bein too critical can blind u. I like to think its that one point that makes all the difference n if u go in with ur mind set that point won't matter and life matters therefore things need to matter too. I no I make no sense Bt I get it. Lemme no wat u think of the book wen u actually read it

Author's Response: I agree with you completely! ........I think.....lol..... You have to walk a fine line with skepticism, and super opinionated me, I like to jump to conclusions pretty quick! I'll let you know when I read it (it will probably be a while, RL is hectic and kind of unhappy at the moment!)

Reviewer: Missy P Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/14 05:38 pm Title: Poppi's Boys, All Grown Up

Ok, I will admit I do like critics and arguments about truly deep subjects and being agnostic I like do dig for more. I ddnt actually finish the book, I was readin it the we had to move so it got lost in da caos n I only found it cos I was lookin for sumn else.
I'm more of a read it fist and then read all about it. I just like to form my own opinion and make my own critic first then see who agrees with me n who can inlighten me. I'm glad u found it b all that info bout it, Bt I'm more of a keep an open mind type of person, bein too critical can blind u. I like to think its that one point that makes all the difference n if u go in with ur mind set that point won't matter and life matters therefore things need to matter too. I no I make no sense Bt I get it. Lemme no wat u think of the book wen u actually read it

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/14 09:55 am Title: Coming Home

Oh no, epilogues...I can't quit you! *sob* I really hope you write more twincest soon after or may just shrivel up.

Author's Response: There's a chapter to go before the epilogue, kireinayorudakara, so that gives us a little more time together! More twincest? Related or Not-related? I've got a couple of ideas for future stories, so it's a grab-bag right now; get in your vote!

Reviewer: Missy P Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/14 02:58 pm Title: Coming Home

Not that this is a seriously too many word to read n still have a life long ass story Bt epilogue? So soon? *giggle*
I guess I can do with a happy endin
Missed da Halloween story, had no web 4 a bit bt I'll check it out. I hope uv been lookin 4 dat book I told u bout, I wish I could find an ebook n email it 2 u Bt I dnt shop online, just wanna no wat u think of it

Author's Response: Hello, Missy P! I know, this story seems too short to me, too, but it can't go on forever, unfortunately - I've got others to write! Hope you like the halloween shorty, I wrote it super fast, so it really could use some smoothing out. Which I won't do. Because I'm lazy and I've mooovved on. Anyway, about the book... I'll start off by saying that I actually believe in reincarnation. It makes logical sense to me that everything on this planet gets recycled. However, I don't and won't ever believe in any kind of god, ever. I'm a hard core atheist! I googled MLMM to see who wrote it, what the premise was, and to read an excerpt or two. As someone who actually believes in reincarnation, I like finding out about other people's stories about it. But I am also a big skeptic, so I googled "MLMM Fake" just to see what would come up, and I found this: http://weshagen.wordpress.com/2010/05/25/a-skepticatheist-critic-of-the-bestseller-many-lives-many-masters-by-brian-weiss/ I think any best selling book by anyone who claims to have evidence of ghosts, reincarnation, ufo's, or anything else paranormal, needs to be approached with a skeptical point of view. The critique of MLMM was very interesting, and makes a few solid points. I'm glad you recommended the book, I am intrigued when any reliable sources (i.e. - not reality show people like Ghost Hunters) provide what they believe to be evidence of the paranormal. But I'm definitely going in with a skeptic's eye wide open! The book is available on pdf for free, so I'll probably download it eventually, just to check it out. I'm pretty sure the critique is going to be fairly accurate, though, but I may disagree with that guy, instead! I love analyzing just about anything, so that's going to be fun! Thanks for the recommendation! :)

Reviewer: shitpisscatfuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/14 10:04 am Title: Coming Home

When it comes to you, the word "epilogue" always makes me wanna cry. Especially with KL/KE! I've been reading this story since I was in China 2 years ago! It got me through shitty roommates in China, shitty roommates when I moved back to my shitty American school, and got me through all of senior year with shitty everything, including roommates, which by now I've complained to you about enough for 5 lifetimes. And now it's going to abandon me during my shitty 5th year that I'm barely scraping out an existence during? Awesome.

On the bright side, the sooner KE wraps up, the closer and closer I get to the possibility of an original with Zane/Raf....

Or, you know, if you wanted to be real nice to me (and mean to your arms) I remember you mentioned an alternate path to KL that involved Bill sticking around with David...

Not that I think you won't, but definitely inform me if you start writing/posting stories somewhere else in the internet universe.

I just hope there's more Billshido than just a blow job before this all wraps up for good.

Author's Response: Wow, we've been in this KL/KE universe for a long, long time, haven't we, spcf? I'm thinking it's got a chapter and an epilogue to go. Time to move on... I'll be all melancholy for a while. For your shitty 5th year? I'll try to get the Z/R story out a little faster! And I really want to do a short with a pervy Dave and very young Bill! Sigh... something's going to have to be put on the back-burner, damn it. As for more Billshido...? I hope so!

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/14 05:50 am Title: Coming Home

Awh :-):-):-)

Author's Response: Www, thanks!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/14 01:43 am Title: Coming Home

what? epilogue? this story can't end! it has to go on and on forever!

so yeah, thanks for making me tear up there at the end. and please tell me brooke isn't going to go all psycho and try and take the twins or anything. cuz i'd have to cut a bitch

Author's Response: Well, elvisfan, it would be really nice if this could last forever, wouldn't it? But there are other stories to write! But there may be a short offshoot to this one in the near future! And if brook decided to try that, I'D be cutting a bitch! I'm thinking two more chapters! See you next time!

