Date: 01/16/17 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
please update soom
Date: 02/17/14 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Oh I'm really lovin this!
I like option 4. Build up some trust before trying to take Bill away from the place he's obviously been at for much too long. Excited for more!
Date: 02/04/14 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Brilliant start! Can't wait until the next chapterr..hehehe :D:D:D
Date: 02/04/14 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
1 or 2 :)
Date: 02/04/14 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
(Sorry that posted twice)
Date: 02/04/14 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Love, love, love, love it! Please update soon and I would like to see 1, 3 and 4 xD
Date: 02/04/14 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Love, love, love, love it! Please update soon and I would like to see 1, 3 and 4 xD
Date: 02/04/14 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
id like to see 1. Tom return to the house and i'd also like to see number 2. if that could be combined somehow? loved it! great story and i'm excited for the next chapter :D
Date: 02/04/14 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Wow this gave me chills, so realistic. I love it! please keep writing
Date: 02/03/14 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
I vote for number 2. Bill to follow Tom home
Date: 02/01/14 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Very good! "4"
Date: 01/31/14 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Looking forward to this :)
Date: 01/30/14 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Waaat? Bill killed someone? Whose corpes is that? Wtf?
Date: 01/30/14 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
I want Tom's friends to find him but I want them to be nice to him like Tom and try to help him ...........and then Tom panics cause he can't find him but he finds him in one of his friends house ...........BTW amazing story one chappie made I'm absolutely hooked update soon darling I will be waiting
Date: 01/30/14 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Hi, I just needed to say that this is amazing. From the story-line so far, right down to the way you've written this.
The way you write dialogue in particular is perfect, there's something really natural about it and I can totally envision the characters saying the stuff you've written. You're such a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of this.
Personally, I wouldn't mind either, "1.) Tom return and take Bill home." Or "2.) Bill to follow Tom home." because I think they'd both bring something amazing out of this.
Job well done! xxxxx
Date: 01/30/14 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
1 tom return :)
Date: 01/30/14 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Hmmm 1, 3, 4 and 5 (in a flashback) seem like the most realistic. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm excited to see where you go from here!
Date: 01/30/14 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1:: Discovering
Wow! Talking about the chills lol :P