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Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 11:59 am Title: Chapter 6

I need more .........I truly love your fic .... update soon please me like possessive Tom makes him seem more hot then ever STUPID Andreas how dare he try and steal Bill his Tom's

Author's Response: xD Glad you're enjoying dear. Your enthusiasm is much appreciated.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 04:08 am Title: Prolouge

Oh, by the way ... Chapter 5 and then Chapter 7? You wrote the false Numbers or is there one chapter missing?

Author's Response: Oops! It's either a typo (I was roleplaying and watching the shining while talking to my mom at 11 something when this occurred so yeah) or yes, there is a chapter missing. I shall be a-fixing that right now!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 04:05 am Title: Prolouge

Awww, Bill was worried that Tom has already his mate :D I would be happy when I could read today more chapters. So please be a nice author, okay? xD :D

I like your story. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: Well, I'm posting them as fast as I can. xD Bill doesn't know Tom's a werewolf btw so yeah... He has reason to worry as well. Tom's letting him sweat. Naught alpha!

You're welcome and thanks!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 03:53 am Title: Chapter 5

Awww, it was so sweet, when Tom smelled on Bills neck. I like this dominantacting. :D

I'm glad I can read now one more chapter! Thanks for posting so fast.

Author's Response: Hee hee ;) He IS a werewolf! I am trying to post fast since it was suppose to all be up three days ago.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 03:39 am Title: Chapter 4

They aging slower? That is something that I could need xD

Author's Response: Hehe EVERYONE could use that my dear.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 03:32 am Title: Chapter 3

I didn't ask for spoiler :) And I didn't want one. That would break the excitement about the next chapters :)

A really great chapter! I like it sooo much and I love creaturefics. Especilly with werewolfes. So I'm really looking forward this story. That Tom sniffed someone else ... maybe Bill has a boyfriend or girlfriend? I doubt, that Tom would be happy about that ...

Author's Response: Hee hee, exactly! ;) Thanks! I'm traditionally a vampire fan my self but ya know... Ooh no he won't! ;)

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/13 12:02 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, Bill likes Tom...

I like your superfast updates!

Author's Response: Hee hee ;)

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

I love all the updatesss :333

Author's Response: Well, it was suppose to be up three days ago!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom should invite Bill for a date. What is he waiting for?

Author's Response: Well, it's not that simple. Besides, I really didn't think about it and he's so full of nerves and excitement, he probably didn't either!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

can't wait for the update this is captivating. thanx for updating so fast

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and updating as fast as I can so heehee

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

Is Simone Bill's mother? Would be ironic.

Author's Response: No she is not. Bill's parents are dead as well as Tom's. She's in there for some extra typing and because I'll use her for the other characters to bounce off of in the next few books.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Cool story! Very fascinating. Update soon!

Author's Response: Already got Chapter 5 being validated as we speak ^&^

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 05:22 pm Title: Prolouge

Haha, okay.
Englishc verstehen kann ich ziemlich gut, nur im schreiben bin ich noch recht unsicher :)
10 Kapitel? Da bin ich gespannt. Ebenso wie auf die Fortsetzung! Das jetzige Kapitel werde ich aber erst morgen lesen. Ich muss jetzt erst mal ins Bett. ;)

Hope you understand that. I write english in my next review!

Author's Response: Well, I speak more french then German but hey(!) isn't that what google's for? xD No spoilers ;) Sorry. :P

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 06:30 am Title: Chapter 2

Awww, how sweet they are, when they are teasing.
Tom oblivious like Bill not just because he is his mate. And it seems that bill liked him too.

Wondeful chapter!

Author's Response: Danke! ;)

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I would've love a longer chapter, but this short was really good! I hope its Bill, that talked to tom now?

(sorry for my bad english, I'm from germany, so my english is not that good :( )

Oh please - not a cliffhanger chapter! Please a happyend? It can be a bit open, but not too much???? Would like that ...

How many chapters do you have already? ( or how many chapters it would be with the cliffhanger ending?)

Author's Response: rnDas ist in Ordnung. Mein Deutsch ist nicht so toll. Sie sprechen Englisch, und ich werde in Deutsch antworten, k?rnrnIch habe zehn Kapiteln und tippte das ganze Buch fertig. Ich hoffe, Sie genießen den Rest davon;)rnrnJa, es hat ein Happy End, aber definantly eine Öffnung für ein zweites Buch, das ich irgendwann schreiben wird. Dennoch habe ich ein Riese wieder so yeah einloggen ... kann einige Zeit dauern.


rnrnThat is alright. My German is not that great. You speak english and I'll respond in german, k?rnrnI have ten chapters typed up and the entire book finished. I hope you enjoy the rest of it ;)rnrnYes, it has a happy ending but definantly an opening for a second book which I will write at some point. Still, I have a giant back log so yeah... may take some time.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/13 05:45 am Title: Prolouge

Oh I love creature fic's so much. The prolouge sounds really good!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/13 02:26 am Title: Prolouge

Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh....!!!!!!!!!!! Me likey .... can't wait for the next chapter. :-) tracking your story

Author's Response: Hee hee, thanks! Will be up after Time for Time tomorrow (also known as Saturday school)

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