Date: 03/05/14 02:26 am Title: Chapter 9
I can't believe you ended it this way D: poor Roxy and Tom why did he cry? who cared and who was broken? we are talking about Roxy right because Ria fits neither those descriptions :P When is the sequel coming out???
Author's Response: I'll be posting the sequel after I've finished In Die Nacht. I don't want to put too much on myself.
Date: 02/24/14 09:47 am Title: Chapter 9
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Simone is definitely trying to kill Bill!
Maaaan, what a crazy people!
Author's Response: Lmao
Date: 02/23/14 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm actually so happy Bill is a giant douche in this.. all the other stories Ive read he's so sweet and innocent. It's good to finally have a change up! Can't wait for the next chapter!![:
Author's Response: It's a nice turn of the tables. I was going to make Tom a huge douche but he's already been put in that spot so many times that it's time he's seen in another light.
Date: 02/23/14 05:12 am Title: Chapter 8
Situation could change easily..Bill is all about his image
Roxy should use the medias to tell the truth. Show there is no contraction signed at all and reveal his hate for poor peuple. To be seen as à heartless monster Will do him good
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your input. It's nice to hear what my readers think and that's a good possible outcome and while I like it I have a nice way to get Bill and make the world realize that he's a monster.
Date: 02/22/14 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't know how strong one must be to able to take what his mother told him, if my mother were to ever tell me that, I would break down and cry. omg omg omg! I'm so happy he finally brokeup with Ria jeez. Btw you mentioned he beat the only woman who cared about him? um would that be Ria? because if so pffft she don't care about him just his money. And he beat her?! his addiction must've been strong. And wow what a way to find out your baby will be taken away I say let her run away with Tom, but I have a feeling Toms got a plan up his sleeve to help Roxy keep her baby. Amazing chapter, I hate cliffies! :P
Author's Response: Sorry it's a cliffhanger but it draws people to read when it's posted. As for the beating part, that'll be explained as the story goes along. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Yeah I guess you can say I'm a little fucked up with the way I wrote how she found out but it makes for a interesting read.
Date: 02/22/14 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I ment to leave th last comment on chapter 7. My bad lol
Date: 02/22/14 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
I read this last night and I was going to comment then, but I was way too tried to even try lol. Anyway I for got to say in my last comment on how disgusted I was with Bills mom. How could she encourage her child to purge so he can be skinny. Then how she took pride in to being the one who showed him how to do it properly. That made me really mad.
Now about this chapter. Bills mother is ruthless. I can't Believe she sent a hit man to torture and all most kill Roxy in to telling the truth even though she really was. What kind of heartless person would do that.
I just feel so bad for Roxy I just hope she fights to keep her baby girl. And I hope Tom tells her that Bill plans on taking her baby away from her as soon as she's born.
This was a great chapter I am looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I was worried that people would hate this one but I guess I did a pretty good job.
Date: 02/21/14 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lol love Bushido for that joke cracked at Bill. Still don't like Bill even so if he helped Tom what Bill is doing is morally wrong, Tom is just trying to see that everyone gets fair treatment and Bill is a snob to hell and back. Lovely update :)
Author's Response: Thank you so so so much. I was worried that people would hate it. I felt like I was failing with content the whole time I was writing it, I was skeptical about posting it but I'm glad you're liking it. I hope the following post will be just as good. :)
Date: 02/21/14 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hate Bill and his mother oh and Ria too, I just am in awe you know. WHy would Bill get angry? If he doesn't even care jeez. Please don't make her end up with Bill, his persona is so effed up he needs more than therapy. About Tom chosing his dad and whatnot, wanna know something weird in real life I think Tom would chose his dads side over his moms side, idk just peg him as a guy thats closer to his dad. Didn't they say in an interview that Bill is closer to his mom and Tom to his dad? I hope nothing bad happens to Roxy. I hate cliffies :P update!
Author's Response: In Bill's head he feels like Roxy being seen making out with someone else is an insult on her part being that she told him that she's pregnant with his baby. But we both know what really happened.
Date: 02/21/14 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
Roxy is such a dreamer it's cute but I wish she would just see that Bill is no good at all. She shouldn't surround herself with those kind of people. She is stressing herself out and doesn't even see it.
Tom really needs to drop Ria. She is using him and he knows it. I would never stay with someone like that even if it helped my image. Poor Tom.
Bill and the rest of his family are all jerks. They don't deserve to have Tom the rest of his band and Roxy in their lives. They are too good to be part of bills life.
This was a great chapter looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was hoping it'd would be good.rn
Date: 02/04/14 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
hahahhaah bushido ahahahaha sick bastard...im surprised ria doesnt say nothing at bills remarks..clearly he doesnt like her yet ria still backs bill..but cant blame her she wants to so desperately fit into that world of bills..i bet she likes bill or would have loved for tom to be like bill....my eyebrow twitched in this chapter..you know when you get disgusted by someone they just repel so bad..haha oh ja im talkin bout bill..updateeeeeeeee
Author's Response: Ria is starving for attention. Bill merely mentioning her name whether he's insulting her or not is an honor to her. She feels that maybe Bill will start to notice her when he couldn't care less. I am not bringing this up in the story so I thought I'd clarify in the reviews. Bill is God to her and she only settles for Tom because he's Bill's identical twin. If she had the chance she would have Bill's baby. She basically would kiss his entire ass and lick it if it meant she got to be in Bill's circle.
