Date: 07/27/24 04:52 am Title: THE GIVER
I was gonna compliment this fic, well I’ll do it anyways I really liked it, but it irks me reading the comments about how “bill is not pretty anymore and Tom is chubby and prettier then bill” Uhm.. especially when I see the date of the comments around 2013-2014 when they were both still slender and VERY pretty and gorgeous; they can’t NOT be pretty with the eyes and faces that they have and their slender forms and glimmering eyes and cute teeth and smiles… And now year 2024 they are super pretty still Tom with his long and pretty curls and black outfits and glowing from his and bills love and Bill with his long hair and similar style again as when he was younger and also that he is now almost exactly as slim as he was when he has dreads.. They will always be prettier then any girl, I would love for them to either trim their beards very short more often or shave it completely sometimes so we get to see and appreciate their perfect jaws and facial features fully.. 😍 And I wish Tom wore his hair in a man bun or did dreads again 😇
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) I hope you're not too disappointed by whatever old comments you found because I can't even find what you're quoting. All I can say is perhaps we were chatting about how during that era Bill went from "pretty" to "handsome", which are just different types of attractiveness. The twins will likely always be attractive, no matter style they choose. As for their breads, I think about 80% of this fandom agrees: please shave! hahaha
Date: 04/07/15 03:09 am Title: THE GIVER
Well you know I love Bill in panties, and the idea of Tom buying them for him is SUPER hot. Nice story :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you, I'm a sucker for Bill in panties too, hehe. Also, I'm a big fan of yours, and your beta help back in 2008 on a fic was super useful. You will always be one of my fav ppl. Thanks again.
Date: 02/03/15 01:38 am Title: THE GIVER
This story was awesome, i love bill in panties too. I just came back to this fandom after a few years not looking at it and was so sad at the changes in bill an toms looks bill used to be so pretty :( and I miss toms dreads
Author's Response: I'm super happy you liked this!! :) I totally had a crush on pretty!Bill when I wrote this, so it's not my only fic where Bill is "pretty". I think it'll take some getting used to for me to write about new handsome!Bill. Lol. As for Tom... I miss his dreads too, but the way he wears it now, just regular shoulder-length is great too IMO. I prefer both the twins with long hair -- that's pretty much my only requisite for them to be drool-worthy in my eyes, lol. If you liked this -- I tried to make it lighthearted fun and some smut and it turned out to be one of my favs -- you'll find a few more of mine along the same lines, just with a touch more plot most times. Thanks again! :)
Date: 08/06/14 11:41 pm Title: THE GIVER
Bill IS still pretty and he ALWAYS will be!!! It goes way beyond the makeup and long hair. He has those amazing eyes no matter what, beautiful smile, perfect nose ;). I'm not getting mad here just talking truth. And truth be told, story was damn sexy! :D
Author's Response: First, I'm glad u liked the fic! I personally love this fic of mine, so thank you. :) Second, I don't deny that Bill is still somewhat handsome, but IMO, he's not "pretty" anymore... and I'm completely biased for the "pretty" boys. That's just me. It is what it is, people change clothing and styles, and others (like me) have to get over it. lol.
Date: 03/30/14 05:41 pm Title: THE GIVER
That was so hot! Bill with dreads in my opinion was the time when he was most beautiful. Very well done, I loved how it built starting from a joke and got serious. In the end they was in love. There was so much desire in the sex scene, you really have a talent for it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your lovely review took me by surprise, just a happy gift sitting in my inbox, and I appreciate your kind words. :) PS- I think Bill with dreads was best also. :) :)
Date: 11/06/13 07:01 pm Title: THE GIVER
I love this kind of fanfics so much! It keeps me dreaming and helps me to pretend that Bill didn't change that much and is still as pretty as was in 2009, just like in your story, and not this stranger that I don't like at all. Right now only such stories are still keeping me in this fandom. I really hope you will write more!
Btw, I too love Michael Jackson with my whole heart, since 1990, and can't accept his death. Excuse me please writing about it in a comment.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel the same way, so that's why in my fics Bill is always pretty. I only write the kind of fics I love to read- the classic twin stuff. :) As for MJ- I don't mind at all. I'm still in love, and still completely heartbroken over his death. I've been a fan all my life, it's hard not having him around. He touched lives, so I understand how u feel. Hey, since you brought it up, I'm actually in the middle of writing my first real MJ fic. The crap MJ fics I wrote as a kid don't count, lol. I was wondering if you could crit/comment/feedback on how to make it happen most appropriately. It's supposed to be realistic; Paris in her mid-20's rediscovers her dad. There's lots of flashbacks and stories of the past. Trying to not make a mockery of his passing, but also trying to add the risque of fanfiction... tough balance and I'd love to know what someone else thinks. It's hard finding MJ fans that also read incest fanfic, lol. Email me? ema.dan@live.som
Date: 11/04/13 02:54 pm Title: THE GIVER
I enjoyed Bill in panties! Very sexy story. ♥
Author's Response: Tehehe, I know right? Who can resist Bill in panties? lol. Thank you very much. I'm a fan of your writing also, so that means a lot.
Date: 11/02/13 07:11 pm Title: THE GIVER
Oh thank god I'm not the only one who misses pretty Bill. And pretty Bill in frilly panties given to him by a pre-chubby Tom? Sigh....Can we go back a couple years?
Author's Response: I miss pretty Bill so much. :( Tom is actually hotter than him these days, IMO. That should be against the law. Let's go back in time together!! HAHAHA.
Date: 11/02/13 11:39 am Title: THE GIVER
yummy :D so hot! loved it!!! *u*
Author's Response: YAY!! Thank you! Glad u liked it. :)
Date: 11/01/13 09:38 pm Title: THE GIVER
cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/01/13 12:56 pm Title: THE GIVER
Yummy! I loved this! It was supersexy!!
Author's Response: Hahaha, I think you're the first person to ever describe one of my fics as Yummy. Thanks a ton! :)
Date: 11/01/13 12:52 pm Title: THE GIVER
loved loved LOVED THIS!
Author's Response: Tehehe. :) Thank you. Super glad to hear it. :)
Date: 11/01/13 11:43 am Title: THE GIVER
I don’t tend to read kinky fics, but something makes me try it and I loved it. The way Tom started to buy new panties, expecting to see them on Bill was aaawww and the lemon scene was great. Thank you for your story.
Author's Response: Well thank you for trying. "Trying is the first step towards failure." -Homer Simpson. JK, lol. Glad you liked it! I aim to please. :)
Date: 11/01/13 11:16 am Title: THE GIVER
It's amazing what a hot pair of panties can do! Loved it!
Author's Response: Woohoo!! Awesome, thank you! :)