Date: 02/01/14 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
How on earth did I forget to check on this fic again?! Anyway! Great chapter! Little sexy time there heheheheheee. And now I shall be moving to the next chapter --->
Date: 02/01/14 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
that was so nice :) Bill is so lovely and helpful for Tom and i guess Tom appreciate it :) and of course they are getting even closer to each other
Author's Response: soon maybe they'll be closerthanthis
Date: 02/01/14 11:13 am Title: Chapter 10
These two are so cute together.
I hope Bill will call his family soon.
Author's Response: hmmm...perhaps
Date: 02/01/14 10:54 am Title: Chapter 10
It would be nice if reviews equaled car payments but alas only in our dreams. lol It's nice to see Bill loosening up but we all know there's more turmoil to follow. :)
Author's Response: turmoil? what is this turmoil you speak of? <.<
Date: 02/01/14 10:33 am Title: Chapter 10
Tom is sweet to Bill. It's really nice to see Tom and Bill conversing about their lives in the past. Bill seems to be opening up a little more and that's a large improvement from his borderline introvert behavior. But we can thank David for that. I can't begin to imagine what horrible acts that man commited. But there is a sick little bug in my stomach that's telling me that their happiness isn't going to last much longer. While I hate it it's just there, chomping in my large intestine. But I hope whatever he does doesn't ruin Tom's movie career. He's been hurt enough by an older male's words and actions (His Dad) David better stay away or I'll serious kill him and shove his body into a oil drum. Right, that took a dark turn, back to my review, the chapter was great and it left me itching for more. I am sitting on the edge of my seat and I am so ready to read more. Don't keep me waiting too long. I am very anxious, just waiting everyday hoping I'll have seen that you updated.
Author's Response: *hands you antacids* awesome yet evil review. i love reading how various people would like to punish david.
Date: 02/01/14 06:10 am Title: Chapter 9
Hi there.
Very well spell my dear, no problem!!!
Another short chapter but I liked it nontheless.
- Back the day after the party, it's unusual for you but not disturbing in this kind of situation, and almost necessary.
- Loved the way Tom "cheated" with Bill's help, but was it premeditated or not?
- Quite the way to break the news to Gus and Geo.... THEY DID BET ON THE TIME IT WOULD TAKE THEM TO BE TOGETHER??? Well, in bed together, but it doesn't change the fact that they bet on their friends... Somehow it's almost cute!!
- Tom and Bill are moving pretty fast now that they're "together". I had expected a few days of cuddling and kissing before moving to a more physical part of their relation.
So, I see Bill enjoyed it as much as Tom did blowing him. But isn't it still a bit too fast? Won't it block one of them after all? Or will it be more a problem when it comes to the "really making love" part? I'm almost expeting Bill to involuntaty recoil one way or another when they will become more intime. Prove me wrong later, but I think it could be a way for them to speak more about the abusive part of Bill's previous relation with David, get everything oof his chest for good!
Despite this fastness, I think it's a good thing Tom took the lead and decided to blow Bill. I guess it's a very good thing for Bill's self-esteem.
I don't think David was the kind to offer blowjobs to his "fiancé", more the kind to fuck Bill hard and fast, no matter if Bill wanted it or not (at least at the end of their relationship, but blowjobs from David... No way in hell, begining or end of the relationship!!!).
It's good that Bill can see that Tom is not like David, that he can give as much as he can be given, that this new relation is more a partnership than one-way relation.
I'm waiting for the last step for them to be together... and after... Don't tell me the drama isn't closer to blow, I wouldn't believe you. It'll surely be soon now that they're closer, to make them suffer most by whatever DAvid will send their way.
Love. Kiki
Author's Response: have i ever mentioned how much i love your long analytical reviews? so much fun to read. new chapter up now!
Date: 01/30/14 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yum yum! :D looooved this. But i can't shake the feeling that they're in biiig trouble! And yes, that pic is awesome! :D love this story! :P
Author's Response: trouble? what trouble? where?
Date: 01/30/14 01:15 am Title: Chapter 9
I enjoy this story so much! It has been way too long Since something that good was posted here :) really good job cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: aaww thanks so much!
