Date: 01/18/14 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad Bill got along with Tom's friends, and it's sweet how careful Tom is around Bill. They're just adorable. And even if Gustav put his foot in his mouth, he didn't do it on purpose and redeemed himself later. I think they'll all be good friends :)
Author's Response: yeah, i think it's safe to say they're both a little crushed out on each other. bill and tom, that is. not gustav. lol
Date: 01/18/14 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I guess money can't buy everything can it? Leaving an abusive relationship is very hard and I speak from experience. I'm so grateful that Tom came to Bill's aid and now maybe he can get on with his life. But I somehow don't think David is going to give up easily. :)
Date: 01/18/14 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why was Bill out in the rain by himself? Bruises don't cause themselves so I'm curious to see how and why he got them. Tom is being so nice to a stranger. Hope it doesn't cause him any grief. Love the beginning and now on to the next chapter. :)
Date: 01/18/14 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
Gustav is adorable in a dorky kind of way. Tom is on a rising to fame, isn't he? Hope Bill can handle changes.
Author's Response: gustav is totally adorable in a dorky kind of way!
Date: 01/18/14 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
I haven't read fanfiction off this site for the better part of a year but I'm really glad I chose to start reading again with this story! It really hooks you in and I love the way Tom is so worried about Bill and having Gustav stay with him, thats cute. Really looking forward to the next chapter!:)
Author's Response: omg thanks so much! and welcome back!
Date: 01/18/14 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
that was nice :) hopefully nothing happen to Bill during Tom absences. also the G's took Bill so well so maybe gonna be ok if Gus would stay with Bill
Author's Response: yes, gustav and bill will have couple of fun sleepovers
Date: 01/16/14 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Mmmm white pizza...that sounds so good.
I love how this chapter started because accidentally walking in on someone in the bathroom always seems to be an awkward/funny-later moment. I'm worried for Tom, though, because David just seems evil and probably won't just let Bill go...great chapter!!!!! :)
Author's Response: omg it was delicious! thanks for reading!
Date: 01/16/14 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
cant wait for more
please update soon
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 01/16/14 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hi my dear.
I just lovedd how you began this chapter. And there I thought Tom was a gentleman and didn't ogle Bill... BUT HE DID IT!!!!!!! Not so a nice guy this time, but when you have such a beautiful guy before you, who happens to be your type, you can only enjoy the opportunity.
But I wondered was there still bruises on Bill or not? Tom didn't mention it
- Like Tom, I was... totally taken aback by Bill after that... So carefree, happy, without make-up or fancy clothes....A little happiness suits him... and I bet Tom felt his heart beating a bit faster at this sight.
And the bathroom... is it really to avoid another morning incident? Or is it more to please Bill and let him feel "at home" so he would stay longer, maybe forever??? My money is on the second option, or else Tom wouldn't have choose a color who goes so well with Bill, even if it may be unconsciously form Tom's part.
- Bill is comfortable enough to start talking again about David.... Hitting him for such a petty thing. I guess I understand Bill's lack of reaction. It's so stunning, just like this, coming
from the man supposed to love you.... After that, it wasn't love for Bill, it was only fear.... Classical pattern in every abusive relation.
But THINK about it, Bill! Even if you don't want to. Think about what David could do and it could save you afterwards. Or better save Tom!!!
- More happy and carefree moments... Shopping, decorating, movie night with friends.... Bill surely came out of his shell.
And there.... the happiness could only be perfect if they were together.... For the next chapter then!!! Before hell breaks loose.
'Cause yes, there this little part at the end.. just so we don't forget about evil David... Like it'd be possible when Tom and Bill have a great threat above their heads!!
- Bushido seems to love his job for David... a bit too much according to me,but hey I'm just a reader!
But once more I have to worry. The last sentences David said.... It shows my previous fear could soon be real. Poor Tom, he won't know what hits him...since David seems to prefer go directly after him than after his career.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully I finally will have what I'm waiting for: Their first kiss... and maybe even a bit more. (the following of the bathroom incident!!!)
For their happy bubble to be perfect before David comes and breaks it.
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: sorry, no kissing in the next chapter. but maybe...something?
Date: 01/16/14 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
I totally agree with Bill, Tom is such a sweet thing, being worried about him. And the bathroom scene wow, I love it, because Tom was sleepy but anyway he checked Bill out . Thank you for this fic, but I’m afraid the drama is coming. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter. Kisses.
Author's Response: well duh! i don't care how sleepy you are, you have a naked bill in front of you you're gonna check out the ass.
Date: 01/16/14 10:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, noooo! And you stopped there, oh my god! D: D: (This is good!!) And that fucktard.. If he tries touching Tom I'll boil his head in his own fat!! XD
Author's Response: best revenge plan ever!
Date: 01/16/14 01:54 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh No. I don't want anything to happen to them. I hope tom kicks their asses.
Author's Response: so violent! shocking! lol
Date: 01/16/14 12:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/16/14 12:22 am Title: Chapter 5
that's good that Bill is so fine around Tom and that actually he talks a little about his past.and i guess with no time they would be so close to each other and then....unfortunately David would be in action ;/
Author's Response: yes, bill's starting to open up a little. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/16/14 12:18 am Title: Chapter 5
I love your story :) keep on going!!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 01/15/14 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill! :) So glad he's found Tom though :)
Author's Response: yes, our bill has had it rough. tom's his knight in shining armor!
Date: 01/13/14 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
I just hate Jost. How could he be so mean to Bill? And Bushido, I know that there’re some girls who love him, but for me, he is always the bad guy. And now he is the bad guy’s bodyguard. Anyway, Tom is there to protect Bill or at least to give him a little self steam. I love for fic darling. Thank you for your work. Kisses.
Author's Response: i'm the same way! i'm not really a bushido fan at all, unless he's a bad guy. i can totally see him as a bad guy.
Date: 01/12/14 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awesomeeee!! And aww I feel so bad for poor-Bill :'( And it makes it even more sad when you realize that there are exactly that kind of relationships in this world and many men and women live with an abusive partner :( But yay for Bill who escaped and found Tom! And Tom better take good care of Bill! This was really great and emotional chapter and you're totally 1000000 times more awesome than I am XD so, there :D And I hope you found a nice bra and you're friends hair is awesome :D Sincerely: Girl wearing amazing bra at the time XD
Author's Response: LMAO! yes my new bra is very comfy and makes me look very perky, and my friend's hair looks great! and i'm glad your own bra is also amazing! and of course, tom will be very good to bill!
Date: 01/12/14 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Omg, poor Bill. I love how humble Tom is. I hate Bushido with a burning passion. David too, he's on my kill list in the #1 spot. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: tom's a reluctant celebrity. he hasn't completely fallen into the "i'm famous so you can kiss my ass" mentality. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/11/14 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope everything goes okay for Bill. I want him to stay with Tom. I need to know more ^_^
Author's Response: he'll definitely stay with tom a little while longer...