Date: 02/25/14 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 17
It's literally in the middle of the night and I'm crying my eyes out... This is so emotional ;;-;;
Can you... Update... So I can cry a little more....? ,_, *Big brown Billa puppy eyes*
Author's Response: *hands you tissues* can you wait til saturday?
Date: 02/25/14 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 17
I don't know if I trust this :(
Author's Response: DUN DUN DUUUUNNNNN!!!
Date: 02/25/14 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm so.... Shocked I have no idea what the hell to say. And i dont know where this is going. Youre doing a terrific job cause I am so confused. Either that or im stupid xD lets go with the first guess xD
Author's Response: confused. totally confused.
Date: 02/25/14 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG You actually redeemed David. I'm so happy I want to laugh and cry at the same time. Now there's just the obstacle of getting Tom to believe that Bill really loves him. Methinks there will be snags in that part of the story too. *sighs* :)
Author's Response: perhaps he can be persuaded
Date: 02/25/14 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 17
I still hate David but...I'm glad that he's going to let Bill go but I get this strange feeling that it's not over. Tom is still clearly hurt and Bill, you're a douche for telling him how happy you are. You need to think before speaking. That is so cruel of you to walk up to the man who's heart you broke and stepped on and just pull that from you ass. While I understand that you left for him, you don't just say stuff like that. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: OMG! bill just meant that he's happier now than he was before WITH DAVID. meaning he's not getting smacked around anymore, so yeah that's happier. not that he's happier with david than with tom! oh lord, we'll call that bad writing on my part! oh, glad you pointed out that tom is still hurt. i was worried people might think i made him sound like a dick.
Date: 02/25/14 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yaay :D love this chapter
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 02/23/14 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
No kidding!!! Sons of anarchy is a Tv show about a motorcycle gang (pretty badass actually haha) and Harley like Harley Davidson de motorcycle brand and jax is the main character of the Tv show XD so i was thinking that there was some reference to SoA in your story haha funny coincidence :P
Date: 02/23/14 09:21 am Title: Chapter 16
I seriously don't know what to think anymore. I'm so confused. Well, im looking forward to the next chapter anyway ;)
Author's Response: that's good. means i'm not too predictable. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/23/14 01:15 am Title: Chapter 16
Hmmm...guess Bill has accepted what's happened and going along for now. Something will happen to spark Davids memory and I think it will be bad for Bill.
Does Tom make an appearance in next chapter?
Author's Response: yes, more tom in all of the remaining chapters
Date: 02/23/14 12:45 am Title: Chapter 16
I wonder how he is going to stay like this... Maybe he'll let Bill go!!!! Harley and jax (im guessing you Watch sons of anarchy?) would be best buddies!!! And i want some Tom action i miss Him :) i love your story!! Keep going you have allll my attention!
Author's Response: i've actually never watched sons of anarchy. i can figure out the harley reference, i'm guessing there's a character named jax? and plenty of tom action in the rest of the story.
Date: 02/23/14 12:41 am Title: Chapter 16
I don't know whether to be happy David's changed from abusive arse to loving husband or pissed that he didn't die... I guess I'll find out next chapter :) Great story x
Author's Response: you wouldn't be the first person i pissed off by making david live
Date: 02/22/14 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
So David's lost his memories of hurting Bill. I wondered if you might try to redeem him. I only hope he lets Bill go back to Tom and the only happiness Bill's known. I still don't like David and hope he can be decent for once in his life. :)
Author's Response: the only happiness bill's known. i love that! it's sad, but it's so true! as for david, you'll find out in the next chapter.
Date: 02/22/14 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
I didn't expect that what would bill do now ?
Author's Response: wait and see, my friend!
Date: 02/22/14 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: me either! thanks for reading!
Date: 02/22/14 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
I've just read this chapter once more...
How could I have missed this?
"The migraines had cleared up after a couple of weeks, and a few days later Bill had been smacked in the face during an argument about his hair."
Hitting Bill was his stress's relief?
Or was the fact that David began hitting Bill related to this "previous" stroke?
Changing his brain's chemistry and making him become violent?
And the new one change his brain once more, making him come back to his previous personality of a loving fiance?
I can't imagine Bill putting up with this charade despite David's change of heart.
Maybe now he could understand that Bill fell out of love with him and in love with someone else???
A way to get out of this weird situation for all of them.... and for the tabloids to have a field day commenting all the drama and new development :p
Kiki
Author's Response: yep, all because of the first stroke. and there may be a discussion of bill's feelings in the next chapter.
Date: 02/22/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
that was...weird
please update soon
Author's Response: good weird? or bad weird?
Date: 02/22/14 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH MY GOD! I'M ON IT!
Tom and Bill will meet through the dogs!?
Author's Response: harley and jax will have a chance to get acquainted, yes
Date: 02/22/14 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 16
OH NO YOU DIDN'T ........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NO NO NO NO NO .........!!!!!!!!!!
BIIIIILLLLLL.....!!!!! IT'S AN ACT DON'T BEALIVE HIM I'M SO MAD AT YOU ELVISFAN ...........YOU HAVE A long way to redeem your self young lady ...ggggrrrrrr....
>=(
Author's Response: again? i just redeemed myself! now i have to do it again? this is exhausting!
Date: 02/22/14 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
Is it bad that I'm hoping David hits Bill again? I'm really hoping that David's sweetness is fake and that he's using the stroke as an excuse to pretend like he changed and lure Bill in again...and then he turns out to still be a bastard so Bill can run back to Tom and live happily-ish ever after...ahhh I'm just so nervous about their future. And I love that Bill didn't call the ambulance...it's like a silent "f*ck you" to David for all of his abuse. Great chapter!
Author's Response: it was a total fuck you! glad you liked it!
Date: 02/22/14 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
HE'S NOT DEAD! How could you?
Well, at least that means the story will be longer.
Though I must admit I had a grin on my face when bushido said that tha maid called the ambulance.
Author's Response: glad i added that part. people seem to enjoy it.