Awh I loved it

Author's Response: thanks very much!

I'm crying.
Full out crying.
This was so beautiful :3333

Author's Response: aaww, thanks so much!

You are soooo redeemed. This made me giggle like a schoolgirl and let me tell you it's been a long time since Ive been a schoolgirl. I am so happy right now that I think I'll go read this chapter again. Yup that's what I'm gonna do. :)

Author's Response: i too have not been a school girl in a looooong time. don't remember being much of a giggler though. but thanks for reading...and giggling.

I can't believe that I'm saying this but I kinda feel sorry for David. I mean he was totally awful to Bill all the time, but the memory loss made him a better person. Like a new person and 'cause he doesn't remember what he did... Well.. And he's really sorry too... I'm not saying that Bill should be with David, after all the horrible things he did, even if he clearly has changed, but I feel sad for the bloke. On the other hand, I'm afraid that this is just some kind of clever plot he made to make Bill stay. But yeah, Awesome chapters! Woho!

Author's Response: do you hate that you feel bad for him? cuz that's what i was going for.

No physical harm from Tom, you said????
But meeting there is, and does it mean Harley can do it for him???

Author's Response: lol no, harley has already attacked one person. he's done.

Hi deary.

Before this chapter, I was hoping Tom would be in the restaurant for Bill's birthday... since David and Tom had never been face to face, it would have been the chance to make it happen... Looks like it won't happen at all now...

But I must say.... I hate you.
The first part of this chapter is so sad.
I knew the moment Jax was givet to Bill, that there will be a meeting with Harley, and then with Tom.
But the way Bill handles this meeting... All wrong.
I can understand him explaining to Tom that David has changed back to his old self... But saying "Happier than I was". It's like a slap for Tom, because it can mean several things and none of it good for Tom.
In this little sentence, it's like Bill would say that whatever happened between Tom and him had no meaning, now that he have the really David back
I totally understand why Tom is angry. He must be so heart-broken, even more now thinking that Bill is completely back with David, physically and emotionnally.... Like Bill didn't love Tom enough, compared to what he has with David.
I don't know how Bill would be able to see Tom after that - Tom wouldn't want to see him- and mostly tell him, show him how much he loves Tom. It can't be over but I sincerely hope you have a really trump card to save all this!! It wll be more complicated since Tom is ready to go back to work... in Chicago, a few states away from Hollywood and Bill then.
- Otherwise... I don't have much to say about the second party.
Bill finally breaks down and the conversation with David went like I imagine it: David not believing what he did, then being horrified, then asking for another chance, and finally being sad when he understands that Bill isn't his anymore 'cause he loves someone else.
He redeems himself by making it all quick and right, getting the mariage annuled and provided Bill with everything he could need to start a new life...

Oh... now that I think about it... If David wants Bill to wait until the next day... it's maybe because he will go and see Tom.. The famous face to face I'd like to see.
I imagine a punch from Tom, harsh words and David accepting them since he currently hates himself... and finally David giving his "blessing" for Tom to be with Bill.... maybe even taking Tom to his house to get Bill.. and Jax.

Oh SAturday is too far... I want to know how you'll settle everything. In the next chapter.... maybe not since you're so mean in this story, you could make us wait longer for what we want and need : Tom and Bill back together!!!!
So be nice for once and do it!!

Love, Kiki

Author's Response: let's see, how can i cryptically answer this review? no, tom does not do any physical harm to david. and i am always nice! *stomps foot*

PLease update as soon as you can! Im really ducking addicted to this, not only story, but also this universe. You have created some amazing (and fucking ass cruel) charicters and a perfect storyline. I really cant wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks so much! this story seems to have stirred up some major emotions with people, so yay me! thanks for reading!

Ahhhh I don't know I feel about this. I really want David to still be bad because otherwise I would feel bad for him...so I'm kind of hoping he's faking and using the stroke as an excuse but I'm probably completely wrong. I just feel bad for him now! And I understand why Tom is really hurt. And so is Bill. So basically everyone is not doing well. Ugh and I have to wait for Saturday...your story is killing me. I'm TOO into it and excited! It's a good problem to have :)

Is David for real, I mean seriously? I know how different things effect the brain but just wondering if something will happen to cause David to snap back to his old self. I did not see Bill being so open & honest with him, I really liked that. My heart hurt for Tom after his & Bills meeting in the park. Ready for next chapter.

Author's Response: always planned for bill to be brutally honest with david about everything that happened. once he started it just all came pouring out. as for old david...i think maybe we've seen the last of him.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: ohhhhhhhhhh thaaaaaaaaaanks