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/14 04:56 pm Title: Sky High

:-)

Author's Response: :oD

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/14 04:19 pm Title: Sky High

Andi is such a fucking pervert, I absolutely love him. It doesn't take a lot to keep him happy; acceptance into the family, being able to blow shit up and watching the twins make out in the back seat. He's so loyal it's really sweet. The violence was...violent. Funny Bill's 'ew, ew. ew' after that first whack. I seem to recall he reacted exactly the same way the first time he ever hit someone in KL. He soon got over his scruples though with the help of Tom's encouragement and DiFiore's smart mouth. Love Tom's whispered confession to that shit before they left him for the others to finish off. Oh,beyond cute and sweet and everything sugary that both Andrej and Bu are thinking of housing options that will give the twins their own space, because, really it can't be much fun for them having to fuck quickly and quietly evey time for fear of being overheard. I think Andrej's going to be overuled 3 to 1, and Trump Towers would suit them all much better than some typical gated mansion house. So old school mafia and, like Bill and Ani both think, its time to change all that and bring the image into the modern world. You can never include too much detail for me; you have this way of making even the most mundane situation interesting. You know, I never want this story to end although I know you're working your way towards the conclusion now. I've lived with this world of the whole Trumpero family for far too long to not feel a wrench when it's done. So, for me you can add as much detail and as many more chapters as you like. I hope you manage to get those hallowe'en stories done as well; last year's one was amazing. That's all I've got for now. Get writing like crazy, girl, you have another chapter of KE and only 2 weeks till hallowe'en! What, me a slave driver? Love and hugs, Helen xx

Author's Response: Hello Helen! I just love Andy too! I wish there was a way for him to get a little more twin action. Maybe they will reward him one day. I'll keep that idea on the list for a one shot. I wonder if the assault was too sterile. Okay, I'm giving up on Dragon software for now....having to repeat every single sentence and word half a dozen times is crazy. My cell phone's text-dictate works like a charm! I hate it when things don't work the way they should!! Well, it's weird to dictate anyway.... And now it'll be on to the new properties! I loooove houses... I've been perusing chicago real estate for the next Trumpero stronghold. You can google Trump Tower condos and see where they might live next! I'm all decorating them...walking through the rooms, seeing Tom and Andrej on the couch with the kids, Bill and Bu arguing over what furniture to buy, Tom and Bill in their own little space... Bu is really into supporting the twins; Andrej does it begrudgingly. It's an interesting difference. I'm so glad you don't want this story to end! As you can tell, I'm pretty attached myself! I can picture every part of their homes so well, it feels like I practically live there. I'm quite familiar with how Chicago neighborhoods look like now, even though I've only ever flown through (and sound asleep, thanks to the Xanax and beer!). And yes, it'll be very difficult to give this up. The off-shoot I have planned will be short (ish...I'm not good at short), although I'd love to go into the future with a couple of shorts, with Luca being a very pretty gay boy. But I also have the halloween stories (damn it, I'll have to keep it to one! I need six more hands!), and I really want to do a couple of erotica stories (Bill and Dave! Bill and DAAAVVEE!!). But the next long one I was planning isn't quite all the way formed, so I'll have to see if it's cohesive enough to write. Otherwise...I've got no big epic planned, and that's driving me crazy! Karmic Lessons was itching at my brain about half way through Delusions. Well, I still have this one to finish up, so I'd better get to it! I need a slave driver! Life is, unfortunately, pretty damned hectic, on top of my wicked-bad arms, so I'm already anxious that I won't have enough time to write as much as I want to in the next few months. Anyway, I'm off to chapter 29! Love n hugging the stuffing out of you!

Reviewer: Polabear Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/14 10:10 pm Title: Sky High

ENDING SOON? But...But...But there's so much going on! what about brooke? The new baby? Andy's wedding? SO MUCHH! *whispers* 55 seems like a good number to start with :)

Author's Response: As in, I'll be 55 by the time this is finished? The main plot of the story, the whole reason I started it (*cough*Billshido*cough*) is winding up nicely. I've got a small side-story to write, though. And maybe I could do some one-shot side-stories if I get any requests (Andy's wedding sounds pretty good). And I've got more stories coming, Polabear! If you have anything you'd like to see, let me know, I always like ideas!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/14 10:09 pm Title: Sky High

¡Tengo una mente muy creativa, aunque completamente loca! I have several ideas to share with you :) for really good Billshidos. Besos

Author's Response: compartir sus ideas, me encantaría escucharlos, señora loca! I'm a diehard Billshido gal, as we all know! mushy kisses!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/14 10:01 pm Title: Sky High

Or you can write something about Bu being an indigent and Bill rich or both homeless. It could be interesting... No more twincest please!

Author's Response: Hmmm...poor Bu, rich Bill.... I like, I like! And I'll be laying off the twincest for a couple stories (or it'll be NOT related, is that okay?). Thanks for the idea, Constanza! Es bueno!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/14 09:31 pm Title: Sky High

I don't like your Bu helping the twins :/ Btw, you should write a story about straight Bu with his baby girl and that Anna Maria bitch meeting gorgeous long hair no muscles with make up Bill and getting head over heels about him! You're great at describing situations and... well, in general.

Author's Response: What!! But I thought we LIKE it when people are on the twin team!! I don't know anything about the RL Bushido really, but I HAD been planning on writing something along those lines as one of 3 halloween stories. Unfortunately, I don't know if I'll even have time for one, but I think I'll write it anyway! Once KE is done, of course... Which I'm thinking is going to be pretty soon... OH NO! I'll miiisss it!

Reviewer: Polabear Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/14 03:42 am Title: Sky High

TO TRUMP TOWERS! I love the details! No such thing as too many details! Can't wait for some Billshido time! Another great chapter mizu!

Author's Response: And the crowd of one goes wild!!! *takes a bow* lol...I could spend an entire chapter decorating the condos and describing dinner...but we need to get to the billshido part!!!

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