Ah, Bill, RUN! The poor thing has no idea he was being watched...omg I'm nervous now. I hope he doesn't get killed. I know the killer/(Tom?) falls in love, but that doesn't necessarily bode well for little Bill. I'm excited about this though. This was a really good start :)

Author's Response: No worries! Bill will be just fine! He is the main character throughout the story. I won't reveal the killer until it is found in a chapter. Its good that you like it, thanks for reading! :D