Date: 02/11/14 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nice nice nice!
Author's Response: thanks thanks thanks!
Date: 02/11/14 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
yum yum! hot, hot sex! Me likeeey
Author's Response: hell, i do too!
Date: 02/11/14 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
They're so cute together
Author's Response: i know, right?
Date: 02/11/14 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
maybe when Tom gets better, they can have a session of Bill on top? first time for tom
Author's Response: nope sorry. my tom never bottoms for my bill.
Date: 02/11/14 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry forgot to say have a fantastic vacation!
Author's Response: thanks, but i'm not doing anything special. just a week off from work.
Date: 02/11/14 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ahhh another chapter done and an excellent one to boot! Well this reviewer would like to say this was totally awesome bill/tom sex. I had a slash story that I posted where one of their dogs was named Harley and another one was Helmut. How original eh? I just thought they went together really well. :)
Author's Response: i was thinking of harley and davidson, actually lol
Date: 02/11/14 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
nice :) Bill really takes good carer of Tom - and i mean it in every aspect :)
Author's Response: yes, bill has an excellent bedside manner
Date: 02/10/14 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh you're mean!!!
Of course, this chapter begins well.
- Tom's not too hurt but has a few bruises nonetheless. Nurse Bill will make it better.
I wondered if he would remember what happened or not. Guess I have alle the answers now.
- Bill's always cute. Hurt, bruised, happy, worried, .... He's cute, period again!!!!
- And the cockblocker dog reference.... How could Tom have fogotten this???? So funny!
- But...they both know who make this happened, and can't do a thing to make him pay. How would David pay if you can't prove he made Bu do it? I'm angry!!!!
- Gustav disappointed me. I feared something like that but rather from Natalie. He really wants them to break up? Or is he just worried for his best friend? I thought he was happy for Tom.
-I don't know what to think about Bill's reaction after his eavasdropping. Is he angry? Feeling guilty? Feeling Gus is right? Will he talk about it with Tom later? Or go back to David the next time Tom is alsleep in order to protect him? Sacrifice himself for his love???
Oh by the way..... I simply adore their first "I love you". I'm not sure Tom remembers saying it, but Bill will surely treasure this when he goes back in the evil's clutch. A way to make his soul at peace.
Now I wonder, when they get back home, will they make love? Will Bill "make love" to Tom (being at the receiving end but Tom being hurt would lay with Bill on top of him) as a way to say good bye? I love this idea and the more I think about it, the more it seems possible.
I think next chapter will be a turning point for a few of things: their relation, your plot and the story generally, it will be the Love (yes in capital) before the Confrontation!!
Can't wait to read it... but this time... a few days to wait!!!
Love, Kiki
Author's Response: gustav doesn't really want them to break up, and he does like bill, but he's just overly cautious. best friend ends up in the hospital cuz of a guy, easiest solution is to get rid of the guy. but no, tom isn't about to let bill go. and bill does feel guilty, but more surprised about what gustav said than angry about it. and omg, i went around and around about the first i love you, and at one point i didn't think it would be that great happening in a hospital room. but i think it turned out okay.
Date: 02/10/14 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hi my dear.
Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner, but I was out of town for a few days.
And I returned with 2 chapters to read... AND THIS ONE: OMG!!!!!!!
You're too mean, I knew drama was coming but once more you outdid yourself.
- The beginning was so sweet and hilarious with Bill's fail at his big reveal, and Tom's nervousness about the night. Even Natalie's thoughts about them together was cute. But the best part was... "I'm not acting with him".... OMG, so much in a few words!!!!
- Fanboy, the come back!!!! Bill is now Tom's number one fan, such a enthusiasm is so cute!!!!
- And after.... David. I knew he would be here... And yet you managed to make him threatening and frightening for Bill without really showing him. What an amazing feat.
Bill is scared, upset and Tom in full protecting mode.
- But the threat is put aside and they even think of being frisky together... The last step for them... And you took it from them.
I didn't expect this twist.
So you decided it's Tom who pays.
I don't know how Bill will cope with it... With surely a lot of guilt. Which will lead to making mistakes....
Will Tom wake up soon? Will this assault have consequences for him? Not too hard, I hope? Will Gus or maybe Natalie blame Bill for what happened?
What saddened/angried me the most is, David didn't even have the nerve to do it himself. He's an asshole and a coward!
