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Reviewer: Annie Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/14 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

Omg i was just thinking about this story yesterday! And now you updated it :3 was this the last chapter?

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/14 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

Are you super busy?

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/14 03:25 am Title: Chapter 7

Aw poor Bill. Anis shouldn't have been so harsh with him for trying to fix something that was Anis' fault to begin with...though I suspect he was just yelling because he felt so bad that Bill felt like he had to blow a guy to save Anis. He's really not going to be pleased when he eventually finds out what happened with Fler...

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/14 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 6

Happy New Year :) I thought you forgot about this.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/14 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yay you updated! I was missing this story. I feel badly for Bill because he's going to feel so guilty even though he did it for him and Anis...and I know Anis is going to find out because they always do. I'm also not sure Fler is going to keep up his end of the bargain and not proposition Bill for sex again...great chapter!

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/13 09:12 am Title: Chapter 5

Very nice and smooth reading. I'd like you to relate how Bill/Bu met and Bill getting pregnant :) like a flashback.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/13 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

I loved this chapter. It was really sweet how much Anis loves Bill and lose his cool. They're an adorable couple.

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/13 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Nice, I love this story, I like that Anis fight for Bill, and I love that Bill is a parent who care about his daughter

Reviewer: stilldoll29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/13 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love it! Can't wait for more chapters :D

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/13 12:22 am Title: Chapter 3

Bill is so smooth. That was such a subtle and clever way to promote Bushido. They're such a cute couple, too!

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/13 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

As a huge Billshido fan, thanks so much for writing this pairing. This story is progressing quite nicely.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/13 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like this chapter better! The other one was too much: the outfit and stuff to go pick up your kid at school. No no. No mother would do that especially if they love their kids

Reviewer: Annie Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/13 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow you're a writing machine! :D I love the ideas of you're stories and I'm loving this one already! :)

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/13 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it a billshido at last !! yeah I'm hooked doll

Author's Response:

i love billshido!

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