Date: 03/08/14 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
It was a fun story to read!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 03/08/14 11:08 am Title: Chapter 20
Beautiful! This has been a great ride, added to favorites
Author's Response: thanks for riding...i mean reading!
Date: 03/06/14 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
Hurray! This was delicious.
Author's Response: mucho mucho yummy!
Date: 03/06/14 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Hi dear!
A little chapter to show that everything was rose clouds and rainbows!!
It's a bonus and like one, it wasn't necessary, but good to read nonetheless.
I needed the sexy time to be sure they're really back together... But I was expecting a few issues. Like, Bill not really being sure or ready after being raped by David even if it was a few weeks ago... Or Tom being not sure to do it for Bill's sake after everything, and Bill "coaxing" him.
But it was great the way it was....
And when Bill screamed, I thought it was Harley and Jax, the dogs being once more cock-blockes for their master..;
But Gus it was, and at least now they can explain what happened to him.
I'm a bit like Gus, expecting something more... movie-like for you to resolve all this story... But you chose a normal plot for this and it was great!!!
Not hard feelings between Bill and Gus, and Geo too I hope, it's good and everything almost perfect.
Almost, because I'm expecting to see Bill's familly in the epilogue, to show that Bill has really moved on... Something like, a conversation between the brothers making up for lost time and Bill admitting that he is now trully happy!!
Let's see what you have to close this wonderful story.
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: not normal for me to go with normal plots, huh? got mix it up sometimes, keep my readers entertained.
Author's Response: not normal for me to go with normal plots, huh? got mix it up sometimes, keep my readers entertained.
Date: 03/05/14 12:41 am Title: Chapter 19
Awww, such a feel good chapter, thank you!
Author's Response: feel reeeeaaaallll good! *wiggles eyebrows*
Date: 03/05/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 19
they are together now :) i'm so happy
Author's Response: me toooo!
Date: 03/04/14 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 19
Omg so I'm grinning like an idiot in public while reading this. It was so cute and so funny when Gustav walked in on them. It's so sad the story is almost over...I'll just have to reread it hehe. Lovely job!
Author's Response: rereading is always fun! is it weird that i reread myself from time to time?
Date: 03/04/14 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to it
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 03/04/14 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for sharing your 'intestinal issues' but I do hope you're feeling better. I just about peed myself when Gustav walked into the bedroom. Who the hell walks into their friends bedroom? I guess that would be Gustav! Why didn't they just invite Bill to go along? Oh yeah, he'd probably break a leg or get bitten by a poisonous snake or fall into poison ivy or... Anyway I'm looking forward to the epilogue and your chapter end notes. :)
Author's Response: this bill just doesn't strike me as an outdoorsy guy, you know? and sure, gustav just walks all over the house like he lives there! lol
Date: 03/04/14 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 18
Still hate David but...I have to admit what he did was nice. I am so happy they're back together and I'm sorry it took me so damn long to read and review. But one of my stories just ended and it took me a while and now I am updating the other ones I have still running.I overall loved this chapter and now I am on to the next one.
Date: 03/04/14 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aww that was very sweet
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 03/03/14 07:25 am Title: Chapter 18
Aww! Yayyyy!!! I'm so, so, so happy that Tom and Bill can finally bw together without fear! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: i am toooo! thanks for reading!
Date: 03/02/14 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 18
Hi deary!
Redeeming yourself???? I guess you did!
Once more not a lot to say about this chapter.
- The meeting between Tom and David was more or less how I envisioned it, except it being in DAvid's house instead of him going to Tom's... but detail.
- Bill has signed the papers and everything is now over with David.... But How could he not see Tom before David told him??? He so wanted to get out of this house despite his... "tenderness" for David.
- I loved the reunion of Bill and Tom... They so belong to each other and after everuthing they wnet throug, it's so good to see them back together.
- Now the only thing I fear, without real reason, is a come back from Bushido. Like attacking Bill and Tom.. or even David out of rage for losing his job when only following the orders.... reasonless fear, isn't it???
By the way.... good one with Mateo... The poor guy didn't do a lot in this story, but he deserved a little moment of glory!!! For all Bill and Tom will pull him through in the future!!!
If I add up right, there's still a chapter before the epilogue. What would you put in it now that our heros are back together. Bill still needs to get back in touch with his familly... But other than that, what do you have in store for us?
Wait and see!!!!!
Kiki
Author's Response: in my brain, tom was sitting on a couch that was behind the door so when bill came through the door he didn't see the couch or tom. that's how i envisioned it, anyway. no, no more appearances from bushido. and poor underused mateo, i'm sure he'll have his work cut out for him, keeping the crazies away from tom. and yes, one more chapter before the epilogue. as for what happens...i think you'll enjoy it.
Date: 03/02/14 04:43 am Title: Chapter 18
Awwwww *tear*
Author's Response: *hands you a tissue*
Date: 03/02/14 04:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Can I be the 300th reviewer? Yas. Anyways. I'm just gonna hang out here 'til this gets updated again.
Author's Response: gonna be hanging out for a couple days, i'm afraid. hope you brought a snack.
Date: 03/02/14 01:49 am Title: Chapter 18
So did not see that coming! Ok, I want to trust David but I'm afraid he may have had Bill sign something that'll bite him in the ass later. Really happy B&T are together now and looking forward to next update!
Author's Response: nope, everything's on the up and up. simple annulment papers from david, that's all. although he does sort of make one more appearance before the end of the story.
Date: 03/01/14 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 18
Again, so fucking confused. I have no idea if we can trust David just yet. I mean... what if it's just a sick joke? Hmm, no maybe not, why else would he get their marriage annulled? UNLESS, he didn't, he just pretended... Hmm, no that sounds weird. I don't know what the hell is going on.
Is it weird that I cannot find it in me to trust David just yet? Cause really... My head keeps screaming "The calm before the fucking storm!".. I mean, I would love for it to be true but I just... I'm worried that something might happen...
But then again, WHY would he bring Tom and Bill back together? Which was awfully cute btw, loved every minute of it ^^ So glad Tom was so willing to take Bill back! Guess that's what you do when you love someone!
Yes, yes. I know I'm thinking out loud! I just... ugh! You sure know how to make your readers want more! Cause either there's something coming or I'm just over-analyzing as usual.
But I did like the whole chapter, especially the part where they reunited. ^^
Author's Response: you sort of remind me of...well, me. i tend to over think things when i'm writing, as you apparently do when you're reading. lol what if i promise you that david really has let bill go?
Date: 03/01/14 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
It was bit anti-climatic to me but I'm very happy for the update nevertheless!
Author's Response: i'm sorry. but thanks for reading anyway!
Date: 03/01/14 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 18
cant wait for more
Author's Response: me either!
Date: 03/01/14 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
Aw I guess David is really changed back to his old self, and he clearly loves Bill so much by letting him go. This would be such a tragic situation, but it's sweet that Bill and Tom will be able to be together. Nothing can erase what happened, and there's no way Bill could go back to loving David like he used to. I was waiting for when Mateo spoke and laughed so hard when I realized that those few words were it haha
Author's Response: lol but they're such powerful words, you know? like "no thanks, i'll stand in case this is a setup and your little thug shows up again, i'll be quicker to react."