Date: 01/30/14 12:11 am Title: Chapter 9
That "sex" scene got me... dare I say it? Hot, it was so damn sexy. Omg, that was just....woooooo, can't wait for more. Drunk Gustav was adorbs but all I can think about is that scene. Please tell me you're writing more of those because they are so sexy.
Author's Response: there...may be more sex later
Date: 01/29/14 01:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Well...um darn it, Tom giving Bill head totally made me forget what I was gonna write...Damn! H*O*T
Author's Response: i know right???
Date: 01/28/14 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
nice :) Poor Gustav, i guess he doesn't have so much luck when he's the guys hehe
omg, Bill and Tom are unbelievable. they really are good with each other
Author's Response: tom is particularly good! *wink wink*
Date: 01/28/14 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love the magazine cover! Great chapter and hopefully you get enough reviews to make the rest of the work week fly by. :)
Author's Response: i'll just be happy when this day is over
Date: 01/28/14 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
O.O That was a nice ending. They're so cute. omg.
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/28/14 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
These two are very cute together!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 01/28/14 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
yumm
please update soon
Author's Response: will do
Date: 01/27/14 02:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Haha your "blast of snow". I wish we had snow where I am, but no, it's just in the 20s with nothing but wetness and cold. I feel like if it's going to be cold, it should AT LEAST be pretty. This is getting ridiculous; I can't even ski! *ends rant*
Ok, anyway, back to relevant things like your awesome story: OMG they kissed. Soooo cute. I'm surprised the press hasn't jumped all over Bill yet for having left David, but I guess his hair color change might still be throwing them off. But eventually they're going to have a field day. And David has been a little quiet lately...makes me nervous...
Author's Response: plus i'm thinking people don't recognize bill when he's not with david. like maybe they think they know him, but they're just not sure where.
Date: 01/26/14 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hi sweety!!
Do I sense a little gibe to me in your note???
No complaining here!!! Just happy this finally came... But a bit afraid it will also soon sign the beginning of drama. But let's enjoy this for now!!
- So... the chapter is a tad short but quite enjoyable nontheless.
- I'm still a bit wary about Natalie.... She worries too much about Tom's public image. I know it's her job, but his private life isn't her area of expertise. But she will squeeze it until she gets the popularity she wants for Tom. Yes, wary is the right word. How far would she go???
- Did I read right? There is a picture of Tom and Bill together? I'd love to see it ( maybe I would do it :p) But .....Drama is coming soon, I was right. This picture surely will hit the tabloids... and David will see it. What will he do and when, though?
- One thing I'm happy for. Their first kiss was not in public. I fear it for a fes seconds but the end of the chapter fufilled my need for cuteness, privacy( when Tom's life is almost never) and closeness.
And all the "walk the guy to the door" thing, since they live in the same house... Adorable!!!
Now I'm curious how you will handle the after. With you I never know the timeline. Will you continue juste after this, like, the morning after? Or will you let a few days pass for them to get confortable together, with just kiss and cuddles? I'm more for the latter but of course you're free to do as you like!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: i had the first kiss written, then thought about changing it to happen on the dance floor, but then i decided to keep it the way it was. and i was rather proud of the "walk the guy to the door" bit when i was writing it, so thank you!
Date: 01/26/14 11:38 am Title: Chapter 8
awwwwww!!!!! cant wait cant wait cant wait!!!!
thank you
Author's Response: you're welcome
Date: 01/26/14 06:36 am Title: Chapter 8
Oooooh!! Awesome chapter! And I'm really glad David didn't come to ruin everything! Wohoo! I must say that I think Tom's beard suits him just fine, but Bill's... HELL NO! XD But I would like to put both of them down and shave their faces and maybe other places too XD But anyway. Awesome chapter! I really liked this! Yay! :D
Author's Response: yeah, i'm just the opposite about their beards
Date: 01/26/14 01:33 am Title: Chapter 8
YES....THEY KISSED! Thank you.
Loved everything about this chapter, especially Tom telling Nat how he feels, him going on the dance floor to let the dude know to back off and the sweet kiss at the end. I bet David is livid when he sees and reads all about Bill & Tom's date.
Author's Response: i think the dance floor was my favorite part