Date: 12/11/13 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I guessed what was going on from the start, but i still loved this, so sweet and sad..... but sweet.
Date: 11/28/13 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
very beautiful and sad story! I'm usually not reading stories with major character death arning, but I'm glad that I've read this one. You're so talented!
Date: 11/24/13 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
This left me breathless!
Date: 11/21/13 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Sad, beautiful and i love it. Thank you~
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 11/20/13 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dear, I love you, but not right now coz you made me cry. I’ve always thought that the most terrible thing that can happen to a couple in love, is death. Aaawww Tomi is an angel now, but but but. I run to cry alone u.u
Author's Response: *hands you tissues*
Date: 11/20/13 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great moment in time that you captured here! It really makes me wonder what happened to Bill. Breakup w his first girlfriend? I'm assuming that the twins are not in any inappropriate relationship, but you do a great job toeing that line, w showing their love being so deep... It seems like only a matter of time; I love it! You write well, and I love your word choice. :) Well done.
Date: 11/20/13 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
While I think this story is somewhat bittersweet in it's nature, for which I give you kudos, it's actually pretty standard (and nice to readers) to warn for death fic/death of a main character in the summary and/or tags. D: Very not cool to stumble across that without expecting it, especially since many people purposely avoid death fic because it's triggery or just not what they want to read, full stop.
Author's Response: honestly, didn't even think about it. my apologies to anyone who was bothered by it though. i was thinking it was more like my unbreak my heart story, where geo was dead before the story started so i didn't even add any kind of death warning.
Date: 11/19/13 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
So happy to see a story from you! Beautiful yet heartbreaking, well done.
Author's Response: happy to have a story! thanks for reading!
Date: 11/19/13 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG Not what I was expecting at all. So sad but so awesome. Loved it. :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 11/19/13 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwh, so sweet, yet so sad! love seeing new stories from you! ^^
Author's Response: believe me, i miss having something new to share. my next chaptery story is coming along quite nicely, so hopefully it won't be too much longer before i'm here regularly again.
Date: 11/19/13 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh.
I didn't need a sad story after the day I had.
It's after the "I love you" that I started feeling someting wrong, it was past a argument or a wrong doing from Tom.....
Why were you so mean???? I can't bear deathfics!! And no warning!!!!
But it's still well written, like you always manage to dot it. You left us in doubt until the very last sentence. So sad, everytime I read such a plot, it's always Tom who "left" his twin, Why???
Love. Kiki
Author's Response: i'm glad you still had doubt up til the last sentence. totally what i was going for. but so sorry i made your bad day worse! go read something happy now!
Date: 11/19/13 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really nice and sweet ;)
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 11/19/13 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1
So sad but beautiful. I'm glad to see you posting again :)
Author's Response: i'm glad to be posting again! hopefully i'll have more to share soon!
Date: 11/19/13 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
awwww that was sweet. Sad but so sweet!!!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 11/19/13 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, this was so sad. But I loved it.
Author's Response: thanks very much!