Date: 02/18/14 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay! Something's wrong with David. I hope it's a f**king heart attack at the bastard dies.
At least if he dies he can't hurt Bill anymore. I think perhaps you are on the road to redeeming yourself.
Great chapter and I shall be salivating for the next one. I don't think I'll need to go to bed and cry this time. :)
Author's Response: on the road agaaaaiiinnnn...just can't wait to...oh, sorry. *ahem* sadly, david does not die. but yay for redeeming myself!
Date: 02/18/14 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
AAHHH FR;AFUSIUASHODASUH UPDATE SOON OH GOD I NEED IT
Author's Response: whoa! calm down!
Date: 02/18/14 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 15
No no no Bill has to go back to tom. He can't stay with that as whole. I hope Tom saves the day.
Author's Response: it's super tom!
Date: 02/18/14 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
YYYYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS........!!!!!!!!!!
Karma's a motherfucking bitch David ........hhahahhahahahha XD DNA that was AWESOME ........=D
Author's Response: *celebrating with you*
Date: 02/18/14 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
please update asap
Author's Response: saturday good?
Date: 02/18/14 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ahhh!!! Hurry, quickly, I'm hardly breathing here!!! I need more!! And I love you for making him stop breathing ;)
Author's Response: *administers cpr...to you, not david*
Date: 02/18/14 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lol
I can only hope for a quick update lol u got me wanting more now
Author's Response: saturday's as quick as it'll get. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/18/14 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg did David just have a stroke or a heart attack?! I didn't see that coming. I'm really glad Tom isn't mad at Bill for what happened; he seems really understanding. But I feel so badly for poor Bill. I absolutely love this story!!!!! And I hope your day gets better now :)
Author's Response: hmmm...maybe one or the other. and tom does understand. he's not happy about it, but he understands.
Date: 02/18/14 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 14
No! *storms dramatically out of the room in anger*
Author's Response: please come baaaaccckkkkk!
Date: 02/18/14 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow, this was intriguing. I wonder what happened to David. Somebody poisoned him?
Author's Response: nope, not poison
Date: 02/17/14 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh the things we do to protect the ones we love. Bill is very brave. I can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 02/17/14 12:24 am Title: Chapter 14
:'( thats simply horrible ... How can someone do this!!! I cant wait to have little Tom POV ... Omg im so sad! I just want to know Whats going to happen next! I love your story :D
Author's Response: quite a change from one chapter to the next, huh? thanks for reading!rn
Date: 02/17/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 13
Yyyyyeeeeaaaahhh!!!! I loved it all the way!! Perfect first sex :D they are just too cute together! Cant wait for more :)
Date: 02/16/14 09:54 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow ok, still loving it though!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 02/16/14 04:06 am Title: Chapter 14
Can you kill David off? Like now? Cuz holy Jesus baby that chapter and that poor excuse fo a man pisses me off royaly. But I love your way of writing so please do continue this fine piece of art.
Author's Response: sorry. david survives. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/16/14 12:39 am Title: Chapter 14
Please kill David...like now. He is a douche! How dare he treat Bill like that! I just know Tom will see the news of the marriage but I hope he won't be discouraged too long and give up. Hopefully Bill can get a message to Tom or Tom will go get Bill because he knows why he done what he did but he isn't healed yet and they could hurt him really bad this time! Omg...my heart is broken...update soon please- I'll beg.
Author's Response: *picks up pieces of your heart* aw, i'm sorry! does it help if i tell you that tom doesn't get hurt anymore?
Date: 02/15/14 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 14
sighs
please update asap
Author's Response: tuesday work for you? lol thanks for reading!
Date: 02/15/14 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
*extra dramatic face*
Author's Response: yeeeeeeeeeessssssssss!
Date: 02/15/14 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 14
Q.Q
Author's Response: i'm...not sure how to respond to that...lol
Date: 02/15/14 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
No no no no I can't believe it !
Ugh I hate david sooo much, and poor little Bill :(
Author's Response: the line to kill/torture david forms to your left