I can't wait to read the next and.... Oh joy! I actually don't have to wait!!!
So let's see immediately how you torture them after all that.
Love, Kiki.
Author's Response: me? torture? never! glad you liked tom's "i'm not acting with him" line cuz i added it at the last minute. and of course david didn't attack tom personally. tom would probably kick his ass!
Date: 02/09/14 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
I kinda understand Gustav. If my friend was in the same kind of situation as Tom, I would probably say the same thing. But I understand Tom too, 'cause if I was in his shoes... Well.. I wouldn't let Bill go. So I understand both of them but I'm still rooting for Tom! I know Gustav is just worried but I think Tom is doing the right thing. Amazing chapter! And I was sooooo happy when there wasn't anything seriously wrong with Tom! I'm gonna be here, waiting for more >:)
Author's Response: hell, i wouldn't let bill go either!
Date: 02/09/14 10:21 am Title: Chapter 12
So glad Tom is okay!
And yes, of course it's David. And he's not going to give up just like that D: I have a feeling it's gonna be a lot worse!
Awwh, but I love them together, they're so cute! totally cracked up at the "your dog cock blocked us" line. haha XD
Author's Response: well, he did! stupid dog! lol
Date: 02/09/14 01:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Okay I'm starting to hate Gustav. How can you say that when your friend is obviously very happy besides this one little incident? He is a mean person for that and David, you need to die a horrible death and burn in a thousand suns.
Author's Response: i need to start a list of all the ways people want david to die. should make for some interesting reading.
Date: 02/09/14 12:04 am Title: Chapter 12
Bill & Tom really care for each other and I hope Bill over hearing Gustav won't make him leave to keep Tom safe. Loved
Bill watching over Tom at the hospital and Tom making sure someone stayed with Bill. Thank you for the update, love this so much!
Author's Response: part of me worried i was making tom's overprotectiveness just...a little too much. but apparently not, so yay! thanks for reading!
Date: 02/08/14 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this story and being SUCH a bad reviewer. Normally I'm pretty good at reviewing, but I keep reading the updates when I'm too busy to write one but have enough time to read...*sigh* school = lame. But I'm writing one now! Even though it doesn't make up for 10 chapters of no reviews...
It's great that Tom is so confident in his love for Bill, and Gustav is a really caring friend. But I feel so badly for both Bill and Tom because the situation is so tricky. And I don't know what Bill is going to do now that he overheard that conversation. It's not his fault, but it's easy for him to blame himself because of the issues with David. I sense a lot of delicious drama coming...I mean, more than there already is, of course. God, I love this story. You are doing a fantastic job as always!
Author's Response: i too think drama is delicious!
Date: 02/08/14 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww poor Bill Gustav shouldn't of said that how rude haha. I need to know what happens. Its getting super juice nice nice nice. Such an amazing story. I was wondering if i could message you a little story i have been working on? I really admire your writing and to be honest id like your opinion.
Author's Response: wow! i'm flattered! sure, just shoot me an email. addy is in my profile. and thanks for reading!
Date: 02/08/14 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
This was sweet how Bill was babysitting Tom at the hospital. Gustav needs to mind his business. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: well gustav feels that his best friend is his business. i know i wouldn't like seeing my bestie in the hospital cuz of who they were dating. but yeah, gustav pretty much wasted his time even thinking that tom would leave bill.
Date: 02/08/14 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Nice :) that's good nothing to serious happened to Tom but still. Well, maybe Gustav is right that it happened because of Bill but those two have feelings for each other so i doubt that Tom would leave Bill. damn, i guess Bill would do anything - if he could to make sure that nothing wrong would happen to Tom.
Author's Response: sometimes people do crazy things to protect the people they love
Date: 02/08/14 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
I understand why Gustav said what he did but I wish Bill hadn't heard him. I'm afraid that he's going to try to do something himself and that he will get hurt in the process. If he goes back to David just to keep Tom safe I think I will hate you for the rest of my life! I'm happy that Tom is okay now and it was an awww moment when he told Bill he loved him. I'll be watching you so don't you dare let Bill do something rash and stupid! Okay I've said my piece. :)
Author's Response: <.< >.> *feels eyes on me* *is nervous*
Date: 02/08/14 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to more
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 02/07/14 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh no :'( poor tomiii
Author's Response: *hands you tissues*