Date: 05/16/15 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, i thought Gustav was gonna save him. :( But i'm a bit confused as to what was a dream and what wasn't.
Date: 05/16/15 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh no Tom why you gotta be like that?!
Date: 05/16/15 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
So was that dream like a flashback to when he met Tom? Ah man why has Tom got to be so fucked up. Very interested!
Date: 05/16/15 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh wow the plot thickens. I feel really bad for Tom and all that he was having to endure that but the bit about the cat shocked me! :o and that he showed no remorse... oh no i can tell this is going to escalate. Very intrigued to read on.
Date: 05/16/15 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh wow this is very intriguing!
Date: 02/11/14 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Georg gave up the idea of getting at Bill. I wonder what will happen next.
Date: 02/08/14 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ohhh this is interesting. I love a good, dark story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 02/04/14 01:50 am Title: Chapter 11
This story had me glued from start to finish of the chapter ........update soon darling I will be waiting
Date: 02/03/14 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
I hope someone will save poor Bill.
Date: 02/03/14 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
This Andreas guy is pretty dim in his carelessness.
Date: 02/03/14 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
I guess Bill does the best given the circumstances.
P.S. "Bill thought for a while about what she had heard". You have a typo here: "she"
Author's Response: oops...thanks
Date: 01/17/14 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Did Tom kill Gustav? I do not quite get Tom's motivation. Would be nice to get deeper in his head.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I will work on getting more of Tom's thoughts down
Date: 01/17/14 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
How did Bill not remember that Tom hit him on the parking lot?
Date: 01/17/14 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I wish Bill had enough energy to get away.
Date: 01/17/14 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom is such an evil!
Date: 01/17/14 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I almost feel sad for tom now
Date: 01/17/14 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow It's realy interesting :)
Date: 01/16/14 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom looked like a total creep from the very beginning. I do not understand why Bill decided to give him a chance.