Date: 01/20/14 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like the thought of Mateo as a bodyguard *-* Ohh, I do hope Bill will be okay when Tom is gone. Can't wait for the next chapter, sis!
Author's Response: i'd love to have mateo as a bodyguard!
Date: 01/20/14 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ugh, can Bushido stop spying on them. I'm happy that Tom and Bill are getting along so well though! And Tom saw him naked. :D Yeah, I like that a lot.
Author's Response: of course you like it a lot. it's naked bill.
Date: 01/20/14 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
You don't know how happy I am for them to be cuddling in bed! Jost sounds terrifying and that sucks that he has Bushido as his righthand man. :/ Good thing Bill has Tom and his pup to protect him!
Author's Response: harley to the rescue!
Date: 01/20/14 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom is the sweetest, kay? I'm happy Bill found a safe place to stay!
Author's Response: you're a poet and didn't know it!
Date: 01/20/14 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm behind and I'm getting caught up now! I love how sweet Tom is to Bill. Then again, if someone who looks like Bill needed a place to stay...I wouldn't say no either. ;)
Author's Response: tom's motivation was 50% this person needs help and 50% this guy is fucking hot!
Date: 01/20/14 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this so far. Bill seems to be worried about something that might happen during Tom's absence. But they both left those worries unsaid. I hope Gustav is as innocent and friendly as he seems because Bill could use a friend and Georg is so nice to him. Maybe it's just because Gustav is obsessed with tabloids and gossip that he's losing his shit over Bill's status. Now I've reached that time where I must wait anxiously and constant reload my browser hoping you've updated. Please don't torture me.
Author's Response: *snort* losing his shit! i love that! and gustav really does mean well. he just...temporarily...lost his shit.
Date: 01/19/14 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter again! Gustav and Georg are so nice :D And I love how Tom and Gustav behave together :D their behavior really shows true friendship :) But I'm kinda going crazy here 'cause I'm all the time expecting something bad to happen 'cause of David. I'll be waiting for more and try to remember to come check for a new chapter XD Really great chapter!!!
Author's Response: just trying to keep everyone on their toes! thanks for reading!
Date: 01/19/14 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooooh my gooood!! Great that Bill is getting happier with Tom but oh my god I just wanna shoot David >:( I'm gonna move to the next chapter now!
Author's Response: okay. put the gun down. now go read.
Date: 01/19/14 06:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Hi deary!
Movie night with Tom's friends.... It went well, sort of.
I was surprised by Bill's happy mood at the beginning, no panic or issues.
Geo is great, not obnoxious, friendly and calm. Perfect for Bill to be at ease with him.
Gus, on the other hand... Let's just say Tom should have been more stern before the night and talked to his friend about Bill. Just to avoid the awkward scene with the news.
But after that, Gus is trully a good friend, a bit teasing but he seems to understand - more than Tom himself- that Bill is already important for our movie star.
And despite his little speech about all being cool, Tom somehow fears what David could do if Bill was left alone.
I can only fear too. Will David send Bu to get Bill while Tom is away or send him after Tom and go get Bill himself?
But there is a big thing about this chapter... it's the talk Bill and Tom have before the latter left. Not really what they said but mostly what's left unsaid. You can trully see there's something growing between them. I loved the way Bill managed to "calm" Tom by just being there and a few jokes.
But now... Tom has left for two days. Bill will be alone for a few hours before Gus gets there. A few hours where everything is possible.
Will Tom return to a empty house, without Bill and to a hurt Gus? Will Tom return at all? Will he get a phone call from Gus saying Bill has disappear and will Tom let Natalie to deal with all his obligations? Will Bill leave the house to protect Tom after some threats from David? Or will you be kind enough to let Bill and Tom see each other once more, be together and finally KISSS before a huge and unexpected ordeal?
Wait and see in the next update!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: you got what i was trying to say but not really say! there is something between them, yet neither of them is saying it. but they're showing it. and good lord, you're all ready for some drama to happen. you must chill! lol read the happy story and just...see what happens.
Date: 01/19/14 04:59 am Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling something bad going to happen. No no nothing bad can happen it's going well.this story is amazing I must say in am a fan of yours :)
Author's Response: and just when you think things are going well...
Date: 01/19/14 12:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh God...a time gap, just right for David to try something! Really anxious for next chapter!
Author's Response: i'm anxious too! *bites nails*
Date: 01/18/14 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is really good! Loving it :)
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/18/14 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG I knew the time was coming but now I've reached the last chapter and I'll probably die a slow death until the next one arrives. lol Now you have me worried that something is going to happen to Bill while Tom's out of town. Why do you do that? :( Anyway, great chapter and now I shall hold my breath until the next one. No maybe I better not. My face doesn't look good when it's all purple and stuff. :)
Author's Response: well purple is my favorite color...but no, not on someone's face. breathe! i promise bill will be alive for chapter 7!
Date: 01/18/14 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Gawd listening to Bill talk about how the abuse started with David was like watching a snippet of myself in the past. I don't think I like David very much especially after reading the last paragraph. Bill has come a long way in a week and I'm so happy he has Tom there to talk to. Loving this story but worried about David and his minions. On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: yeah, unfortunately david's minions aren't like the cute yellow ones in the movies
Date: 01/18/14 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hope you had fun shopping! Myself, I hate shopping for bras. lol
Oooo David is going to go after Tom in a bad way methinks. Trust him to have Bushido as a bodyguard. I'm so glad Bill has Tom to look after him. Hopefully he will heal but probably not until a lot of crap comes down on the two of them. On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: bra shopping is truly a necessary evil, isn't it?
Date: 01/18/14 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love tater tots! Tom is so kind. I hope Bill starts to open up to him a bit. I know Bill will eventually find out who Tom is but I worry that so will David and he'll do something to screw up Tom's career. Oh well, guess I better read on to find out the answer to at least some of my questions. :)
Author's Response: tater tots rock!
Date: 01/18/14 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
this story is so cute i love it so much shy Tom and shy nervous Bill .....so adorable :3
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/18/14 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling something bad going to happen. No no nothing bad can happen it's going well.this story is amazing I must say in am a fan of yours :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 01/18/14 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
uh oh
please updated ASAP
Author's Response: next chapter coming up tuesday!