Date: 02/14/14 06:26 pm Title: Broken
I think Bill is alive, at least I hope he is
Author's Response: Maybe he is...i'm working on it :) <3
Date: 02/14/14 03:03 am Title: Broken
I used to read but now i quit. The style is bad and story makes no sense. Sorry i Washington so hopefull
Author's Response: Thank you sweety for ur opinion. I have loads of things going on about the story. I appreciated it.
Date: 02/07/14 11:16 am Title: In the loving memory
Hey,
I like your idea and it will be nice to see what you plan in the next chapters. I would only ask you to work a little on your writing style. You should stop to begin every sentence with he/she/it or Bill/Tom. That really bothers me a little, because it disturbs the reading.
Date: 02/01/14 04:46 pm Title: Feelings and Bidding
I hope those two weeks in jail pass quickly.
Date: 01/21/14 07:03 pm Title: Wrong turn
I would have wet my pants if I were Tom lol
Author's Response: I would faint n get die if i were near bill:p hhehe
Date: 01/01/14 07:18 pm Title: Party On my Mind
nice :) can't wait for another one
Author's Response: hexy 92 danke for reading...will upload today :D
Date: 01/01/14 03:37 pm Title: Party On my Mind
Can't wait!
Date: 01/01/14 01:26 am Title: Party On my Mind
I DO like this. Bill seems so mysterious...I'm looking forward to your next chapters :)