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Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/14 12:22 am Title: Chapter 20

Finally, Tom takes control of the beast. She was beginning to be too much for me to handle lol. I was feeling sorry for Tom even tho he deserved some of it.

Author's Response: Yeah I figured it was time for her to simmer down with her attitude lol

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/14 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm proud of Tom!! LOL I'm happy that Adrienne has softened a little bit too. Can't wait for the update :)

Author's Response: He's really growing up! LOL I'll update soon!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/14 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 19

She should have just locked him in the basement -.- No, but I actually feel bad for Tom only because he's being so awkward. What is he going to solve if he just curls up into a ball and acts like a mime? LOL I can't wait for the update :)

Author's Response: LOL exactly!!! Tom needs to quit being a little coward

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/14 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm kind of curious to see how Adrienne and Chelsea's relationship is going to pan out because Chelsea, as her best friend, should have known better than to bring Tom over to her house lmao

Author's Response: lmao exactly! I would KILL my best friend

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/14 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 16

Uh oh! Lol. I can't wait to read what happens when he does show up at her door. If he doesn't chicken out that is.

Author's Response: lol I'll be updating soon!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/14 01:48 am Title: Chapter 16

If Tom is at her front door, there is no doubt in my mind that she's going to slam it in his face LOL Honestly, I'm glad that she's come to terms with the situation and is moving on. She deserves better than Tom right now! I loved this chapter lol Chelsea and the twins thought they were so sly but they totally failed LOL

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you !

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/14 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 15

Tom is an awful liar LOL I can't wait for the update :)

Author's Response: He is! lol and I'm writing the chapter now so hopefully it'll be up by tomorrow!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/14 01:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Omg you totally rolled with the idea!! :D Of course Tom is silent -.- I bet he'll 'occupy' himself on the day of her leaving so he doesn't have to face her. Or he'll get super mad again LOL

Author's Response: lol it was a good idea and totally fit!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/14 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 13

I honestly thought he would have hit her and it's kind of scary to see that his first reaction was to raise his hand against her!! I feel like Tom would do something stupid like throw himself deeper into the gang and drugs or sleep with more girls to block out his anger.. Also! I'm glad that Bill finally knows that Chelsea is/might be pregnant LOL :)

Author's Response: You actually gave me a good idea for the next chapter! So thank you! :DD

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/14 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 12

It's weird but I enjoy seeing the angry side of Tom. I almost want to see him angry like all the time LOL I can't wait for the update :)

Author's Response: lmfao me too! it's kind of hot, is that weird? I'll be updating soon! [:

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/14 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 12

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'll be updating soon! [:

Reviewer: loli2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/14 11:41 am Title: Chapter 12

I want tom to know about the pregnancy please!!

Author's Response: It might happen!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/14 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 11

I so want Ryan out of the picture. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thank you! [:

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/14 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 11

"I am Tom" :O Internally screaming right now LOL Ugh, Ryan is such a fuckface! I'm glad Tom beat the shit out of him :D I can almost imagine how excited Bill would be if Chelsea was pregnant omg!! But, I couldn't imagine what would happen if Tom found out about Adrienne's abortion. Like he clearly has some anger issues from his new lifestyle so idk how he would react.. Wonderful work :)

Author's Response: LOL I felt like I left the chapter on such a strong note it made me proud because I could totally see him making it clear who he was! And yeah, Tom would probably freak out! Thank you so much I appreciate it! [:

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/14 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

I think I died a little when she finally told Tom that she was scared of him.. Ugh. I hate that she's stuck between two guys who are both so shitty! LOL I can't wait for the update :)

Author's Response: Lol I'll be updating in a few minutes hopefully!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/14 01:53 am Title: Chapter 9

Can we set Adalina on fire? Boys are literally so stupid -.-

Author's Response: they really are -___-

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wtf Ryan -.- wtf Tom -.- wtf bill -.-

Author's Response: hahaha!

Reviewer: alessandrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

Ryan seems like a huge douchebag, I have such a bad feeling about him, I think he'll do something very bad to either Adrienne or Tom, heh..
I honestly hope Tom will beat the life out of him :D

Author's Response: he just might! [:

Reviewer: alessandrah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 05:25 am Title: Chapter 7

This is going to be sooo gooood :D update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will!

Reviewer: Throwyourarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 12:42 am Title: Chapter 7

To be honest, I completely forgot that she had a boyfriend in this chapter LOL The chemistry she has with Tom is unbelievable! Like honestly, what other girl would be able to do what she did? Haha, good job with this one!!

Author's Response: Haha right! I wouldn't be able to! Thank you so much! [:

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