Date: 01/17/14 02:03 am Title: Card 2 - The High Priestess
You can't leave us like this! Update soon, please ^^
Already wondering how on earth Bill's gonna get through with his lips sewn shut and Tom with no eyesight.. Hmmm...
Date: 01/15/14 03:51 am Title: Card 2 - The High Priestess
I love it! can't wait to read more!
Date: 01/14/14 12:12 pm Title: Card 2 - The High Priestess
I got it.......... it's see no evil, speak no evil, hear no evil ......took me a second to catch that but I thought it was genius =D can't wait for more
Date: 01/12/14 07:13 pm Title: Card 2 - The High Priestess
Post more please. I can't get enough
Date: 01/02/14 10:49 pm Title: Card 1 - The Magician
PLEASE POST ANOTHER SOON OMG PLEASE!
Date: 01/02/14 01:07 am Title: Card 0 - The Fool
It would be my pleasure ....sure you could use it would be awesome if you did
I am now excited...for that one shot
Date: 12/31/13 09:46 am Title: Card 1 - The Magician
I really like this so far. I can't imagine how horrible that situation would be, but it's so great to read. Keep up the great work! :)
Date: 12/31/13 08:21 am Title: Card 1 - The Magician
Oh my, this caught me by surprise. I love it so far - although I'm worried this story will gross me out at some point just like the movies x'D but in a good way though. I love how the first chapter starts with -part of- the aftermath, makes me even more curious. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12/30/13 08:59 pm Title: Card 1 - The Magician
Oooooohhhhhhhh ...!!!!! Can the romantic concept be twincest PLEASE ...... I like the plot of the story but in the romantic structure you can have the twins heal each other and realize that they can't live without the other and no matter what they will forever be together and that was the reason they were chosen to test the theory out and .take them understand that
Author's Response: I'm realllly sorrrry to disappoint, but I don't really plan to have a romantic concept here... Sorry :( I'd change it, but I actually have this story all planned out... The best I can do is write at some parts so that they seem very close and dependent on each other, but you'll have to squint to see the actual romance...
rnBut I do really like how you pictured the possible romance aspect. Is it okay for me to keep it in mind for a (separate) oneshot in a similar setting?
Date: 12/07/13 09:26 pm Title: Card 0 - The Fool
is this based on Saw? ive just gotten into the movies and just finished the 5th one last night!!!! XD
Date: 12/07/13 03:35 pm Title: Card 0 - The Fool
This is really interesting. I've never watched SAW really because it terrifies me, but I'm okay with reading things and imagining them myself in my mind...I just can't watch it on a movie screen for some reason. I really like how you're delving into Bill's feelings in the aftermath; I can't even imagine how horrible that experience would be. And of course, I'm glad they survived, which is one of the many reasons why I'll read it :)
This was really well written, and I like how you started like this. I'm guessing much of the rest will be flashbacks, and that makes for a really intriguing and gripping story. I'm looking forward to what you have planned!
Date: 12/07/13 01:35 pm Title: Card 0 - The Fool
Very well written. It seems to me that you really know how it would effect a person in that situation, and you take that knowledge and put it in Bills perspective. It also seems he is on edge, very very much so. I hope the next chapter will take us back to the time that this all happened. I'm definitely intrigued by the banner and concept of this story. I will be following it! Best of luck in updating, because I want more! :)