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Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/14 09:40 am Title: Chapter 5

Psycho family

Author's Response: ;)rn

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/14 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5

III KNEEEEW IT!!! I KNEEW IT!!! I KNEW IT!!!
That asshole really did something to Tom, Gordon must suffer and that's why Tom's behavior towards the pelople...
I think that now after Bill saw and heard from and Tom will try to undertand Tom!!!
MORE GIRL!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I am writing the next one right now.

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 07:49 am Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm I liked Tom's reaction when he saw that Bill wasn't there, then rushed to "rescue" him and just after told Gustav to keep the king away from Bill! :-)
I'm sure that the king did something really bad to Tom! =

Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: kez skittle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1

(my last review was cut short for some reason) I think Tom cares for Bill more than his letting on. Im also just waiting for his next inventive move :)

Author's Response: Lol yeah I responded to the other too

Reviewer: kez skittle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 04:49 am Title: Chapter 4

AFGTSHGUVHBVJDJGBBVSURJ!!!! Not the King too!
Not meaning to insult but WHAT is wrong with this family?! geez...
still lovin it though

Author's Response: Thanks so much

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 03:49 am Title: Chapter 4

Ah what happened? Tom seemed surprisingly gentle at the end...kind of. I really hope he'll learn to be sweet, but I don't know what to expect yet. I just really like it! :)

Author's Response: Tom was being nice wasn't he. It's bizarre isn't it.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 02:27 am Title: Chapter 4

oh my O_O please don't tell me his dad did what i think he did???!! :O sick sick sick!! i kinda smiled when Tom carried him back :) *smug grin* this was soo short D:

Author's Response: I know but I was rushing to write it and post it.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/14 01:36 am Title: Chapter 4

i don't have a good feeling about what Gordon did to Bill but i hope it woke-up something in Tom.

Author's Response: We shall see won't we.

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/14 11:52 am Title: Chapter 3

._____.
Yeahh, something really bad happened to Tom for being like this today comparing to his past according to Gustav!!!
I hope that the king will be gentle to Bill and his family! =/
Need more girl :D

Author's Response: I'll post more soon. I love that everyone is so intrigued as to what Tom was like in the past. I wonder how people will react when they hear it.

Reviewer: kez skittle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/14 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

Crying, Crying, I am crying! I don't even cry at movies that's how good this is!
when I said inventive in my last review I meant that I would never had thought to dress Bill like a girl and humiliate him. it was different, a good different ^_^ loving it

Author's Response: Aww, sorry I've made you cry but I think you're the only one who picked up on the inventive behavior. That's why your review intrigued me.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/14 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

yeah, why Tom is doing what he is doing to Bill and everyone. Poor Bill :(

Author's Response: It's a mystery. ;)

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/14 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

As Gustav is so sweet! I feel badly for Bill and I hope the king has compassion. How could he let his son be so cruel?!

Keep the chapters coming! I love it and your story is fantastic and an creative!

Author's Response: It's currently in progress but thanks so much for this at least I know I'm doing good so far.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/14 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Tom is disgusting ugh! I love Gusti :D but I wonder what caused Tom to change and snap :/ beside destroying tha ladies cart :/ hmmm

Author's Response: I have left this a mystery. I loves a mystery it's interesting to me. I'd love to see what the reviewers come up with.

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/14 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

God Damn it Tom ... why do you have to be such a douche bag ........... jealousy will destroy you .......see you soon my darling girl

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: HazelEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/14 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really like the concept of this story. You've definitely gotten my attention! I look forward to more updates :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope I don't fuck up in later chapters and mess up your support.

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/14 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1

"How dare you?! Georg, arrest him!" lol that was funny! what a jerk!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: kez skittle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/14 03:17 am Title: Chapter 2

OMG! This was sad but really good at the same time...
Oh plus..um..I'M REALLY DISLIKING TOM! he's so mean but inventive & just evil. Its so good 0_0
How do u do it?! I do love it

Author's Response: Inventive? Hmm didn't expect someone to describe him that way.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/14 01:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh no! Bill's family! Is it bad that I'm glad Tom didn't ruin Bill's face though? That would just be too horrible. I love this story!

Author's Response: I was hoping I'd get a good deal of emotions from this one. I carefully wrote it out.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/14 12:19 am Title: Chapter 2

Was Bill's little sister really killed? This seems to much even for evil Tom...

Author's Response: Yup she's dead. Its not a act or joke. She's gone.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/14 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tom is so evil. he showed Bill in girls clothes but why he also took after Bill's family. i guess if any possible way they would be close to each other - if they would be that killing Bill's sister would be always in Bill's mind

Author's Response: Yeah he is evil. I was trying to make Tom an evil asshole.

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