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Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/13 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was fucking sexy. Can't wait to see how this goes! ;)

Reviewer: Gaya3395 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/13 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh.. Sounds good! I'm here waiting for the next update :)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/13 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

nice beginning :) and i guess the promise would be broken

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/13 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

What an awful language and way of thinking I think it is really offending

Author's Response:

Well, to be honest, this is the idea, the person I was inspired by to make Tom's character speaks like that in real life, trust me, I don't think like this, but it's part of the story.

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