There's a few typos... And you called Billie "Anabelle" twice.... I'm guessing this used to belong to a different fandom? Unless I'm really confused. I didn't find any crack in the fic, it was just, uh, lame. Sorry. And too obvious when inserting unnecessary background. More subtlety would go a long way in this fic, and would make the surprise ending a bit more meaningful. I don't think all hope is lost, but IMO this fic needs a partial rewrite. Sorry for the crappy review. :(

Author's Response: Hi!rnNo, this fic was not written for another fandom, Billie is short of Anabelle. I'll fix the typos, and thank you for your review. :)

i like it and can't wait to read another chapter :)