Date: 03/24/08 07:29 am Title: Chapter 3
oh this is great
can't wait more
Date: 03/24/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 3
omg....this story is so fucking intense O.O
...
love it
Date: 03/24/08 06:59 am Title: Chapter 3
i feel so sorry for bill! he so sonfused! cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/24/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 3
God, I love this story. It's just so...different.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 03/24/08 05:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bill...he must be going nuts by now. And I agree with him, I don't like Doctor Braun...
Please update soon, ok? OK?
Date: 03/24/08 02:32 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow, this story is so amazing. :)
Date: 03/24/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter 3
man, this chapter tore at the heart strings. Poor confused Bill. This has got to be seriously difficult for him. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Date: 03/22/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
mwahaha...omg...the last part was so funny. ^o^
And the twist with the cyst (^o^) is definitely new.
Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 03/22/08 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2
I thought they where going to cut the baby out for a second!
please update soon ^_^
Author's Response: thank you for reading... :)
Date: 03/22/08 09:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Wooo! Awesome ! Love this story so far!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/22/08 09:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww very good story =)
Author's Response: thank you thank you :)
Date: 03/22/08 06:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg I love this so much. :)
Author's Response: thanks miss :)
Date: 03/22/08 06:30 am Title: Chapter 2
i love it~~i hope Bill will keep it and Tom will support him =)
post more soon please!!!
Author's Response: :) thank you
Date: 03/22/08 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Now it's official. I'm addicted to this fic. I love the way you portray the characters and their emotions. And I can't wait for your next update! *bribes you with cookies*
Author's Response: thank you!! no need to bribe, this fic has run away with me, but i will take those cookies. :)
Date: 03/21/08 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely adore your characterizations, the doctor's confusion, Bill's reluctance and Tom's support.
The dialogue is real and crisp and not a word is wasted. Your writing is streamlined and built for speed; if that makes any sense.
Author's Response: wow, really! :) thank you so much for that - really.
Date: 03/21/08 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this fic a lot, I really like the style and how it is progressing.
Author's Response: thank you for the feedback, this is wonderful to hear :)
Date: 03/21/08 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
HOLY SHIT!!!! NO FREAKIN WAY!!!!! omg i honestly thought he had cancer....cyst usually =cancer....omg omg omg omg omg!!! how is tom going to react?!?!?!??! bahhh!!!! update soon please!!!!
Author's Response: thank you for your review... i hope you update soon, eh! :\
Date: 03/21/08 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm sorry, I'm sorry-- I am sitting here, laughing, because this chapter was just... Wow!! The suspense, it kept mounting and mounting, I was literally on the edge of my seat waiting for Bill to receive the news of his... er... pregnancy. And you didn't even end the chapter with the expected "You're pregnant." No, you chose "A heartbeat." A heartbeat. Wow... that was good.
I am really excited about this. :)
And...
“It’s a tumor,” Doctor Klein says. “A mass, mostly a space filler. Like I said, it is benign but if we do not remove it, there will be consequences.”
I gasped! For one horrible moment I thought the doctor was going to remove it, only for Bill to later discover the truth as to what it really was... D: But, thankfully, that didn't happen. Can't wait for more!
And lastly... I'm glad to know that you like my artwork! Thank you. Now, know that I adore your writing. :)
Author's Response: wow, what a sweet review! :)rnrni am really glad you said that about the suspense, it was something i worried about. i don't usually do "plotty" stories, so i was nervous.rnrn:) really, thank you so, so much...
Date: 03/21/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I like this a lot. Let's see some more.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 03/21/08 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeeeeeeeeeeeee yay :)
Author's Response: =)