Date: 02/04/14 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
i fucking hate bill....in this story....and thats a strong word..hmmmm hateeee hahaha...wanna know something i have always thought that bill makes a better villain than tom...theres just something of a baby face coming from tom that doesnt do it for me to make him a villain....hope bill falls on his ass...
Author's Response: Bill as a villain is so deliciously unexpected that I love making him the bad boy. It's fun to write him in this role because it makes you question his "innocence". But people are so used to Tom being the "bad boy" that it's nice and refreshing to see the tables turned.
Date: 02/04/14 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
tom got it baaaad..tehehehhe...its like shes his refuge now if only roxx would see him as her refuge..then all was well in the land of oz lol...
Author's Response: *chuckles* Land of Oz, that's funny.
Date: 02/03/14 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Roxy Roxy Roxy when will she open her eyes and see that Bill will never change. Tom even told her he has been the way he is since they were young. Oh and Tom so has fallen for Roxy. I hope he doesn't get his poor heart broken. I think Roxy will change her mind about Bill when she finds out he plans on taking her baby away and letting his soon to be wife name the baby and raise it.
Is it mean for me to want bills life to crash and burn?
Author's Response: It's not mean that you want his life to crash and burn. I think everyone does, but they haven't expressed those thoughts yet.rn
Date: 02/03/14 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
So Bill was her first, Roxy honey its ok not everyone stays with their first, I speak from experience. I was laughing so bad at how many time Bill got her name wrong lol! At the same time I was like gosh I want to strangle him and slap him, you know how Homer strangles Bart Simpson. I knew this was coming, you are going to justify his actions aren't you? Aria and Bill are made for each other keep them together, still rooting for Tom, he is just surrounded by dubauchery and thats including Ria even she takes advantage of Tom. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Nope, I am not Bill is just a douche without cause I just thought I'd add how much he hates himself but he's been like this his whole damn life.
Date: 02/03/14 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
No I don't think Roxy loves Bill, not after just a ONS. But she seems like she wants to hang on to something that wasn't even there to begin with. Tom has fallen for her and I feel bad for him, seeing that she's 'hung up' on Bill. I only see this going one way and that is Tom getting attached and getting hurt and Bill winning. *sigh* Man nice guys always finish last. Dislike Bill even more, abortion? Taking the baby away? Blaming Tom for 'his' bad influence? ARGH!
Author's Response: Your reviews on this so far have been interesting and they have actually made me think. There are so many ways this could play out and I think that the way I wrote it will be a fitting end to this story. But I will not give any hints being that we are a whole ten or so chapters from the end. It's really nice that people noticed that Tom has fallen for her, despite it being sickeningly obvious. But I think once I post the next one, things will fall more into place. I haven't gotten so excited for a story like this before. But since I am still working on the others being that I literally lost most of the files for them, I am happy that this one has been found and it will finished and then I will begin the others.
Date: 02/03/14 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Rah bill is making me SO MAD!!!
Author's Response: Lol, he's making us all angry.
Date: 02/03/14 03:22 am Title: Chapter 4
So I just read all four of these chapters in about 15 minutes and that's a good thing. I have two words I used to describe bill and that is MEGA DOUCHE.
The two things that made me dislike Bill was when he practically told his own TWIN BROTHER that he was beneath him. What kind of person says that to their other half. The second was when when he planed on taking the baby away from Roxy after it was born. What kind of Person takes a baby from their mother. It's not like she is a hooker who is a drug addict and an alcoholic. I just feel bad for Tom and Roxy because they are being hurt by the person they love the most.
Author's Response: I can't tell you how much I love analytical reviews. OmBK, thanks so much for reading and leaving this. This like really shows you've read it and I really appreciate it. Okay, Bill is a mega douche and does hurt people. That's his MO and he gets off on hurting people. As you've read he cares about nothing but his image. So of course he'll hurt anyone who he thinks could in the middle of that. He knows that if anyone finds out about Roxy that they may look at him differently and that scares him. That makes him worry about the future. He is getting married and his family is a group of stuck up snobs so they agree with him insulting people. On the other hand you have Tom who didn't fall into his family's snobbish attitude he remained humble and that's because of his band. They keep him grounded which is why Bill said he tolerates the band because he's his brother. But he is still a douche bag who cares about his image. Tom knows this and has made it clear that he hates how Bill behaves plus he knows a few secrets about his twin. Again thanks so much for reading.
Date: 02/02/14 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my Geez lol. I'm so used to Tom being the asshole that this is just a shock to me lol. Great job honey. Keep it going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am hoping the new one will be validated soon so you may read.
Date: 02/02/14 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg wait wait wait. You are going so fast! Holdup, ok so wow I don't like none of those people, I don't like the twins mom. Everyone except Tom that is seem like a stuck up snot nosed nobissh rich people. That classify people by classes, and wealthy and rank. I can't believe Bill told Tom "low class like you" just because of his band and that he only tolerates because thats his brother. I mean WOW, and here is comes OMFG I can't believe Tom feels so bold and kissed Roxy haha. Sweet!
Author's Response: I thought I'd like to include that in this when I write it so yeah, I had fun writing this one and I want to show that Tom has always had this little vendetta against his family but you really start to see now.