Reviews For Lord Of The Flies
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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/25 03:11 am Title: IT POUNCES

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: lunallena Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/15 09:10 am Title: IT POUNCES

Aaaaah I loved it! and the end couldn't be more perfect, I really liked it! Such an amazing...two-shots? haha :)

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! Your reviews are awesome, and they mean a lot, especially for this fic. This was the ugly duckling in my writing, and it took forever to finish. It kept pulling me in different directions every time I sat down to write it... nightmare, really. lol. And two-shot? Naw. It's technically one long one-shot that I split in 2 cuz of the length. Thanks again!! :)

Reviewer: lunallena Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/15 08:20 am Title: IT LURKS

oooh very interesting, I like how is all well described, liked it!

Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad you liked it! I had such a hard time writing this fic.. lol.

Reviewer: SakuraBliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/14 01:32 pm Title: IT POUNCES

I like this... I want more :)

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Glad u like it, unfortunately I'm not planning on writing more in this universe. It was hard enough coming up w this, lol! and IMO was rather uninspired writing on my part. :( Try one of my other fics tho, they're all "first time" so u may find something else u like. :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/14 12:46 am Title: IT POUNCES

This was quite an amazing story. I wasn't sure if Bill was going to actually end up believing Tom but I'm really glad he did. I have a feeling that Simone and Gordon are going to have some pretty harsh words when they come out of the woods though. :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah I suppose when your dick of a brother tries to tell u he's madly in love w you, one would tend not to believe that immediately, lol. In the end, like many teenagers, they end up making some bad and rash decisions which is perfectly fine as a plot device for SMUT! Woohoo! Super glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Nessie-san Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/14 10:13 pm Title: IT LURKS

Oh god, poor Bill!! He must be terrified! I mean, this is in Tom's POV, so it's a bit hard to tell, but it seems like Bill would really hate his brother. Tom's everything that normally hates Bill, I can't imagine he'd be too pleased with Tom coming up to him after he'd just yelled at him AGAIN, and then not letting him get away *shudder* I know I'D be terrified... I'm not sure I see how this can turn out well for Tom...

Author's Response: Good to hear from you and thank you for your thoughtful review!! I'll say that Bill is slightly more sensible than Tom is, but he opens up a bit more. Also, Tom's a bit panicked when he first confronts Bill, so that accounts for his irrational pushiness. The second part tells you a bit more about their background and... whatever else happens. lol. :) rnJust remember that they are teenagers and teenagers dont always think before acting.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/14 01:02 pm Title: IT LURKS

Great story. Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: YAY! I'm so happy you like it. :) Thank you.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 09:35 pm Title: IT LURKS

cant wait for more

Author's Response: Glad to hear that. :) More is coming soon. :)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 01:57 pm Title: IT LURKS

nice :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 12:08 pm Title: IT LURKS

dun dun duuunnn!

Author's Response: Haha, just wait. It gets better. :P

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 03:18 am Title: IT LURKS

Daaaaaaammmmmmnnnnnnn ........CLIFFHANGER ....!!! >

Author's Response: Hehehehe, oops. *evil*

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 02:23 am Title: IT LURKS

Hooked!

Author's Response: WooHoo!! Super glad to hear it. Second part will be posted within a week. :)

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