Date: 12/17/16 08:54 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this
Date: 02/05/14 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
very nice story, I like it how you portrayed Bills personality!
Date: 12/27/13 08:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh i forgot to review. i read it and then i had to run to the bus. i liked this :) it was a bit unrealistic, but its a story so it doesnt matter :) and i'm really happy bill got tom out of it all in the end and hopefully they can live a happy life now ^_^
Date: 12/25/13 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
I find this story really unrealistic, but once u get over that, it's not bad. I'm glad they ended up together in the end, it was cute. :)
Date: 12/24/13 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL Tom really wasn't built for the job. Makes you wonder how he lasted as long as he did. Good think he had Bill to save his ass. :)
Date: 12/24/13 10:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww. I liked the kissing scenes ;)
Date: 12/23/13 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh! i loved this first chapter, we dont know much about tom (yet?) but i like him already, he seems to be a good guy that happened to end up with the wrong people.. hmm im really curious about next chapter but unfortunately i will have to read it later, off to work now :P but well done so far!
Date: 12/23/13 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2
interesting story. glad bill saved tom.