Date: 01/05/14 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love love LOVE this. Tom is such a great guy and Bill deserves to be treated right. I feel like it's not going to be such a smooth transition, but I'm looking forward to everything you have in store. This is really fantastic. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: there will be ups and downs, yes
Date: 01/05/14 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG I love the story. Jost is the bad guy. I hope that he won’t be very bad with Tom, because I think he is going to chase Bill. His macho pride won’t let Bill go away that easily. Kisses my dear. I really thank you for continue sharing your talent.
Author's Response: i wouldn't want to let bill get away either! but i'd be nice about it.
Date: 01/05/14 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG dear, I don’t really like drama fics, but Tom’s attitude towards Bill is giving me hope. I’m really happy for reading something yours again and I’m going to the next chapter. Kisses.
Author's Response: i'm really happy to have something to be read!
Date: 01/05/14 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooooooooh! Btw I did consider that maybe you will tell us later what happened to Bill but I had already posted my comment and didn't feel like writing a new one XD But this is seriously starting to get interesting! I'm definitely going to be here waiting for more :D Awesome!
Author's Response: don't you hate that? you leave a review, then remember something else you wanted to say? annoying! anyhoo, thanks for reading!
Date: 01/05/14 11:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Hi my dear.
First of all, YES, I think you can be that mean to them so soon. Should I remember you that you kill Gus in chapter 6 in "Letters from Home"??? No? I thought so.
This chapter, now...
It's a bit dull but I understand you need to set the scene before the plot really kicks off.
Tom is always the nice guy, he can't help it... And Harley really is a mutt, but I'm sure both Tom and Bill love him that way.
Bill can't believe Tom is being so nice to him...It says a lot about what he went through and his possible trust issues.
So Bill's ex has a lot of money... It's worst than I thought. He could and will made Bill's and Tom's lifes an hell. And now thanks to the cameras he will even know who helped Bill and I'm sure he won't let it "unpinished".
What will he do and to whom???? Bill will surely be blackmailed to go back to him in order to protect Tom.
It's the worst I can think of, for now.... But I'm sure you have a few ideas that are meaner and more twisted.
Adelia is such a sweetheart to Bill, It surely has sweeted his hard days in this awful -yet beautiful - house.
Just a little question... What kind of job is Tom doing??? You wrote "since his first day on a movie set." Is he working in the movie industry? Will David threaten his job to get to Bill?
Good job and go on writing us such good chapters.
And let's the drama start so Tom and Bill can get over it and be happy together... once they manage to convict David for whaterver crime they could.
Or will they be convicted first, since Bill "stole" money from him??
You see, I can't help but imagine horrible plots with every passing second!!!!
I'll stop here then. See you for next chapter!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: wow. you're totally prepared for the worst huh? lol and tom does work in the movie industry, but his actual job will be revealed later.
Date: 01/05/14 06:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Very, very good! I love it!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/05/14 01:19 am Title: Chapter 2
oh mmmmm what is happening now?
Author's Response: you'll have to stay tuned to find out
Date: 01/04/14 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like this
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/04/14 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
No!!!!!!!!!!!! They're going to get caught!!!!!!! If David puts one pinkie toe on them, I'll personally sacrifice him to the devil.
Author's Response: *snicker* pinkie toe! but i think you'll have to get in line behind all the other anti-david people.
Date: 01/04/14 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is all lovely story
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/04/14 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
As soon as I read how rich David is I started to wonder when the alarms and stuff would go off lol
Author's Response: yeah, he's rather well protected
Date: 01/04/14 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hope David doesn't come after Bill...
Author's Response: hmmm...guess you'll have to wait and see
Date: 01/04/14 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
i guess with that camera thing it won't end up too good for Bill yet i hope with Tom's help everything wold be all right
Author's Response: tom to the rescue, perhaps?
Date: 01/03/14 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I think the drama will start in chapter 5.... to let them get closer before hell breaks loose.
But I'm still not sure if there will be "together" when it happens....Or if that will bring them together!
XXX
Author's Response: chapter 5??? you think i'd be mean to them THAT SOON???
Date: 01/02/14 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/02/14 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi my dear.
I saw you posted something new before I saw your mail.... But yesterday, I was too tired to read it despite I SSSSSSOOOOOOOOO wanted to do it.
But here I am!!!!
You don't know how happy I am to read something new from you.... But I'm a bit disappointed since you didn't tell me you were writing something else than WMM. Just kidding!! So happy.
Now this plot's story:
I like the fragile Bill, so lost with nothing and nowhere to go. He's Tom's type but moreover there's this little "damsel in distress" kind of situation you can never resist when you're a good guy. And Tom surely IS a good guy!!!
I simply adored Harley and the beginning of the chapter, with the dog, the leash, the rain.... And a good master who can't resist his dog more than he can't resist the beautiful guy! I repeat myself, but.... yeah a very good guy.
I can already guess, I will love this story.... like always.
I can't wait to see how they will get closer and in the same time I fear the return of the "not so nice guy", I'm sure it won't be pretty. I already pity Bill for what you will throw at him. Tom will need to be strong and suporting... And maybe to have a good insurance policy.
Will you let them have a few chapters of peace... Or will you quickly be mean to them?
How many chapters did you plan? With this information, I could already have a good idea of when the drama will begin.... and prepare my poor heart for the emotional roller coaster I'm sure to be caught in!!
Let's wait and see!
Love Kiki
Ps: I just post the chapter 5 of "All A-Twitter". My internet connexion was off during a couple of days. Couldn't post it sooner... But I'm sure you will love Tom on the picture!
XXX
Author's Response: yaaay! a review from kiki! ummm...18 chapters and an epilogue. i'm curious when you think the drama will happen.
Date: 01/02/14 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello neighbor, good to see you're alive and well and still kicking ass
This is off to a great start
Author's Response: yeah i'm here. my muse is just a bitch and wouldn't let me finish this thing without making my mind wander to the other 3 or 4 stories i've also started. but finally, this is done and ready to share with the world!
Date: 01/02/14 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1
It is nice, but your storie are always nice. So come tuesday or saturday, and a new chapter
Author's Response: yep, regular updates. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/02/14 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Very promising. I'm tracking you.
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/01/14 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
So happy to see a story from you again! :D Yaay!
Author's Response: double yaay! thanks so much!