Date: 02/05/14 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
WHAT?!?? You can't leave us hanging thereeee! Oh my god! Next update now pleASE!!!!! Gah! Fbdkdmdlsm
Author's Response: gotta keep the suspense going a couple more days
Date: 02/05/14 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
And I'm terribly sorry for my spelling mistakes. I usually read these by phone so I tend to make many spelling mistakes accidentally, so don't you go thinking that I can't spell XDD aaaanyway. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: didn't even notice any spelling errors, so it's all good
Date: 02/05/14 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
I HATE YOU! That was sooooo mean!! Okay I don't really hate you. I just said that 'cause that ending was super mean :( and here i thought there wluld be some nice sexy time but nooooo Tom is bleeding somewhere and no sex. That's just too mean... and if I'm completely honest, kinda fucking brilliant! Finally something bad happened XD not that I'm happy about it, but at least the horrible waiting for it to happen is over. At least for now. You're really mean but this was super awesome! Now I totally can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: sorry, but no. no sexy times while tom is bleeding and unconscious. maybe later. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/05/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Omg, hope Tom's going to be okay O_o can't wait for more
Author's Response: perhaps you'll find out...soon
Date: 02/05/14 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh noooo!!!! I guess it' david's fault!!!
Author's Response: hmmm...perhaps
Date: 02/05/14 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
OH NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO....
NO.
I loved the chapter but the ending had me wanting to throw my laptop out of the window.
in other words, you're doing a good job. ;)
Author's Response: yay for violent reactions! lol
Date: 02/05/14 03:21 am Title: Chapter 11
oh no no no. This can not be happening, Tom cant die, he just cant. OMG!!! Whats going to happen? I need to know.
Author's Response: he doesn't die, don't worry
Date: 02/05/14 02:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Always looooove a little drama :D!!! This story is so good!! I love how everything is going and i have to admit that i cant wait for them to have sex XD but now with this ending who knows when its gonna happen hahaha cant wait to know more!!
Author's Response: i can assure you of two things. there will be sex, and it will be good.
Date: 02/05/14 12:05 am Title: Chapter 11
they really had a nice night, even with all things around Tom had Bill so close to himself. damn, i hope Tom would be fine
Author's Response: sweet protective tom for the win!
Date: 02/04/14 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
O.O
I knew it! My mind is already racing with ways this could go & I can't wait to read more...& soon.
Author's Response: O.O
Date: 02/04/14 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
What do you mean leaving it like this? I like drama but this is ridiculous. I mean poor Tom, how can you just leave him lying in the road in his own blood? Shame on you for making us suffer and I think you should definitely have a nap and think about what you've done. lol Loved this. :)
Author's Response: BEST. REVIEW. EVER!
Date: 02/04/14 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg
please update ASAP
Date: 02/04/14 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, poor Tomi. I hope he is ok.
Author's Response: he will be...at some point
Date: 02/02/14 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
Normally I have no sympathy for abuse victims. It's just one of my shortcomings. But your writing has made me overlook and sympathize. Very well done. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: well go me! changing someone's opinion! thanks for reading!
Date: 02/02/14 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I juste read this chapter once more...
And I now have a answer at one question:
Yes Bill will go with Tom. Can't wait to see what he will wear and how good they will be together! Just to piss David off !
XXXX
Kiki
Date: 02/02/14 05:56 am Title: Chapter 10
Hi dear.
Let's do another long analytic review... in which you never answer the few questions I send you :p
- Tom and Bill slowly grow closer, it can be seen in their attitude to each other but also in the public eyes. By the wa, when did their relation officialy display and by who? US Weekly? Nobody seems to question Bill's place by Tom's side!
- The hard discussion about familly was long-awaited. Bill's slowly renewing the contacts with his previous relatives. The good point is Tom's support about it and he lends Bill his force to overcome his fears. When the time comes, Tom will be there to see their reunion and Bill will proudly present him to his parents - maybe as his soon-to-be husband... I hope a proposal before the end of this story, and maybe a bit of marriage to totally quash Bill's fears.
Did Sam answer his brother? Or was/is he angry to Bil for letting him down? Or as Bill thinks, did David completely cut him from his relatives?
- Tom and Bill are great together! Period!
- I love the easy banter they have. I can see they're trully happy and at ease with each other. Despite Bill's previous uneasiness, he has overcome it to completely enjoy this new relationship. They're good for each other and they even haven't taken the last step in the physical side of their relation. They surely will be in perfect unisson once it'll be done.
- Bill has even a new doll. Let's dress Tomi for the red carpet, a new and enjoyable game.... He can't keep his hands and eyes off his boyfriend, it's cute and hot in the same time.
Will Bill go with him for the red carpet and the movie's release? Is it the time for David to come back and try to destroy their happiness? Do you plan a huge drama during the movie? I hope so, considering how long I expect it!!!!!!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: i want a tomi action figure that i can dress up! i will also say that someone does get married before this story is over.
Date: 02/02/14 12:19 am Title: Chapter 10
I love these two more with each h chapter!
But I know drama has to come...
Author's Response: why does everyone keep mentioning drama? *scratches head*
Date: 02/01/14 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
I squealed when I saw an update! Amazing, as usual.
Author's Response: yay for squeals!
Date: 02/01/14 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
cant wait till more
please update soon
Date: 02/01/14 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ooooo totally awesome! I'm sorry my comments are so lame.. XD But in my defence I usually read these pretty late at night so my brain ian't worning quite like it should XD btw. I have no idea why but like half this chapter i read it in my mind with Barney Stinsons voice... Maybe I've been watching too many How i met your mother episodes XD But aaanyway! Awesome chapter. Poor Bill for not being able to keep in touch with his family for a long time and poor Tom for having bad parents :( But yay forthe both of them to hahe each other! Okay I'm gonna go to bed before I write more nonsense XD Good night!! :D
Author's Response: i love how i met your mother! well, i did. now that i know it's the last season i think i'm ready for it to end. anyway, sleep well!