Date: 01/11/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is amazing ;-;
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/11/14 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
cant wait for more
please update soon
Author's Response: will do!
Date: 01/11/14 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Haha Tom giving autographs was funny. Bill and David have been together for such a long time...I wonder if Bill's parents knew that David was pining for him when he was under 18 or if they knew David was going to be abusive. Love this!
Author's Response: hard to picture david pining, know what a rat bastard he's become. and i'd hope they didn't know what david would be up to, otherwise they turned their son over to a monster!
Date: 01/11/14 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is so great! Update soon PLEASE or I will die!
Author's Response: wow. being a little dramatic, are we? lol *waves magic life saving wand so tuesday can get here faster*
Date: 01/11/14 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill and Tom getting closer to each other if Bill decided to tell him a little bit about his life with David. also that Bu went for Bill...i guess that won't be easy for David to understand
Author's Response: david probably wouldn't understand anything other than a completely remorseful bill begging for his forgiveness.
Date: 01/11/14 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope David will not ruin Tom's career.
It looks that Tom has already fallen for Bill even if he has not realized himself yet.
Author's Response: sure, the physical attraction is there for both of them. but will it turn into anything more? that's the question. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/11/14 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Okay I now know what you meant about me liking this chapter!!!!
After a awkward moment, Bill is finally coming out of his shell. Slowly and Tom still makes a few gaffes, but the change is here
Tom learns more about his life with David... and Bill learns who he's living with. His astonishment was quite cute!!!! They speak and tension seems to let Bill alone.
Until Bu appears to convey the "master"'s orders. I should have thought, David is too high to come and get Bill himself, way to show how much Bill means to him.
Bill's little freak out about it is cute once more.... You make him always cute in this story, even in fear and shyness.
But my favorite part was of course the talk they have... in Tom's bed nonetheless. Even if it isn't still what I long for, it's better than nothing, a good step in the right direction.
So David was almost a craddle robber, and he did it almost with Bill's parents benediction. A fake Charming Prince at first, who became a persecutor afterwards.
He cut Bill from his familly, friends... It's so hard to see how wrong this kind of situation is when you're in it, young, in love and in denial.
I see now how trully hard it's for Bill to be away from David and to believe it's real.
Poor baby, I could cuddle him for all he went through.... But Tom seems to do it very well for me. Nice guy POWER!!!
But the worst is to think we still don't know all what David did to him and what he can dream up to make Bill's life and Tom's as well, a living hell.
Drama in chapter 5, remember what I said ??? So will I be right or not? Maybe not, let's them be even closer before David's intrusion in their cocoon.
What will Bill do now? Find a job? Contact his parents? Become Tom's housewife? Or fall back into David's evil paws? I'm sure all of it will happen, but certainly not in this order.
Wait and see.
Love Kiki
Author's Response: you totally tapped into what bill was feeling/thinking. he's in love, he believes david is in love with him, so he's blind to everything that's bad. chapter 5, huh? wait and see, my friend.
Date: 01/11/14 09:59 am Title: Chapter 3
Hi dear.
This chapter is a bit...calm. Calmer than what you usually write.
Bill is very slowly setting, grasping the fact he left David and he's free from him.... Until you'll make David come to get him and destroy Tom's life and career.... Or maybe David will offer Tom an impossible opportunity in his line of work to get Bill back... Not that I think Tom would accept such a trade, but I don't think David wouldn't be low enough to try.
And it leads me to the revelation of this chapter...
So Tom is an actor... a good one and with a huge movie coming out soon, a rising star.... didn't Bill trully know who is Tom? Or like Tom about him, he couldn't recall where he knows him from????
I didn't like how Nat wants Tom to lie about his sexual orientation and the way she was disrespectul to Bill without really knowing him or how he came to live with Tom. I hope my first impression about her is wrong. Tom wouldn't work with her if she was a total bitch.
I'd like to Bill and Tom to have a real rapprochement in the next chapter. Maybe a talk about each other, Tom's work, Bill's past or abuse from David. Something to share and to get them closer. From now on, they just have.... Harley in common.
But since Tom will have to work, will he let Bill alone at home? It'd be the perfect chance for David to come and try to manipulate him into coming back. I don't see Bill going with Tom, he's so shy and unsure right now. Such a fragile body and a fragile soul mostly. He needs a nice guy to make him trust men once again...
Where do you see I'm influencing you to bring them together fast? Only saying what I'd like... So go and make me dream.
Love Kiki
Author's Response: wow. the next chapter should be just what you're looking for...but that's all i'm saying! lol and don't worry about natalie. she means well, her mouth just has no filter on it.
Date: 01/10/14 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooooh, So Tom is an actor! Awesome! >:) There is definitely something else wrong with Bill than just the abusive ex boyfriend, he does seem a bit jumpy and sad all the time. But we'll see about that later, I guess :D You're awesome and I really like this fiction and I'll be here, waiting for more! :D
Author's Response: no, you're awesome! thanks for reading!
Date: 01/08/14 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, so Tom is famous too. That’s very good, because if Jost tries to attack him, it won’t be without consequences. I like it. But it still very sad to see Bill as a victim, he is clearly showing the consequences of abuse in his lack of self steam. It’s getting better. Thanks for your work
Author's Response: sad bill is sad! i hated the thought of it when i was writing it.
Date: 01/08/14 04:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooh, that was unexpected. I like it ;)
Author's Response: lol always expect the unexpected
Date: 01/08/14 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I got all the way to the end, and wondered where the hell the "next" button was. There wasn't one. >_>
Author's Response: don't worry, next chapter will be up saturday
Date: 01/07/14 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Natalie, sweet Natalie Bill is no pet or boy toy he is a beautiful deity on two legs. But lol that was a adorbs chapter can't wait for more. I love Harley too, I want a dog so badly.
Author's Response: a beautiful deity on two legs. i love that!
Date: 01/07/14 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was fantastic. Tom is truly an amazing guy and clearly not afraid of who he is. I think he is EXACTLY what Bill needs! I also think it's a little humorous that Natalie is so concerned that Bill will fawn over Tom when he realizes who he is, but she doesn't know that Bill was just engaged to an incredibly famous man...so he's not going to be the type to probably become starstruck.
I LOVE this story. You've done a marvelous job, and I'm so captivated. I can't say that enough and believe me that I truly mean it! :)
Author's Response: i had fun writing natalie in this story. glad it's appreciated.
Date: 01/07/14 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
ROFL
Natalie is a trip
please update soon
Author's Response: i'm enjoying this natalie too!
Date: 01/07/14 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
nice :) as for now everything is god between them, plus Harley likes Bill xoxo
Author's Response: who wouldn't like bill?
Date: 01/07/14 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, update!
I respect and admire this Tom who does not want to hide his sexuality and lie to promote his career. Bill is in good hands :)
Author's Response: and oh, the things tom will do with those hands...i mean, what?
Date: 01/07/14 02:10 am Title: Chapter 2
please update soon, i really love this story
Author's Response: chapter 3 will be up momentarily
Date: 01/06/14 12:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Cool story!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 01/05/14 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh god. Now I have thoughts of goons tracking Tom and Bill and lots of drama! Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response: goons! that's the word i was thinking of! oh well.